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A Deeper Song, post 12
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“Come on babe, we can’t do this here anyone can walk in.” Tina led a dazed Bette towards the guest room she occupied when she spent the night. Bette grew suddenly strong and determined and took Tina to her bedroom, the bedroom she had shared with Rosanna.
Once inside the room Bette locked the door. She tore off her clothes in a manner that spoke of desperation. Once she was naked she presented herself to Tina.
“Do you still want me? Fat and full with another woman’s child?” Her insecurity was plain for Tina to see.
Tina stood absolutely still and looked at her in all her glorious womanhood. Belly swollen with life that she wished she had planted. Breasts full, nipples erect, lips full, brunette locks falling over her shoulders. Tina let her desire show in her eyes that she raked over every inch of Bette’s body. She slowly shed her own clothes until she was naked as well. There was no where to hide. Tina communicated with her eyes and actions that she very much wanted this woman and everything she saw she enjoyed. “I want you in your fullness I want to take you and fill you again and again. I want to taste you, lick you, suck you and fuck you until you have no doubt that you are the most beautiful, sexy woman in the universe. And then I want to do it all over again.”
Bette stopped breathing as Tina spoke. She let go of the breath she was holding “what the fuck are you waiting for?”
Tina understood that Bette had surrendered so she calmed herself and took her time. She kissed her hot and sexy, thrusting her tongue deep. She let her fingers rub the hard nipples pressed against her chest. Bette reacted to every touch. “Lie down on your belly.” Tina instructed. “Let me soothe the ache in your hips before I soothe your other aches.” Bette was bent over the bed about to climb on and do as Tina instructed when Tina grabbed her hips and pressed herself against Bette. She used her thumbs to massage the pain that resided in the top of her hips. They were both torn between the exquisite pleasure and pain. Tina’s hands began to slide up Bette’s body from her hips to her shoulders and back again. She massaged her along the way and they were both dripping wet from the contact. Tina leaned her head on Bette’s back and began to stroke her nipples in earnest. Unable to help herself her hand slid down her belly and between her thighs.
Nothing prepared her for the sensation of Bette’s passage so wet and tight and the baby so near she could feel his foot. She tried to withdraw but Bette held her close. “You feel so good inside me. It’s been so long.” Tina withdrew for a few painful seconds to shift herself onto the bed so that Bette could pour her passion out on top of her. She slipped her hand back between the honey thighs deep inside and Bette wept with passion and joy. “Tee” she cried as she came collapsing against the hazel eyed blonde. Just as she was about to orgasm their eyes locked. Time stood still. The déjà vu did not demand puzzled searching; it was like it was when Tina was pregnant with Angelica.
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Tina felt the foot, shouldn’t it have been the babies head? Do love this story.
Damn, kel. That was hot, but mostly, that was just really lovely. Thanks
Amazing story written w/great emotion fully expressed. I love it! Something to look forward to everyday. PPS.
Beautiful Kelika!
Very Very powerful. Absolutely brilliant.
W-O-W! Just…just great! So powerful!PPS
Stunning and heart-breaking all in one. One of your most powerful chapters yet. I really do need to stop reading these at work, my Mormon office-mate is going to begin to worry about me. And I really need to stop reading stories about women having babies because my partner and I aren’t pregnant yet. All in good time I suppose. Please post soon, I adore this story ~ Hawk
You sure know how to move a story along, kelika. The episode with Juanita was an excellent way to transition into the tender and hot Tibette loving.
beautiful… i think it got hotter in here… PPS
What an great story. I love the writing, your detailed descriptions make for wonderful reading. :)
Beautiful, keep the love flowing.
My goodness…Bette’s not the only one with an ache! I just love your Tina… so compassionate and lovely.
Just beautiful! Can’t wait for more. PPS!!
We all seem to agree that this is a lovely story! Love your Tina
absolutely amazing…..this was the most awesome chappy i have read……i love tibette…..more more more……
I have always enjoyed your writing. With this one, you have stepped up into the big leagues. Way to go!
This is such a good story! I look for it whenever I get online. Thank you!
Ok in response to the question about the baby’s foot, sometimes the baby does not turn until very late; and sometimes it doesn’t turn and is called a breech where someone has to assist it to turn usually…or assist at the birth which can be bloody hard birthing a breech baby…love all the comments you got!!!!
Well written!
Bravo Kelika! Full of passion and gentleness. Hopefully, Bette will give Tina relief from her “ache.” PPS.
your words are so beautiful. it is was sad and poignant at the same time. good job kelika. pps
Wow is all I can say.
WOW!!!!!! I just caught up!!!!! This is one of the best stories going right now!!! The way you write with such feeling and love. You take my breath away. Thank you PPVS
Wow!!!Hey you can send Juanita here to Illinois ’cause we don’t have sum good Tex-Mex food.MMMMM sum huevos rancheros, hope she knows how to make pico de gallo and menudo!!!!Some real Tejano food, dat’s what I miss!Btw Thanx 4 B&T loving, but we want MORE!!!
What agency did they get Juanita from, just , umm, wondering, umm, yeah, like I’m not gonna call or anything and pretend I have kids that need tending…
Oh WOW, Alpha Tina, look out world, make no mistake, Tina will protect her woman. Juanita was lucky that was all Tina did. Read this the other day but was at work and could not comment.
Hi Kelika, I just loves this latest chapter. Firstly, there was the simple choice of a housekeeper, Juanita or Julianne. I could hardly contain myself at Juanita’s quick twist from relaxing massage to full blown seduction. Thank the heavens that Tina was there to step in. And secondly, the romance between Tina and Bette continues to delight and develop. Yes, these gals have been here before and know are older and wiser thereofre better equipped to make it work. The simple act of loving and varing of someone is a wonderful gift. I hope that Bette sees it this way and starts to comsider a future with Tina. Please continue soon and relieve the tension. Awesome writing. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
So very beautifully written. It´s such a great story.
I just went back and read this from the beginning…what an excellent story!!! Please post soon.
This story is so touching: I always look forward to read your updates.
Beautiful. I’ve read this chapter twice before and have to sneak and read it again it work. This story was hard to read at first, with Bette being in love with Rosanna, but you are making this work so well, without diminishing either Rosanna, or Tina, you’ve hooked me. Do you do requests? If so could we have just a little more of Tina and Bette, right at this time? Nc-17 or not, its just such a beautiful, sensual, loving moment…I don’t think I or (Tina or Bette) would want to rush away. WOW!
heart wrenching, so needed yet so painful…where are these 2 going to end up
That was just beautiful, please post soon!
Excellent, brilliant, beautiful….absolutely poignant in the sadness and guilt Bette is experiencing….such skills you have…loving the take charge Tina…wonderful story…already hanging for update…Thank you
WOW, What a sweet story, just love it:)PPS ASAP
Damn that was hot and beautiful!