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Do I know you? Part 7 (Revised)
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Helena sighed. "I don’t know what happened. She came on so strong and I guess I got caught up. You told me she can do amazing things with her hands. Maybe I just needed a release. But at the time it seemed like the right thing to do."
"Maybe you have too much to drink"
"I would love to say that but I hadn’t even had a drink yet. Everyone here must think I’m a whore or something. God, I might never show my face here again. I am so embarrassed"
"Helena it’s ok. You might have just become a legend around here after tonight. You won’t have any trouble getting a date from now on." Alice joked. Taking a more serious tone, she asked. "What are you going to do about you her? You can’t be serious about taking her home. Helena I think you are vulnerable, horny, lonely…..Fuck it. What I am saying? Helena you’ve been stuck in a rut. Take her home and fuck her brains out. Fuck Bette. Oh I forgot you already did"
Helena laughed and hugged Alice. "That’s why I love you".
"OK kids! Is everyone ready to go?"
Helena looked at Candi and gave her a nod towards the door.
Tasha looked at Alice. "Bette is going to have a cow"
Alice responded. "Helena’s been in love with Bette. Bette seems to be content with Jodi. Maybe this might force Bette to realize she might just lose the best thing that’s come along for her in a long time"
Tasha hugged Alice. "Come on let’s go home. I think I’ve got some candy for you little girl."
"Oh I love it when you talk dirty to me. Will you spank me if I am naughty?"
"I’ll even spank you even if you are good." Responded Tasha as she nibbled in Alice’s ear.
Before they left the bar, Candi ran over to the bartender gave her a hug and retrieved a small bag. Helena found the encounter peculiar especially given events at the bar. Once they got into the car, she asked Candi if she had heard about the tryst she had with Bette.
"Would you like me to say I didn’t?"
"I know the answer already. Don’t bother. I am so embarrassed."
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This is very good but I think the first version worked just fine too. Excellent HOT fic.
What I mean to say is that the first version was in its way more desperate and quite sad and I actually thought it rang truer.
liked the first one too…but i also liked that H didn’t sleep with Candi, she’s kinda putting a stake in the ground about what she wants…go girl!!
I liked both versions really…but I like the fact that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this one because she doesn’t need that, even if she thinks that’s what she needs…she needs TLC from somebody who cares
The Helena/Candi hookup was hot, but I prefer this alternate version. It makes perfect sense that Helena would be overwhelmed by memories of her scorching encounter with Bette.
I agree with Halfofone here, I liked both versions, for different reasons : the first one was more desperate, and also more realistic, given the situation (after all Bette still is with Jodie, Helena is legit’ in having a one-night stand with someone nice), but the second shows an Helena who already made a choice : having Bette and being true to her (it’s a difficult choice, and I think it’s less true to Helena’s character, even if it probably is the ‘right thing to do’ — now, I think that, in both case, B & H will have a lot of things to tell each other tomorrow ;-)
I’m glad that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this version. After all, she and Bette had their first sexual experience together in that bar, on that night…if she really loved her, whether Bette is with someone or not, why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night? Thanks!!
Thanks folks. I agree with you totally Seahurst. I think Helena would not that night fuck someone else because she is in love. But she’s really vulnerable and disappointed to know that Bette is now with Jodi doing whatever.I’ll contemplate this one and try to be true to Helena’s character as I know it. I have to go back to season 2 to find a comparable situation after Tina wants to date other people it doesn’t take her very long to be hitting on someone else.Yet if you look at her with Dylan. There is no way she would have picked up someone in a bar after Dylan. Perhaps she’s growing. Perhaps. I know the answer to my dilemna. NOT!
“why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night?” Perhaps that’s exactly why she would – to erase the memory.
Caught up at last! Wow, what a tale, what a tale. Frankly, I’m torn about my preferred version! It does make sense that Helena would let Candi “boink” her for the reasons stated, but I like the fact that refusing her, even in that aroused state, shows a conscious effort to stay faithful to her deep yet not fully acknowledged feelings for Bette. What–no other chapter yet?