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A Deeper Song, post 14
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The space was designed to disconcert those who spent time there and it was working.
“Come with me.” Bette held out her hand. Tina took it and followed Bette back to her bedroom. Tina was surprised at this choice of talking spaces. Bette opened the door to a deck off the bedroom that Tina did not know was there. The space was surprisingly large and versatile. There was a table for two, lounge chairs, a well used fire pit and a small side table with a book opened face down, The Natural Birth, the cover read.
“Doing your homework?” Tina asked.
“It’s been awhile.” Bette admitted.
Tina felt even more uncomfortable in this space than she did in the formal living room. Earlier in the haze of sexual passion she blocked out the fact that she was in the bedroom that Bette shared with her wife. This space was so Bette and Rosanna that she wanted to bolt.
“Are you alright?” Bette asked concerned about the sudden change in Tina’s demeanor.
“Yeah, just a little thirsty” Tina admitted her mouth suddenly dry.
Bette moved to a state of the art glass faced refrigerator that she had not noticed before. “Wine, beer or water?”
“New Zeeland?” Tina had developed a weakness for the refreshing grapefruit taste of those Sauvignon Blanc’s.
Bette poured Tina a glass of wine and took a bottle of sparkling water for herself. She settled into one of the loungers and waited for Tina to do the same. Tina tucked herself into the lounger and took a sip of wine.
They sat in silence allowing the night peace to surround them.
“How is your womanly ache now Bette?”
The sharp intake of breath following that question hung in the air.
“It was nicely soothed until just now.” Bette choked out, overcome again with memories and contractions.
Tina couldn’t help but smile at her obvious effect on Bette, or at least the effect of her ministrations.
“Don’t get smug Kennard.” Bette warned.
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Truly look forward to this story! By far one of my favorites right now!! More please!! :)
wow…tough talking…mmmm…brilliant writing…
Tina’s honesty blows me away. Tough conversations, but these two are doing great. I wondered how Tina would react to Bette choosing Ro over her if the opportunity to get back with Bette ever came up. I’m glad her love for Bette overpowers any other doubts that they belong together. Love the song. So do I get a new request, since you already had this one in mind (lol).
I love this but it was too short. I love them together in this story. Wonderful writing. PPS.
Go with the flow…so good to read…thank you.
OMG, you can’t end their conversation there…I need more talking, pls…go back and write some more….pls
I find myself holding my breath and scrolling very slowly, savoring every word. Superb.
Great writing..such tenderness
Excellent.
Love how this story is developing! Looking forward to how it will enfold…please post soon! Thank you!
Great Chappie K! This story has really grown on me. Definitely one of my favs!!PPS
Good chapter. Talk good and keep them talking and work thing out!
Through the fire, to the limit, through what-eveerrrrrr…..Chaka Khan, I feel for you. Kelika, I feel for you, too! Thanks!!!
WOW! You are makingf me fall for Tina and Bette all over again, passionate, strong, sensual, sensitive, fragile, funny, the list go on… The only critique I could suggest for your writing is that you don’r give your readers enough of it.
This is a BEAUTIFUL story, just love it:) PLEASE PS. Thanks
Thanks for the fast post. Love these 2. PPS!!
Hoping you would have another chapter up today, love this story.Love the way you have them getting together, slowly but surely. Bette can not ignore Tina’s and vice versa, they still love and care very deeply for one another and they should get back together. I suppose when the baby is born they will acknowledge their ever present love and the fact that they can not live apart any longer. Great chapter. PPS
Wonderful and so full of love!!!!! Thank you so much. PPVS
That was not enough. Talking is good, but after feel the love and let it flow.
Love this story. It has a very raw passionate feel to it and very sensual also. It’s so good to see them being open,and honest about their feelings,something they have never been very good at doing. They are working their way back to each other w/out even realizing it. What a slow burn you have working. PPS