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    Badlands – Chapter 11

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Carmen’s POV

     

    I love her; I do. This… new her; I guess… it’s driving me insane. Did I make a mistake? Choosing her; to be with her? Shit… don’t talk like this Carmen; not now.

     

    Now; it all made a perfectly clear sense. The bullet wounds… I always thought she was a bit of a bad ass and I love that about her. I didn’t know she was this bad… I mean; she is… too bad. Does that make any sense?

     

    Wow. I can’t sleep. I can’t sleep knowing my girlfriend is a gangster. I mean she personify the word ‘gangster’. The tattoos; the swagger; the clothes; the talk; the posture; every single thing about her just screams “I’m a gangster”. Shit… does she have any guns in this house? Holy fuck… I didn’t think about that. Oh my…; that’s probably why she doesn’t want me to go into her room. Jesus… all this time I always thought of her as one of those people who don’t like their stuff to be touched by others. Well; that thought is completely gone now.

     

    Her back is facing me and I’m looking at her bare back. I’m still awed by all this. There is tattoo of a tiger on her back, it’s at the right side and at the top… the tail of the tiger trails over on the front side of her body. Very big and colorful and very oriental like tattoo. It’s one of my favorites of her many tattoos.

     

    I need… time… and space. I can’t think when she’s in my zone. She blocks all of my rational thoughts. All I could when I’m around her is how much I’m in love with her; how strangely-out-of-this-world-perfectly she is for me; in a way that does and doesn’t make sense all the same time. She has that effect on me; I love it.

     

    Maybe I should stop thinking. It’ too hard not to. I’ve been wondering what it’s like to be her. Twenty five years old… and she pretty much has the world on the palm of her hands; well… maybe just the underworld.

     

    Such young creature living such dangerous life; I thought. I’m twenty seven years old and I’m not ready to die yet. Am I being selfish?? No, no… I’m being realistic. Then I guess I have to get use to this new reality of mine. I’m Shane McCutcheon’s girlfriend… the mob boss daughter. It has kind of a nice ring to it… but… Oh; I don’t know.

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    1. Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!

    4. oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)

    9. wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!

    10. HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!

    11. great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx

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