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“Thank you, Al. I really appreciate this.”
“Dana, you’re wasting time, nine minutes, forty five seconds.”
Dana looked at Alice with obvious fear then dropped her eyes to the ground, “OK. I don’t really know where to start this, Al. In all the years we’ve been together, I just never thought we’d be having a conversation like this. I don’t know how to start.”
“Fine, I’ll start. Because you know what Dane, in all of these years, I never thought this is the where we would be and I certainly didn’t think that this was a conversation that we would ever have to have. But guess what, you put us here. So if you can’t come up with where to start, I will. I’ll make it simple. Why?”
“Why?” Dana parroted back, adding to Alice’s growing frustration.
“Yes, Dana. Why? Why did you kiss her? Why would you risk what we have? Why would you lie to me? Why would you hold our relationship and our life with so little regard? So yes Dane, tell me why?”
Dana sat for a moment thinking before replying. She had rehearsed this so many times during her sleepless night, but somehow sitting here with Alice, words were failing her. She knew that she needed to do this well. It could easily be her one and only time to explain things to Alice and she really didn’t want to fuck it up.
“Tick tock Dana. Do you want to explain or not?”
“Yes, sorry Alice, I want to explain. I just don’t think it’s as simple as you’re making it out to be.” Dana replied meekly.
“If I have it wrong, then explain it. I promise you, I would love a different explanation from the ones I’ve had in my head over the last forty eight hours.”
“It isn’t as simple as why I would risk us or why I had so little regard for our life. That is the furthest thing from the truth.” Dana briefly looked up at Alice and saw the anger in her eyes. Dana’s limited confidence was shot instantly and her voice became small as she continued. “I was scared and overwhelmed and I did a stupid thing.”
Alice jumped to her feet, “That’s your big explanation? That’s what you just had to tell me? Are you kidding me Dane?”
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I love this story. Any chance of an update soon? Please?
this is my first time to leave comment coz i’m very desperate… i dont know if lucia can actually read this… but if not, anyone know her pls give my thoughts…lucia… you know know how happy iam with your stories… ive been reading this since it started… and i lose track of it coz the next story is too long to come out and went busy at my work too… ive read your 5 times … after a few months i read it again and again… then i went working… i know it doesnt matter… then i noticed its been months… i forget the title… what i did was leave a comment in one of the fic… but no body answer whats the title of your story… i write telling them the story ive read.. but with no luck. i began reading each fan fic from the updates to the last digit of pag3 77… to look for your stories… for 5 days i didnt sleep that much to find your stories again and to read it, that brings a smile on my face… always… i really like your story… please continue this …. pls… thank u
Good job getting them to talk Shane!
Great to see this story updated – as usual, top quality stuff!
wow, i cant believe ive missed this story this entire time. i just went back and read the last few chapters, which were all very good. but this one was truly excellent. i cant wait for the next, pps!
Yes! Too Cute! Dana will have some making up to do…PPS
That was great Shane’s plan worked perfect
this is great but what will this person do when they get to the hotel was that shane or someone else can’t wait to find out please post soon great update love it as always
you really wrapped that all together well. good job. the fighting was really intense and the makeup was super cute. i am scared of that crazy stalker though. post soon and once again – thanks for not bailing on us. also – are you updating the christmas one soon? ;)
How did i miss this!? i’ve been waitng (not so patiently) and it slipped right by me. It was worth the wait Lucia. That was wonderful- i’ve wondered how you were going to make me (and Alice) understand the Why’s of it… both the explaination and Dana’s unfolding of her feelings were so natural and true to her character… they are both heartbreaking in this scene. thanks.