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    Badlands – Chapter 11

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by blox-tox.
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    Questions and Quiries.

     

    “Carmen… none of this happened; you know us… I was still angry that my dad that he sent me here… and I kinda let it out on Alice…” I explained. When I thought about it now; I guess its half true… part of it is just letting out my frustration and part of it is just my angry self. I looked at Alice and she didn’t to expect I would say that.

     

    The three of use stopped talking when we heard the knock on our door. We fell silent and all of us were thinking the obvious; the first thing that popped in our head. Now; in my head I’m thinking it might be Jenny. I looked at Alice and she was looking between me and Carmen; Carmen however never took her eyes off me.

     

    “I’ll get it…” I said quietly.

     

    The two of them watched me as I walked to the door. I turned the handle and opened it.

    I let out a breath of relief when I saw the familiar face.

     

    “Jen…” I said. She grinned that notoriously smile of hers and I smiled back.

     

    “Morning Shane…” She said.

     

    “Uh; come in…” I said. Within seconds three black S-class Mercedes-Benz pulled up in front of the house. My heart beat were going up; I can feel the sweat on my palms. I looked between Jenny and the cars. The doors to the first car opened up on all sides; I could see men in black suites coming out. Some faces that I recognize and some I don’t.

    You gotta be kidding me; right?

     

    I turned and looked at the second car. I saw more men in black suites coming out and then… then one face; one face that I dreaded most. He came out elegantly and buttoned his blazer; his eyes covered with sunglasses. Then he smiled at me. The third car was more men in black suits now that I realize.

     

    He walked up to the house and I couldn’t move. The men surrounding him were looking around the neighborhood getting familiar with the new surroundings. There were four men guarding him as we walked up the steps. He flashed his smile as he was getting closer to me.

     

    Then he stopped right in front of me and took off his sunglasses; Jenny step aside. “You’re not happy to see me?” He said and he held out his arms.

     

     

    “Dad…” I whispered. Holy Shit.

     

     

     

    “I’ve missed you darling…” He said in a smile. I stood still; motionless.

     

     

     

    “Baby… who is it?” I heard Carmen yelled out.

     

     

     

     

    TBC.. 

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    1. Holy shit! Gabriel, huh? Damn! I really liked this chapter and I liked the beginning of it very much.. It was nice to see things from Carmen’s POV. You should do that more. And PPS!

    4. oh my God… Shane’s dad… hope he will be good with Carmen… I was thinking, Alice&Jenny?? That would be really interesting… oh my god, but now Shane has to tell her dad she’s got a girlfriend!!!! Post soon, please! (Like always, you’re very QUICKLY!)

    9. wow , that was really good.I love the Alice incident…lol . Gabe with his bodyguards…….it can’t be sth good.But isn’t it dangerous for him to come down to LA , i mean the Peabody family could have followed him and find out where Shane is? Anyway , s I said really really good( i like the way Shane explains to Carmen everything) and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!

    10. HEY! nice chapter! and what a surprise,Gabe is in town… i think this situation is kind of dangerous… maybe he wants to take Shane with him.. mmm.. i prefer not thinking about that.Ahh, by the way, what are you talking about “my writer brain”… c’mon, you can control your brain! just a happy ending, ok? post soon!

    11. great story – wonder what her dad is going to say… drama drama drama… awesome..looking forward to more updates of this and your other one…. please post mroe sooooooooooon xx

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