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    A Deeper Song, post 12

    Story written on July 17, 2007 by kelika.
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                As the time grew nearer to Bette’s due date the gang stepped up the interview process for both cook and nanny or manny.  The cook part was relatively easy in that Lara had a number of colleagues who she recommended for their review.  They selected narrowed it down to two candidates an older Latina, named Juanita who created excellent Tex-Mex dishes in addition to the usual fare and a young French exchange student who made roast chicken that melted in your mouth and was quite a baker as well. Julianne was in her late twenties and full of energy. 

     

                On the surface, Juanita seemed the front runner, she seemed mature and settled.  She had two children of her own so preparing foods for infants and young children was something she knew about first hand, rather than through the classroom as was the case with Julianne. The two were each given a week paid trial. 

     

                Julianne was a credit to her training her coffee and fresh baked bread or croissants for breakfast drew the entire gang for breakfast as well as dinner.  She interacted well with Bette and Angelica and was responsive to their individual tastes.  By the end of the week she knew each of her diners’ tastes and shamelessly fed their deepest cravings.  She would be a tough act to follow they all agreed at the end of the week.

     

                Juanita did just that.  Spanish coffee, fresh tortillas and empanada’s stuffed with seasoned vegetables, meats, fish, poultry that melted in your mouth.  Rice and beans, plantains, huevos rancheros light and fluffy, mango, pineapple, banana juice mixes.  It was turning into a tougher choice than they had anticipated.

     

                As she was an older woman Bette did not initially think anything of the numerous times that Juanita would touch her in the course of a conversation.  Juanita would often engage Bette in discussion of her pregnancy during the day when they were in the house alone.  Yes this was her first pregnancy she answered.  Tina her ex-partner had given birth to their daughter Angelica.  No, this was not a child she and Tina had planned to add to their family.  Her wife had been taken in a terrible car accident and her friends and family were helping her through the ordeal. 

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    7. Stunning and heart-breaking all in one. One of your most powerful chapters yet. I really do need to stop reading these at work, my Mormon office-mate is going to begin to worry about me. And I really need to stop reading stories about women having babies because my partner and I aren’t pregnant yet. All in good time I suppose. Please post soon, I adore this story ~ Hawk

    18. Ok in response to the question about the baby’s foot, sometimes the baby does not turn until very late; and sometimes it doesn’t turn and is called a breech where someone has to assist it to turn usually…or assist at the birth which can be bloody hard birthing a breech baby…love all the comments you got!!!!

    23. WOW!!!!!! I just caught up!!!!! This is one of the best stories going right now!!! The way you write with such feeling and love. You take my breath away. Thank you PPVS

    24. Wow!!!Hey you can send Juanita here to Illinois ’cause we don’t have sum good Tex-Mex food.MMMMM sum huevos rancheros, hope she knows how to make pico de gallo and menudo!!!!Some real Tejano food, dat’s what I miss!Btw Thanx 4 B&T loving, but we want MORE!!!

    25. What agency did they get Juanita from, just , umm, wondering, umm, yeah, like I’m not gonna call or anything and pretend I have kids that need tending…

    26. Oh WOW, Alpha Tina, look out world, make no mistake, Tina will protect her woman. Juanita was lucky that was all Tina did. Read this the other day but was at work and could not comment.

    27. Hi Kelika, I just loves this latest chapter. Firstly, there was the simple choice of a housekeeper, Juanita or Julianne. I could hardly contain myself at Juanita’s quick twist from relaxing massage to full blown seduction. Thank the heavens that Tina was there to step in. And secondly, the romance between Tina and Bette continues to delight and develop. Yes, these gals have been here before and know are older and wiser thereofre better equipped to make it work. The simple act of loving and varing of someone is a wonderful gift. I hope that Bette sees it this way and starts to comsider a future with Tina. Please continue soon and relieve the tension. Awesome writing. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.

    31. Beautiful. I’ve read this chapter twice before and have to sneak and read it again it work. This story was hard to read at first, with Bette being in love with Rosanna, but you are making this work so well, without diminishing either Rosanna, or Tina, you’ve hooked me. Do you do requests? If so could we have just a little more of Tina and Bette, right at this time? Nc-17 or not, its just such a beautiful, sensual, loving moment…I don’t think I or (Tina or Bette) would want to rush away. WOW!

    34. Excellent, brilliant, beautiful….absolutely poignant in the sadness and guilt Bette is experiencing….such skills you have…loving the take charge Tina…wonderful story…already hanging for update…Thank you

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