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While Dana was somewhere around mile four, Alice forced herself out of bed. Though her mind was racing, sleep came easily for her Alice. She slept in that deep slumber where even if she had the most vivid dreams, she wouldn’t remember a thing. The avoidance she so well performed the night before seemed to cause problems in the morning. She was unprepared for what was to come in a short while. She ordered herself some coffee and hoped that the caffeine would do its job and she would somehow have the strength to handle the confrontation she wanted most to avoid.
At 11:03 Alice made her way out of the hotel. She crossed the street with coffee in hand and made a bee line for the park. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Dana seated on a bench by an elm tree. She was slightly illuminated by the sun with random darkness caused by the elms leaves. As the wind rustled the trees, the sun seemed to dance across Dana’s face. If Alice had any resolve, that beautiful sight dissolved it instantly. She felt her face flush and knew that she was in for a hell of a morning.
As she approached, Dana began to rise. Alice took a deep breath and let it rip.
“Don’t. What are you doing here? I thought we said all we had to say the other morning. I have nothing to say to you.”
Dana was about to remind Alice that they were supposed to meet there to stage the fight when she realized that Alice was starting it.
“I…I…just wanted to talk to you, to explain. Alice, I need you to let me explain.”
“And I need you to not shove your tongue down other people’s throats. But I didn’t get that, why should I give you what you need?”
Dana swallowed hard, knowing this wasn’t going to be fun. Alice wasn’t going to make this easy. “Please. Just give me one conversation. That’s all I ask. After all of these years, asking for one conversation isn’t asking a lot. If after you still don’t want to talk to me, I’ll walk away. Please, Al. Just listen to me.”
“You have ten minutes.” Alice icily replied, sitting down on the bench. Though she was sitting on the same bench as Dana, and technically next to her, she couldn’t have been farther away if she had chosen to sit in another city.
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I love this story. Any chance of an update soon? Please?
this is my first time to leave comment coz i’m very desperate… i dont know if lucia can actually read this… but if not, anyone know her pls give my thoughts…lucia… you know know how happy iam with your stories… ive been reading this since it started… and i lose track of it coz the next story is too long to come out and went busy at my work too… ive read your 5 times … after a few months i read it again and again… then i went working… i know it doesnt matter… then i noticed its been months… i forget the title… what i did was leave a comment in one of the fic… but no body answer whats the title of your story… i write telling them the story ive read.. but with no luck. i began reading each fan fic from the updates to the last digit of pag3 77… to look for your stories… for 5 days i didnt sleep that much to find your stories again and to read it, that brings a smile on my face… always… i really like your story… please continue this …. pls… thank u
Good job getting them to talk Shane!
Great to see this story updated – as usual, top quality stuff!
wow, i cant believe ive missed this story this entire time. i just went back and read the last few chapters, which were all very good. but this one was truly excellent. i cant wait for the next, pps!
Yes! Too Cute! Dana will have some making up to do…PPS
That was great Shane’s plan worked perfect
this is great but what will this person do when they get to the hotel was that shane or someone else can’t wait to find out please post soon great update love it as always
you really wrapped that all together well. good job. the fighting was really intense and the makeup was super cute. i am scared of that crazy stalker though. post soon and once again – thanks for not bailing on us. also – are you updating the christmas one soon? ;)
How did i miss this!? i’ve been waitng (not so patiently) and it slipped right by me. It was worth the wait Lucia. That was wonderful- i’ve wondered how you were going to make me (and Alice) understand the Why’s of it… both the explaination and Dana’s unfolding of her feelings were so natural and true to her character… they are both heartbreaking in this scene. thanks.