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Mesmerized part 4
Alice
Right then, kissing Dana, I was in heaven. Nothing in my whole life had ever felt so wonderful, I worried that it was just an amazing dream that I would wake up from at any moment. But I could feel her tongue exploring my mouth, entangled with mine, and I could feel her perfect warm cheeks beneath the palms of my hands. This was definitely real and I couldn’t believe it. A small moan came from Dana and I put my arms around her shoulders and pulled her even closer to me, so that there was practically no space between us and her breasts pushed up against mine. I felt Dana’s hand wander from on my back to the front of my body and she gripped my tit firmly, causing me to moan.
That was when I finally ran out of breath and felt the need to come up for air. I really didn’t want to end this glorious moment but something told me we had to actually talk about what was going on. I cupped her face again and pulled away. I stood back a little and looked at Dana, discovering that she looked as shocked as I felt. I didn’t know what to say to her, there were so many questions I wanted to ask I just didn’t know where to start.
“Dana, I…” Still I was speechless, and it looked as if Dana was too.
This was ridiculous we couldn’t just stand there in silence staring at each other. “That was…wow. You have no idea how long I have wanted to do that but I never thought you would be the one kissing me first! What….” I struggled to find the right words “What brought that on, was it a spur of the moment thing or…what?” I saw Dana swallow and she looked nervous.
“No, it wasn’t a spur of the moment thing Alice, I’ve wanted to do that for so long too, I didn’t think there was any chance of you feeling the same way though” Dana looked at me and waited for me to answer, like what she had just said was really meant to be a question, asking if I do in fact the feel the same way. I was totally prepared to answer with the truth.
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(33 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Just found your fanfic and am deeply impressed – keep it up.
I like where you are taking this…Cute when they came out of the bathroom…Looking fwd to seeing how you develop this…Keep Up The Good Work!
Aww I could so picture Alice mumbling that last sentence at the side of her mouth. This is really cute, keep going :)
excellent, this is really sweet, and I like Dana’s vulnerability combined with her going for what she wants. I’m staying tuned…!
too cute
I could picture that too De_leish_ous. That was so Alice :) Enjoyed it very much!