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A Deeper Song, post 14
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“Moi?”
“Vu.” Bette smiled a deep full Porter smile and it was Tina’s turn to be caught breathless and off guard.
When Tina could speak again she continued.
“I meant what I said this afternoon. What happened between us was…um…well…there were no strings. I hope I didn’t cross the line.” Tina stumbled uncharacteristically to an end.
“T, you helped me more than I can say.” Bette reassured her. It was Bette’s turn to become embarrassed. “I meant what I said at dinner. It’s still hard for me to admit that I need anything or anyone. I needed to be loved.” She paused as she gathered her thoughts. “I could have had sex with Juanita but I wouldn’t have felt loved.” She paused again before continuing slowly. “There are only two women in this world that I have ever felt loved by.” Tina became absolutely still listening to Bette intently. “I felt loved today.”
“You are and always will be.” Tina affirmed humbled to hear Bette speak of both the depth of the love she felt for both her and Rosanna. She knew in her soul that Bette had never stopped loving her. What they had not managed to do was find a way before to work through the damage they had done to one another in the course of their loving.
They sat quietly lost in their individual thoughts.
“I’ve been thinking a lot lately about when you were pregnant with Angelica. How did you manage alone for so long?”
“I didn’t.” Tina chuckled. “I went from Alice to Joyce to Helena to you. I was too proud and angry to tell any of you how much I needed you. Helena guessed and ironically she helped me quite a bit while hurting you.”
“Really?” Bette’s eyebrow rose.
The other night when I asked Helena to go out with me she confessed that she used me to hurt you when she first came to town.”
Bette crossed her arms over her chest. One of her defensive postures, Tina noted. “She ‘soothed my ache’ and then I found I ached for you even more.” Tina confessed. “Do you remember the sonogram?”
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Truly look forward to this story! By far one of my favorites right now!! More please!! :)
wow…tough talking…mmmm…brilliant writing…
Tina’s honesty blows me away. Tough conversations, but these two are doing great. I wondered how Tina would react to Bette choosing Ro over her if the opportunity to get back with Bette ever came up. I’m glad her love for Bette overpowers any other doubts that they belong together. Love the song. So do I get a new request, since you already had this one in mind (lol).
I love this but it was too short. I love them together in this story. Wonderful writing. PPS.
Go with the flow…so good to read…thank you.
OMG, you can’t end their conversation there…I need more talking, pls…go back and write some more….pls
I find myself holding my breath and scrolling very slowly, savoring every word. Superb.
Great writing..such tenderness
Excellent.
Love how this story is developing! Looking forward to how it will enfold…please post soon! Thank you!
Great Chappie K! This story has really grown on me. Definitely one of my favs!!PPS
Good chapter. Talk good and keep them talking and work thing out!
Through the fire, to the limit, through what-eveerrrrrr…..Chaka Khan, I feel for you. Kelika, I feel for you, too! Thanks!!!
WOW! You are makingf me fall for Tina and Bette all over again, passionate, strong, sensual, sensitive, fragile, funny, the list go on… The only critique I could suggest for your writing is that you don’r give your readers enough of it.
This is a BEAUTIFUL story, just love it:) PLEASE PS. Thanks
Thanks for the fast post. Love these 2. PPS!!
Hoping you would have another chapter up today, love this story.Love the way you have them getting together, slowly but surely. Bette can not ignore Tina’s and vice versa, they still love and care very deeply for one another and they should get back together. I suppose when the baby is born they will acknowledge their ever present love and the fact that they can not live apart any longer. Great chapter. PPS
Wonderful and so full of love!!!!! Thank you so much. PPVS
That was not enough. Talking is good, but after feel the love and let it flow.
Love this story. It has a very raw passionate feel to it and very sensual also. It’s so good to see them being open,and honest about their feelings,something they have never been very good at doing. They are working their way back to each other w/out even realizing it. What a slow burn you have working. PPS