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Do I know you? Part 7 (Revised)
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Previously:……Bette began to come to her senses. She took a deep breath and sighed "When did this get so out of control. When did I lose control?" Bette walked out the door.
Tasha, Shane, Alice and Jenny stood there staring at Helena then at the door. Jenny totally puzzled asked. "What the fuck is going on around here?"
Shane shaking and scratching her head responded. "It must be Cat Scratch Fever".
Part 7
Alice went over to Helena and tapped her on the shoulder. "Helena you are practically naked. Can you come up for air please?"
Helena looked at herself, "Oh my God", as she tried to pull her clothing together. "I am so embarrassed. How the hell did the happen?"
"Well, let’s see. You stick your tongue down her throat. She puts her hand on your breast. Hey, before you know it clothes start coming off."
"And I was just getting to the edibles." Grinned Candi who was not at all embarrassed by the condition Helena was in.
"Shit. I don’t think I can put this back together" Proclaimed Helena as she struggled with the straps and clips and hooks that made her outfit.
I’ll ask Kit if she has some thing to cover you up. In the meantime, can you manage to keep you hands and tongues to yourselves? Alice scolded Helena and Candi.
Helena got off her straddle position on Candi and looked around. Tasha informed her "She’s gone. She was a bigger mess than you"
"Hey, you told me you didn’t have a girlfriend"
"I don’t." as she continued to try to pull her clothing together.
"Well tonight is trick or treat and I still haven’t given you your treat yet."
"I think the party is over for Helena", said Tasha as she helped Helena up. "We can drop you home. I don’t think you are in any condition to drive"
"No I am fine. I just need to get some water"
Candi got up and began looking around for her friend. She searched the bar and came back to the girls. "Did any of you see ‘Sleeping beauty’? I came here with her and I can’t seem to find her."
Tasha responded. "She went out a while back with some Viking looking woman"
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This is very good but I think the first version worked just fine too. Excellent HOT fic.
What I mean to say is that the first version was in its way more desperate and quite sad and I actually thought it rang truer.
liked the first one too…but i also liked that H didn’t sleep with Candi, she’s kinda putting a stake in the ground about what she wants…go girl!!
I liked both versions really…but I like the fact that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this one because she doesn’t need that, even if she thinks that’s what she needs…she needs TLC from somebody who cares
The Helena/Candi hookup was hot, but I prefer this alternate version. It makes perfect sense that Helena would be overwhelmed by memories of her scorching encounter with Bette.
I agree with Halfofone here, I liked both versions, for different reasons : the first one was more desperate, and also more realistic, given the situation (after all Bette still is with Jodie, Helena is legit’ in having a one-night stand with someone nice), but the second shows an Helena who already made a choice : having Bette and being true to her (it’s a difficult choice, and I think it’s less true to Helena’s character, even if it probably is the ‘right thing to do’ — now, I think that, in both case, B & H will have a lot of things to tell each other tomorrow ;-)
I’m glad that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this version. After all, she and Bette had their first sexual experience together in that bar, on that night…if she really loved her, whether Bette is with someone or not, why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night? Thanks!!
Thanks folks. I agree with you totally Seahurst. I think Helena would not that night fuck someone else because she is in love. But she’s really vulnerable and disappointed to know that Bette is now with Jodi doing whatever.I’ll contemplate this one and try to be true to Helena’s character as I know it. I have to go back to season 2 to find a comparable situation after Tina wants to date other people it doesn’t take her very long to be hitting on someone else.Yet if you look at her with Dylan. There is no way she would have picked up someone in a bar after Dylan. Perhaps she’s growing. Perhaps. I know the answer to my dilemna. NOT!
“why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night?” Perhaps that’s exactly why she would – to erase the memory.
Caught up at last! Wow, what a tale, what a tale. Frankly, I’m torn about my preferred version! It does make sense that Helena would let Candi “boink” her for the reasons stated, but I like the fact that refusing her, even in that aroused state, shows a conscious effort to stay faithful to her deep yet not fully acknowledged feelings for Bette. What–no other chapter yet?