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Closure – Chapter 6
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The gang and Jackie were sitting on the various sofas and chairs in the living room discussing the movies that came out that weekend. Jackie didn’t add much to the conversation, but, everyone noticed that Alice would always look to her for approval prior to talking. This was worrisome to her friends because Alice was never one to curtail her talking or opinions. Jackie also seemed to always have at least one hand on the writer.
Time for the second plan…
“Jackie?” Bette called from the kitchen “Do you think this wine you brought needs to be decanted?” Jackie rolled her eyes and mumbled to Alice “Wine connoisseur, my ass.” Alice grinned as Jackie got up off the sofa to move towards the kitchen. Jackie looked Alice dead in the eyes and said “I’ll be right back, babe.” And then gave her a kiss on the lips. Alice watched her until she was out of site in the kitchen.
Dana was sitting and talking to Kit. Or trying to carry on a conversation. She could not tell you anything they had talked about. Her attention was so attuned to Alice. She was watching her behavior and reactions and did not like what she was seeing.
Alice didn’t seem like herself at all. She seemed like an extension of Jackie. And Jackie treated her more like a pet than as a partner. The most disturbing thing was that Alice was putting up with it. Dana didn’t think she needed to see much more before she put in her vote to get Alice out of this relationship.
Alice actually felt momentarily abandoned when Jackie left for the kitchen and hoped her girlfriend would be back soon. That feeling lifted somewhat when Shane peeled away from Carmen and sat down in Jackie’s vacated seat.
“She’ll be right back…”
“No worries. I’ll move when she does. I just get tired of screaming across the room to you.” Shane grinned. “I read your article about sex and the political party. I thought it was very well written.”
Shane was thrilled at the glint of “old Alice” that came into the writer’s eyes. “Why is it curious to me that the only article of mine you have read is the one that was in Playboy Magazine?” Both Shane and Alice started laughing.
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thx for the post can’t wait to read more! i hope their plan works and dana gets true to alice!!
Grabs Magoose by the collar and shakes lightly* You are evil for the cliffy. Dana should just grab Al by the waist and kiss her. GET ON WITH THE DEATH OF JACKIE. sorry. I just need to calm down alittle. I had a couple red bulls today. Anyway I am head over heels in love with this story keep up the greatness that is the DANISH,that almost rhymed
oh my, it’s getting good…more please (and soon)! im loving this.
A “seemed like an extension of Jackie,” that did it. The gang must do all they could to snapped A out of evil spell asap. Nice work T spilling the red wine on J. They might as well trip her into the pool and get the stain out. hahaha. This was one hell of an intervention, again great execution. MaGoose, sorry to come across pushy about the length of the last post. Your story is so fabulous that I really do want to read more. I hope you will forgive my straightforwardness. It is already a gift that you are writing this and I am grateful. Anyhow, I can’t wait to read how D would do her part. If you can’t post until you return from your trip, that would give me something to look forward to. Thanks a whole bunch. Have a safe trip!
I can’t wait to see how Dana gets through to Alice
Oh yeah, soak the bitch! Alice is totally the puppet in this situation. Go Dana! Go get your lovely Juliet! She’s the love of your life. Get back with her.
Hello MaGoose, you got to love a conspiracy when you see one, all the girls setting themselves into the proper place to get this show on the road. I really do want to see a show down with Jackie, I would actually prefer that it was Bette that put her in her place because of the fact that Alice is her best friend, leave Dana to bring Alice back to her senses :p. You are really kicking this into high gear and I cannot wait for the next installment. Sincerely, JC (PS – I mean it I cannot wait please post soon, hmmmm call me impatient but I’ll check back in about 10 minutes, hehe, take your time)
Jackie surely needs to be bitch slapped and very soon…. lol nice story..PPS
A lot of planing went into that. Let see how good Dana really is. Someome will put her in her place. Tina is the one that can bitch slap, then Bette would be there to protect Tina is necessary. thanks
And when nothing is helping let The Portersisters take care of her….like it so cant wait for the next part
LOL oh man, are they working hard here or what. Alice needs some serious reprogramng, shes like a puppet/robot thing. Can’t wait to see what Dana has to do thanks for the post!!!