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All you need is love – chapter 58
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ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE
Chapter 58
Bette opened the door of Tina’s room and looked at her lover. Apart from a wire monitoring her heart beat it really looked like she was just sleeping. Bette had expected a bruise or two but apart from a band-aid on her nose she looked perfectly normal.
Bette crossed to the bed and reached out a hand to touch Tina – she didn’t move but apart from that – again she seemed so normal. Bette pulled up a chair and sat close to the bed
“Hey Tina – can you hear me?”
Bette wondered if she could hear her – regardless she held Tina’s hand to her chest and started to talk. All she knew was that somehow she needed her words to get through whatever was keeping Tina asleep.
“Hey there gorgeous -well you gave me such a scare – but here you are and you look so good. Have I ever told you just how beautiful you look? You look so perfect – there are times when you just take my breathe away – I really don’t think you know the effect you have on me – really I just go weak at the knees when I see you. The first time you undressed – I thought I was going to faint – really I just had this lump in my throat that was so huge and nothing would make it go away. I wish you could see yourself the way that I do. You are a great person and a very loving mother and a fantastic lover. You just lack self confidence – that’s all it is. You don’t need alcohol – you need what you have now – someone who loves you without reservation. I love you without any if’s or but’s – that’s what love is babe and when you get well – that’s when I am going to show you that you are never going to be afraid or alone again. You and I are only just starting out on a fantastic journey of discovery – and it will be one heck of a trip with our six kids along for the ride. Oh babe – I love you “
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I’m oddly looking forward to reading about Bette breaking the news to the kids. Really solidifies her place in their lives. Hope Ollie lives and stops being a jerk. Wonder who would want to tamper with his car? Hope he isn’t involved in anything bad.
omg someone tried to kill ollie? sort that baa… out b4 his children get hurt…loved it.
Besides Oily being such a big wussy, he just doesn’t fit the usual pattern for guys offing an ex-not that it would be the first time a cop killed from jealousy. For one thing he did the leaving and is cozy with Paul. So I’m assuming it was someone he crossed in his role as detective who did the deed. Let’s hope Penny and company are made of sterner stuff and can protect him while he’s helpless.
Or did Oily owe his dealer?
What you can’t leave us here!! Are you serious you want us to wait, Ally please go back to that computer of yours and start writing the next chapter, God when did you become such a tease, that was great and so full of suprises, i am happy that you had a good day with your girlfriend, all the best Ally, don’t forget about us.love
im with funnyone i think he owes his dealer
im with funnyone i think he owes his dealer. great chapter post soon
Oh how I love the twists and turns of your writing. Thanks for the update. I love this story.
I wondered about the premise of Oily doing something to Tina when I first read the last chapter. I still have my doubts about him. He is still extremely jealous of Bette being with Tina, he just does not like the idea. I don’t put anything past him. Surely he did not want to kill Tina just hurt her bad enough that Bette would not want to be with her in a disabled state and also it would tear Bette up because of what happened to her late wife, and he could be the saviour and come back t Tina and the girls and still have his guy on the side. Maybe I’ve been with the Court system much too long and always think the worse about a situation.Someone will have to convince me otherwise. For everyone’s piece of mind, I truly hope he did not plan this and some meanie on the outside was trying to hurt him instead. Can we maybe have another post before next weekend of this story. Thanks for posting his one.PPS
Ollie’s dealings with drug dealers comes back to haunt him and he almost took Tina with him. I can hardly wait to see what comes next. Since you will obviously be busy next weekend maybe we can get a midweek post to tide us over.
now why would the car be tampered with..was it O’s car?
Holy cow. I still think of this as your “new” story and it’s at Chapter 58. Now, we have a mystery over which we can puzzle. Good. I love a puzzle. Thanks for another good one.
This is such a good and intriguing story. I’m glad that Ollie is hopefully (?) not going to die. He’s a jerk but provides an outlet for Bette’s sarcasm and attitude. And he was helping Tina find a cabin for her family. No good deed goes unpunished is not a good thing.
Holy crap…..a new twist.
Another great update Ally! This is actually really weird to read as I was in a pretty bad car crash 2 days ago. My cars a write off but I tell you something, it saved my life. Both airbags did their job and I got out with only a few bumps. Keep up the good work!
I knew their was more drama to come – lovely seen with Tina waking up – you are so great.
The plot thickens! I’m stting here having a good chuckle – Ally you are such a drama queen…you just can’t help yourself, can you?
First of all I’m with Helena, Bette needs to stop delaying and go on and as Tina to marry her. YES, in front of their children the first night that she gets home from the hospital. I don;t think that Ollie was behind the car tampering, because he has too much to lose. He would lose his family because his daughters would NEVER forigve him and Paul would leave him. Ollie is stubborn, slow to come around and a number of other things, but he is not Stupid when it comes to his daughters and they need both him and Paul in their lives. I think that this is entirly work related and being a cope dealing with criminals and drugs can get complicated. GREAT job here Ally :o).
YIKES!!!! HMH …. DAM that Ollie!!! Couldn’t he have just stayed out of trouble!! PPS.. thank you
Thanks god Tina is awake and ok now. Now let see how Bette gonna break the news to the kids. I think Ollie is know something that make his dealer killing him. Anyway please post more, thanks!
caught up. hmmm, the plot thickens. thanks.
Hum, I wondered who tampered with that car… the two people I’m suspecting, it’s so perverse it might be true, and that would be awful if it was. So hopefully it’s some scummy criminal and not either of the people I’m dreading it is. I’m very glad Tina woke up with no ill effects, and for his daughters’ sakes, I hope Ollie’s okay. Thanks for the great update, ally, cheers.
Am I 1st?
Oh crud! This is not good. But I’m happy Tina is awake and well.
We’re glad that Tina is Ok. Our guess is that Ollie’s car was tampered by some drug dealers. We also think that Bette should propose Tina to marry her as soon as she is home. Have a good time with C and post whenever you can. Hs & Ks – Lucero & Marsha
HeY Ally, Thank you for bringing Tina back to Bette. Their love is something so special. Sweet to hear that Ollie is on the mend and fighting for his life. The girls need him. Helena was the perfect friend there, gently supporting Bette and reassuring her that things would improve yet not letting Bette wallow in self-pity. Awesome to then have Tina comfort Bette. They have many things to work through but are both ih it together and being open with their emotions. I can see a proposal and weeding wiht a house move or two in the near future. Thank you so much for this entertaining and exciting drama. Oooh! And was the car tampered with… by whom??? Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.