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Masked Feelings CH 77 Discoveries
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The alarm clock goes off, Dana reaches for it and pushes the snooze button. She reclines back on the bed. Alice snuggles closer and drapes her leg across Dana’s body. Dana settles her hand on Alice’s thigh and massages it gently. Alice buries her head into her neck, latches on to her skin and sucks on the tender flesh.
Dana – Hey….. stop that.
Alice – Nuh uh…
She resumes her bad behavior.
Dana – I can’t do this, Alice. I need to get up.
Alice whispers in her ear.
Alice – You can miss your usual morning warm-up. I have an alternative workout for you this morning.
Dana groans. Sometimes she hated how easily Alice could get to her. Was she always going to struggle with this vulnerability when it came to Alice? She loved the way that Alice made her feel, but was also scared to death.
Alice traced her lips with her finger… then placed a soft sensual kiss on them. Her tongue parts her lips and explores the recesses of her mouth. It should’ve felt so damned arousing, but it was as if she was experiencing the whole thing out of her own body. She had her eyes closed from the moment she started stroking Alice’s thigh. When Dana opened her eyes, she wasn’t in the bed like she thought she was. She was sitting in a chair that was facing it. Alice was in bed, but it wasn’t her that she was doing all this to… it was Roxy.
Dana wasn’t strapped to the chair, but she did feel paralyzed. She willed herself to get out of the chair but couldn’t move at all. Alice climbed on top of Roxy and began to grind her hips into her’s. Roxy’s hands gripped her ass, pushing her harder into herself. They were both pulling at each other’s clothes.. almost tearing them as each article came off. Dana was growing more nauseous as she was forced to watch. She couldn’t even close her eyes. The tears were streaming down her face. Alice was being taken in by her again and what made it worse was that it was in her own bed this time.
What hurt the most was that Alice had been making all the advances up to this point. Roxy was getting her to do everything she wanted without having to tell her. They were both naked and practically mauling each other. Dana wondered if this was what it was like the first time…. when they were in her spare room. All she wanted to do was disappear…..
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brtyeyes,1st of all, I think you are courteous that you tell us when to expect your next post. I will not have to wonder about it daily. 2nd, I am glad to hear that your wrist all healed. 3rd, it is my pleasure to write a few lines of comment. You are the one who is doing all the work. 4th, it is the twists and turns that make this story fascinating. 5th, angst is good, it just makes it so much sweeter when A & D got together. Yep, another great chapter! Thank you for having Kristen discovering the cocaine. I thought for sure by now they would have better trust between them. Guess not, so here we go again. I think it is rather difficult not to react in these jealousy situations. They could fight a little bit longer, but please not too long. I love the dialogues in this chapter, even the ones between Derek & Kristen. Now Roxy had every arrow pointing in her direction. If I were her, I would have stopped messing with David or Bobby. Can’t wait to see if she could dig herself out of all her trouble she created. Thanks again and I’ll be here for Ch.78.
Sheesh, even MORE jealousy? Seriously, just break them up so they can work their own shit out first. They just seem to be talking in huge circles and never working anything out, and it all goes back to the same points over and over and over again. I mean, it’s bad enough to have people stalking them and wishing them dead, isn’t it? Lol. It’s still a great story, no matter how over the top you make it. Good job.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Brteyes is back again:-) Damn, I missed this update. Loved those tense dialoguesin this chapter. Epecially the combo between Dana, Al and Kristen. If I were Al I’d be suspiciousas hell even more ’cause she overheard the last part, the most interesting part actually. Dana’slying when she claims that she didn’t recognize that it wasn’t Al she kissed back. In hersubconsciousness she wanted to kiss Kristen. And I do believe that they should try it out. In thecurrent situation Al’s not right for Dana. More fights is what I see in the future. Al’s not trustingKristen and Dana has a lot of issues with Roxy. No matter how hard Al and Dana try these two women influenced their lives…and not always in a better way. As much as they love each other both of themwon’t ever forget what happened. The thing with Al and Roxy’s still too fresh on Dana’s mind. This dream Danahad proved it. I can’t blame Dana for being that doubtful towards Al’s feelings for she might still>be attracted to Roxy. This chapter proved it even more to me. Although Al assures Dana that she’s theonly one for her she can’t and won’t think less of Roxy even though she has enough evidence. Al needs to make the decision who she wants to be with. Regardless of who she might pick in the end she needs tolet go of the other. She can’t have both, that’s for sure. Dana’s on the right way by doing research about Roxy. I’m sure, there’s still more to discover about this complex character. I do understandwhy most of your readers hate Roxy. There are times I’d love to kick her ass as well but I’d feelbad afterwards. I’m curious as to how Kristen’s going to pay her everything back. She won’t kill her hopefully….nah, Kristen’s too much of a softie to do that. But in love and war everything’s allowed. She’s a woman after all and we all know she has enough potential to show her evil side. Theonly obstacle is her pregnancy. I truly hope she won’t lose her baby while pursuing this case. It wouldbe very malicious if it came down to that. Roxy’s going to have a hard time. Everyone’s against her, even the Gambino’s. She needs someone she can confide in. Al seems to be the only person who can getto the real Roxy. What is Bobby planning? I smell more hidden secrets there. Guess I have to waitand see what happens. Roxy and David would be a very nice couple, don’t you think? I missed him in thischapter but I know he’ll come back in your future installments. Also would like to see Roxy in jailfor a couple days. I can imagine her in a prisoner outfit….orange is a nice color, don’t you think so?It’s a huge release that you would never put gum in my hair, lol. I appreciate that. Can’t guaranteethat I could resist though, lol. There’s a mile high club? I’d join it immediately. Just need someoneto have some fun with me. Are you in? lol Thank you for this wonderfully written chapter, darlin’. Youknow how to keep me captive. I’m hooked for life. Even if I wanted to I could never quit reading yourstory. It’s too marvelous with its twists and spins, my dear. Oh, and let’s not forget about the smut, lol.Although it would be nice being tortured by you. Whatever you want to express with it….Please post soon. I’ll be waiting…..
OK. Another great chapter. I’m with Dana on this one. Is Alice fucking blind or what? Why won’t she see that Roxy is evil and she must be destroyed!! She’s been given proof of her wrong doing and yet she still defends her!! I think Dana needs to pay Roxy another drunken visit and beat her ass down again. Then she needs to go back home and slap some sense into her woman!! I can understand where Alice is coming from about the kiss with Kristen but anyone can clearly see that Dana only wants Alice. At least I can see that. Kristen needs to stay the hell away from Dana and let Dana concentrate on Alice. Maybe they need some time apart from each other to get their heads on staright. But not too much time because my poor Danish heart wouldn’t be able to handle it. Anyway I’m still waiting for David to bring on the pain and suffering for Miss Roxy because I’ve had about enough of her and her obsession with Alice. But I have to be honest when I say that Alice is the problem where Roxy is concerned because she only encourages her. She needs to just cut her loose once and for all. Anyway I can’t wait for your next post.
I’m not quite sure how I feel about this chapter. Probably not the answer that you want to hear, but again, it feels like a set-up …. lots of little teases and exposition. You have a way of creating this bizarre tension and I find myself waiting for the other shoe to drop, only to find out it was really a grenade all along. I’m glad to hear that you are considering my idea for your story and I can see where that would fit into the future, hopefully the near future. And while I certainly do enjoy a good and steamy scene, I have no issues, or at least relatively little issues reading a non NC-17 update. While I like the fact that there was honesty in this update, I still feel like Alice & Dana just don’t know how to communicate with one another. Before they were trying to spare the other’s feelings, so they hide things, then they became dishonest and hide things, now it seems as if they really don’t trust one another, as much as they are testing one another. Some bonds are beyond repair and I’d hate to see how close you really get to that line.
Alice, Alice…shakes head… either are you really naïve or you are in love with Roxy. Seriously Alice you know Roxy in the past manipulated you, you know that she tried to destroy Kristen’s marriage but you still give Roxy the benefit of doubt even when Kristen—who has never lied to you tells you she saw her plant drugs on Dana? I hope some point Alice finds out about everything Roxy has done. The whole Dana not knowing it was Kristen kissing her reminds me when Alice could tell when Roxy was embracing her instead of Dana. I wonder if that incident is in the back of Alice’s mind. One of reason Alice is upset is she is project the feeling she has for Roxy on Dana and Kristen. The main difference is Dana, who was asleep could very well not know at first it was Kristne whereas Alice was awake–and let face it was and apparently still is attracted to Roxy. It is hard to see Danish working even after the get past their trust issues since Alice is apparently still hung up on Roxy on some level.
phwoar man oh man i just love this story so much drama cant wait till next chap :) goooood job!!!