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Badlands – Chapter 11
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I opened my sleepy eyes and turned to see she was there like an angel; watching me. She smiled at me and tussled my hair. “Good Morning…” She said.
She’s not gardening. Hhmm… Something is up. The first thing she does in the morning is kiss me on my forehead and head down to the backyard.
“Morning; you’ve been thinking huh?” I asked her; I know she has. She has that look on her face; that I can tell easily. She got closer and cuddled up next to me. I felt her warm skin against mine. She likes to trace my body art with her finger. I love the feeling of it.
“I have… I’ve been thinking way too much… I couldn’t even sleep; I’ve been thinking that much…” She said; and I felt bad. Her head resting on my chest; she could hear my steady heart beats.
“I’m sorry… this is a lot to take in; I know…” I said softly to her.
“Don’t be sorry… I would want to know the truth about you… I think; I need a little bit of time and you know process this all in… I mean; you just don’t hear this type of news often… ” She comfort me and I snickered at her words to me. She’s right.
“Well; Should I be worried about anything?” I asked and it took her longer than I thought.
“No; no you don’t have to be worried… I have some questions for you though…” She said and I nodded with my head on the pillow. Yeah; I knew it would come sooner or later.
“Go for it…” I said.
“Who are the Peabody’s? How did you start this… war… with them?? ” She asked me and looked at my face. She was no longer cuddling to me. I raised my body and lay back on the head of the bed and looked at her. God; she didn’t have any sleep but she still looked beautiful. How the hell does she does that?? I’m telling ya… this girl is out of this world.
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Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!
Oh man, you know it can’t be good if Gabe came all the way to LA. You have to post the next chapter soon!!! I need to know what happens!!! AAAHHHH…
gosh i luv ur story, its so creative and original! plz plz plz! post the next chapter, i just cant wait
oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)
Meh ! I don’t like Gabe and right now, I don’t like Jenny very much either !
aww…i hope gabe won’t cause problems…i want carmen and shane to be happy
amazing! I can’t wait what good old Gabe is going to do…
Oh boy. The next chapter should be really interesting. Love it!
wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!
HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!
great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx