Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Deeper Song, post 14
Login to add story to favorites
(25 votes, average: 4.96 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Once the gang left, Bette locked the door. It was strange she had fallen into Rosanna’s habit of forgetting to lock the doors at night. With the comings and goings of her family and friends it hardly seemed necessary. Tonight it was important that they not be interrupted or surprised.
Bette felt butterflies in her stomach. She knew that Tina and her needed to talk. Memories of being with Tina earlier that afternoon made her pulse uncontrollably. There was a part of her that just wanted to skip the talk and proceed directly to bed, do not talk, do not process, just go directly to bed.
She turned from the door and found the blonde watching her. Knowing Tina the way she did she knew the look. Tina would not give up until she and Bette talked. She idly wondered how much time she had and if there was a way to distract her.
“Do you want to talk indoors or out on the deck?”
Bette smirked. She noted that the question did not offer an option of not talking just where.
“I don’t think a smirk is an answer Bette.” Tina raised an eyebrow.
“I was just wondering if not talking was an option.” Bette confessed.
“I think not talking has hurt us more over the course of time than talking ever has.” Tina responded seriously. She sat on a chair in the formal living room where they found themselves.
Bette suppressed a smile. Tina looked so uncomfortable in this formal space. It was the room that was most Rosanna in the house. It was a space that Rosanna reserved for dealing with social power events that she rarely had to engage in. The wealth was displayed subtly yet powerfully. The Renoir, the Chagall, the O’Keefe, the priceless vases, the impeccable rugs, the Steuben glass, the Tiffany lamps, and the crystal, all created this effect. Still in classic Rosanna style above the fireplace were portraits of Bette, Rosanna and Angelica. There were original family portraits of the three of them as well as one of Bette and Rosanna shoulder to shoulder, glancing quickly at one another it seemed full of love and confidence before they would resume tackling the world.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Truly look forward to this story! By far one of my favorites right now!! More please!! :)
wow…tough talking…mmmm…brilliant writing…
Tina’s honesty blows me away. Tough conversations, but these two are doing great. I wondered how Tina would react to Bette choosing Ro over her if the opportunity to get back with Bette ever came up. I’m glad her love for Bette overpowers any other doubts that they belong together. Love the song. So do I get a new request, since you already had this one in mind (lol).
I love this but it was too short. I love them together in this story. Wonderful writing. PPS.
Go with the flow…so good to read…thank you.
OMG, you can’t end their conversation there…I need more talking, pls…go back and write some more….pls
I find myself holding my breath and scrolling very slowly, savoring every word. Superb.
Great writing..such tenderness
Excellent.
Love how this story is developing! Looking forward to how it will enfold…please post soon! Thank you!
Great Chappie K! This story has really grown on me. Definitely one of my favs!!PPS
Good chapter. Talk good and keep them talking and work thing out!
Through the fire, to the limit, through what-eveerrrrrr…..Chaka Khan, I feel for you. Kelika, I feel for you, too! Thanks!!!
WOW! You are makingf me fall for Tina and Bette all over again, passionate, strong, sensual, sensitive, fragile, funny, the list go on… The only critique I could suggest for your writing is that you don’r give your readers enough of it.
This is a BEAUTIFUL story, just love it:) PLEASE PS. Thanks
Thanks for the fast post. Love these 2. PPS!!
Hoping you would have another chapter up today, love this story.Love the way you have them getting together, slowly but surely. Bette can not ignore Tina’s and vice versa, they still love and care very deeply for one another and they should get back together. I suppose when the baby is born they will acknowledge their ever present love and the fact that they can not live apart any longer. Great chapter. PPS
Wonderful and so full of love!!!!! Thank you so much. PPVS
That was not enough. Talking is good, but after feel the love and let it flow.
Love this story. It has a very raw passionate feel to it and very sensual also. It’s so good to see them being open,and honest about their feelings,something they have never been very good at doing. They are working their way back to each other w/out even realizing it. What a slow burn you have working. PPS