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Mesmerized part 4
“I do” I paused as we stood there looking at each other. “I feel the same way completely”.
We stood in silence for a few more moments before simultaneously moving towards each other again for a second kiss. This kiss showed the same passion, if not more, as the first. I could not get enough of this woman.
Dana
I couldn’t get my head around the fact that here I was, kissing Alice Pieszecki, my breathtakingly beautiful best friend and the woman I was completely in love with. I had thought it wasn’t possible to love Alice any more, but at that moment I was more in love with her than I had ever been. What amazed me more was that she had just told me that she has feelings for me too, something that I had never thought would happen, not in a million years. I don’t think I have ever been happier in my entire life.
Alice’s hand found my breast and her thumb rubbed against my nipple, which was definitely erect beneath my Fila top and sports bra. I heard myself moan and I was fully aware of the warm dampness between my legs. I wanted Alice there and then, but I knew that it would not be the right thing to do.
I broke apart from her and put my arms around her waist.”You have no idea how much I want you” I kissed her again “but I want to do this properly. I can’t risk messing it up, not after I have wanted you for so long. Which is why, Miss Pieszecki, I would like you to accompany me to dinner tomorrow night. What do you think?” Suddenly I was aware that I was maybe assuming a bit too much, I didn’t know if Alice really did want to date me. “That is…if you want” I felt my cheeks go red.
Alice flashed me her adorable smile “You mean like a date?”
“Yeah, like a date” I grinned at her and planted another quick kiss on her gorgeous lips.
“I’d love to” she said, cupping my face and kissing me again. Her tongue slipped into my mouth and our kiss got heated. When we had to come up for air again we were both looking very flushed. “Right, we’d better go before I regret doing the right thing!” I grabbed her hand and led her out of the bathroom, trying to sort my messed up hair as we walked.
As we emerged out of the bathroom I released Alice’s hand and we both went to sit down in the places we had left. I was so happy; I was beaming as I glanced across to her, and she returned my look with a small grin. Suddenly I realized how quiet it was and when I looked up I saw that all of our friends were looking at us with puzzled and confused frowns. They had obviously sensed something was up as I had gone into the bathroom very upset and had returned, along with Alice, grinning. I tried desperately to think of something to say to avoid an interrogation, but failed to come up with anything.
“Ok you guys I’m gonna go and train a bit more” I figured making an excuse to leave would be one way of avoiding any more of the ‘what’s going on?’ looks I was getting from each of my friends, Shane in particular. I was beginning to feel very uncomfortable.
Alice looked over to me and widened her eyes, a sign that she wasn’t feeling particularly comfortable either and didn’t appreciate me leaving.
“Alice don’t you have to go to the office?” I made a desperate attempt to come up with an excuse to get her out of the situation too.
“Um, yeah that’s right I do, I’d better go too” Alice lifted herself out of her seat quickly, obviously as eager to get out as I was.
“Ok, see you” I gave all of my friends a wave and turned without waiting for a reaction.
“Bye” Alice came up beside me and we walked out of The Planet together, leaving our friends with their mouths open in a stunned silence.
“See you tomorrow, I’ll pick you up at 8” Alice said to me in a whisper out of the side of her mouth before she hurried off to the right and I went left.
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(33 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Just found your fanfic and am deeply impressed – keep it up.
I like where you are taking this…Cute when they came out of the bathroom…Looking fwd to seeing how you develop this…Keep Up The Good Work!
Aww I could so picture Alice mumbling that last sentence at the side of her mouth. This is really cute, keep going :)
excellent, this is really sweet, and I like Dana’s vulnerability combined with her going for what she wants. I’m staying tuned…!
too cute
I could picture that too De_leish_ous. That was so Alice :) Enjoyed it very much!