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A Deeper Song, post 12
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Juanita slowly rose and stood to face Tina. The fire that she saw in the hazel eyes told her that she had awakened the green-eyed monster. Defiantly she turned to Bette. “She speaks for you?”
“She does.” Bette answered meeting Tina’s eyes.
Juanita left without another word.
Tina held Bette’s gaze until she heard the front door close signaling Juanita’s departure.
She asked the question that hung in the air. “Do you ache Bette?”
The question alone made her clit hard and she throbbed with need. Her nipples grew painfully hard. “Yes.” She confessed. She covered her face in shame. How could she ache with so much need with her wife so recently gone? She carried their child for god’s sake. Tina she could almost excuse in that she never lost her desire for the woman. The years of marriage and separation had not ever stopped her desire for Tina. How could she respond to a stranger, to Juanita? On some level she enjoyed the physical contact that Juanita provided. It felt good to be touched.
Tina watched the multiple reactions that crossed the brunette’s face, the shame, the need, the grief, the helplessness, the confusion. She finally crossed the room and made her decision. No matter what came of it Bette would know love this afternoon.
“Bette, honey, do you trust me?”
“You know I do.” She continued to hold her head in her hands.
Tina reached down and cupped Bette’s chin in her hand forcing her to look up. “Then let me love you. No strings. Let me soothe the ache. Let me stand in for Rosanna today. As much as it pains me to be a stand in let me do this for you.”
“I don’t want your pity.” Bette lashed out breaking eye contact. “Go, I’ll be fine.”
“I’m not going anywhere and pity is the last thing that I am feeling. I have wanted you for months now. I have never stopped wanting you if I am to be honest. Right now I want to take care of your needs. Pregnant women contrary to myth are intensely sexual. The other night in the club I told you that no one but me will ever touch you again. I’m sorry Bette. I’m sorry Rosanna is gone. I’m sorry you are in so much pain. You need to be loved and I am the only one who can do that. Let me.” She leaned in and kissed Bette gently and tenderly on her temple. “Let me love you.” She whispered in her ear. “Let me” her lips moved down the graceful neck, kissing her everywhere she could. Bette thrust one hand in the blonde tresses and the other wrapped around her neck. She was breathing heavily her response clearly overriding her words.
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Tina felt the foot, shouldn’t it have been the babies head? Do love this story.
Damn, kel. That was hot, but mostly, that was just really lovely. Thanks
Amazing story written w/great emotion fully expressed. I love it! Something to look forward to everyday. PPS.
Beautiful Kelika!
Very Very powerful. Absolutely brilliant.
W-O-W! Just…just great! So powerful!PPS
Stunning and heart-breaking all in one. One of your most powerful chapters yet. I really do need to stop reading these at work, my Mormon office-mate is going to begin to worry about me. And I really need to stop reading stories about women having babies because my partner and I aren’t pregnant yet. All in good time I suppose. Please post soon, I adore this story ~ Hawk
You sure know how to move a story along, kelika. The episode with Juanita was an excellent way to transition into the tender and hot Tibette loving.
beautiful… i think it got hotter in here… PPS
What an great story. I love the writing, your detailed descriptions make for wonderful reading. :)
Beautiful, keep the love flowing.
My goodness…Bette’s not the only one with an ache! I just love your Tina… so compassionate and lovely.
Just beautiful! Can’t wait for more. PPS!!
We all seem to agree that this is a lovely story! Love your Tina
absolutely amazing…..this was the most awesome chappy i have read……i love tibette…..more more more……
I have always enjoyed your writing. With this one, you have stepped up into the big leagues. Way to go!
This is such a good story! I look for it whenever I get online. Thank you!
Ok in response to the question about the baby’s foot, sometimes the baby does not turn until very late; and sometimes it doesn’t turn and is called a breech where someone has to assist it to turn usually…or assist at the birth which can be bloody hard birthing a breech baby…love all the comments you got!!!!
Well written!
Bravo Kelika! Full of passion and gentleness. Hopefully, Bette will give Tina relief from her “ache.” PPS.
your words are so beautiful. it is was sad and poignant at the same time. good job kelika. pps
Wow is all I can say.
WOW!!!!!! I just caught up!!!!! This is one of the best stories going right now!!! The way you write with such feeling and love. You take my breath away. Thank you PPVS
Wow!!!Hey you can send Juanita here to Illinois ’cause we don’t have sum good Tex-Mex food.MMMMM sum huevos rancheros, hope she knows how to make pico de gallo and menudo!!!!Some real Tejano food, dat’s what I miss!Btw Thanx 4 B&T loving, but we want MORE!!!
What agency did they get Juanita from, just , umm, wondering, umm, yeah, like I’m not gonna call or anything and pretend I have kids that need tending…
Oh WOW, Alpha Tina, look out world, make no mistake, Tina will protect her woman. Juanita was lucky that was all Tina did. Read this the other day but was at work and could not comment.
Hi Kelika, I just loves this latest chapter. Firstly, there was the simple choice of a housekeeper, Juanita or Julianne. I could hardly contain myself at Juanita’s quick twist from relaxing massage to full blown seduction. Thank the heavens that Tina was there to step in. And secondly, the romance between Tina and Bette continues to delight and develop. Yes, these gals have been here before and know are older and wiser thereofre better equipped to make it work. The simple act of loving and varing of someone is a wonderful gift. I hope that Bette sees it this way and starts to comsider a future with Tina. Please continue soon and relieve the tension. Awesome writing. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
So very beautifully written. It´s such a great story.
I just went back and read this from the beginning…what an excellent story!!! Please post soon.
This story is so touching: I always look forward to read your updates.
Beautiful. I’ve read this chapter twice before and have to sneak and read it again it work. This story was hard to read at first, with Bette being in love with Rosanna, but you are making this work so well, without diminishing either Rosanna, or Tina, you’ve hooked me. Do you do requests? If so could we have just a little more of Tina and Bette, right at this time? Nc-17 or not, its just such a beautiful, sensual, loving moment…I don’t think I or (Tina or Bette) would want to rush away. WOW!
heart wrenching, so needed yet so painful…where are these 2 going to end up
That was just beautiful, please post soon!
Excellent, brilliant, beautiful….absolutely poignant in the sadness and guilt Bette is experiencing….such skills you have…loving the take charge Tina…wonderful story…already hanging for update…Thank you
WOW, What a sweet story, just love it:)PPS ASAP
Damn that was hot and beautiful!