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Do I know you? Part 7 (Revised)
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Candi went out the front door and came back after a while. "I think she fucking left me. She is not answering her cell. I guess I’ll need to call a taxi. SHIT!! FUCK! I don’t have a key to the hotel room. I should have known better and kept my own key." Candi appeared truly upset as she was pacing the floor while kicking and banging on the chairs.
"Why don’t you come back to my place?" offered Helena. Her question surprised even her.
The girls shot her an "Are you crazy look?"
"No it’s okay. I’ll just hang out here and wait for her to return."
"Don’t be silly. I don’t live far from here. The bar is about to close. You can stay there until your friend resurfaces and if she doesn’t, you can sleep on the sofa, if that would make would feel safer." Helena replied tongue-in-cheek
Candi laughed. "Yeah I can see that I might need to be guarded from you."
Helena wasn’t sure why she was inviting this woman back to her place but she did not feel like being alone. All things considered there really was no good reason for her to not continue to enjoy the Halloween candy presented before her.
Alice came back with an old T-shirt that gave Helena some degree of respectability again. Alice was shocked to hear that Helena was inviting Candi home. She pulled Helena aside and asked. "Are you sure about that? You don’t know her. I don’t know what got in to you and Bette but she was behaving crazy too. You should have seen how nuts she got when she saw you nearly fucking Candi on that chair"
"She was?"
"Yes. I had to hold her back from coming over hear and kicking some Candi-ass. You did something to her tonight. When she first saw you she must have had an adrenaline surge. She almost passed out. I’ve never seen her like that. It was like she was possessed or something."
"Yeah, she did behave like a woman possessed." Helena said as she drifted off reflecting on their encounter. "We had a moment."
"A moment!! From what I heard, the two of you were fucking at the bar."
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This is very good but I think the first version worked just fine too. Excellent HOT fic.
What I mean to say is that the first version was in its way more desperate and quite sad and I actually thought it rang truer.
liked the first one too…but i also liked that H didn’t sleep with Candi, she’s kinda putting a stake in the ground about what she wants…go girl!!
I liked both versions really…but I like the fact that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this one because she doesn’t need that, even if she thinks that’s what she needs…she needs TLC from somebody who cares
The Helena/Candi hookup was hot, but I prefer this alternate version. It makes perfect sense that Helena would be overwhelmed by memories of her scorching encounter with Bette.
I agree with Halfofone here, I liked both versions, for different reasons : the first one was more desperate, and also more realistic, given the situation (after all Bette still is with Jodie, Helena is legit’ in having a one-night stand with someone nice), but the second shows an Helena who already made a choice : having Bette and being true to her (it’s a difficult choice, and I think it’s less true to Helena’s character, even if it probably is the ‘right thing to do’ — now, I think that, in both case, B & H will have a lot of things to tell each other tomorrow ;-)
I’m glad that she didn’t sleep with Candi in this version. After all, she and Bette had their first sexual experience together in that bar, on that night…if she really loved her, whether Bette is with someone or not, why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night? Thanks!!
Thanks folks. I agree with you totally Seahurst. I think Helena would not that night fuck someone else because she is in love. But she’s really vulnerable and disappointed to know that Bette is now with Jodi doing whatever.I’ll contemplate this one and try to be true to Helena’s character as I know it. I have to go back to season 2 to find a comparable situation after Tina wants to date other people it doesn’t take her very long to be hitting on someone else.Yet if you look at her with Dylan. There is no way she would have picked up someone in a bar after Dylan. Perhaps she’s growing. Perhaps. I know the answer to my dilemna. NOT!
“why would Helena want to erase that perfect memory with someone elses fingers…someone elses lips on the very same night?” Perhaps that’s exactly why she would – to erase the memory.
Caught up at last! Wow, what a tale, what a tale. Frankly, I’m torn about my preferred version! It does make sense that Helena would let Candi “boink” her for the reasons stated, but I like the fact that refusing her, even in that aroused state, shows a conscious effort to stay faithful to her deep yet not fully acknowledged feelings for Bette. What–no other chapter yet?