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Previously
“Good, then I say the two of you should accidentally run into each other tomorrow morning, maybe at the park across the street. What do you think?”
“Sure, but I’m not setting my alarm, so don’t expect this run in to happen too early. Maybe about 11?” Alice asked, before letting anyone reply she turned to Dana and added, “Don’t think this changes anything. It doesn’t and any reconciliation we put on for this chick isn’t real. Just make sure you remember that.”
“OK” was all Dana dared reply. After Alice left, Dana shook her head and looked at Shane, “Do you have any idea just how ugly it’s going to be tomorrow?”
“Yes I do Dane.”
“I guess I’m supposed to say thanks, but right about now, I don’t feel like thanking you. I’m sure I will if it works.” Dana said dejected and dreading the next morning.
“That’s fine. I’m not asking for any thank you’s, just for this bullshit to end.” What Shane didn’t say was that she was also hoping that by forcing Dana and Alice to actually do this, she would be forcing a conversation that Alice would be too hurt to have and Dana would be too scared to instigate. Maybe, if they really have the venue to get it all out and truly have the fight they need to get past this, Alice will be wrong, the reconciliation will be real, even if not immediately, it will give them the chance for it to one day be real.
Drowning 35
Dana didn’t get much sleep. The idea that she would have the chance to talk to Alice about this mess made her happy, really happy. However, the idea that this was going to be a stages fight, meaning that Alice would get all of her venom out scared Dana, really scared her. This back and forth between the happiness and the fear didn’t really do much to help Dana’s brain slow long enough to sleep. She spent the evening in that uncomfortable place in bed, trying to keep her eyes shut, hoping that if shut, sleep would finally befall her, but realizing that all of the turmoil in her head and in her heart just wouldn’t allow it. At 6:30 she gave up the forced attempt at slumber and changed into some work out clothes.
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(43 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I love this story. Any chance of an update soon? Please?
this is my first time to leave comment coz i’m very desperate… i dont know if lucia can actually read this… but if not, anyone know her pls give my thoughts…lucia… you know know how happy iam with your stories… ive been reading this since it started… and i lose track of it coz the next story is too long to come out and went busy at my work too… ive read your 5 times … after a few months i read it again and again… then i went working… i know it doesnt matter… then i noticed its been months… i forget the title… what i did was leave a comment in one of the fic… but no body answer whats the title of your story… i write telling them the story ive read.. but with no luck. i began reading each fan fic from the updates to the last digit of pag3 77… to look for your stories… for 5 days i didnt sleep that much to find your stories again and to read it, that brings a smile on my face… always… i really like your story… please continue this …. pls… thank u
Good job getting them to talk Shane!
Great to see this story updated – as usual, top quality stuff!
wow, i cant believe ive missed this story this entire time. i just went back and read the last few chapters, which were all very good. but this one was truly excellent. i cant wait for the next, pps!
Yes! Too Cute! Dana will have some making up to do…PPS
That was great Shane’s plan worked perfect
this is great but what will this person do when they get to the hotel was that shane or someone else can’t wait to find out please post soon great update love it as always
you really wrapped that all together well. good job. the fighting was really intense and the makeup was super cute. i am scared of that crazy stalker though. post soon and once again – thanks for not bailing on us. also – are you updating the christmas one soon? ;)
How did i miss this!? i’ve been waitng (not so patiently) and it slipped right by me. It was worth the wait Lucia. That was wonderful- i’ve wondered how you were going to make me (and Alice) understand the Why’s of it… both the explaination and Dana’s unfolding of her feelings were so natural and true to her character… they are both heartbreaking in this scene. thanks.