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Closure – Chapter 6
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“Well, I do read it for the articles…”
Shane saw that Alice seemed to be relaxing a bit. “Seriously, Al, it was very well done. It seems like things are going good for you right now. Your career is on track and you seem to have a good relationship with Jackie.” The end of the sentence came out as more of a question than a statement.
Alice was quick to defend her girlfriend. “Jackie is amazing. She came in and took care of me even though I was such a mess at the time. She really loves me.”
“Are you guys living together?”
“No. Not really. I guess… Kinda. I mean, I still have my apartment, but, I do spend most of my time at her place. It’s easier for her.”
Jackie was pleased to see that Alice was where she left her. She was less than pleased to see her seat taken by Shane and that they were in an animated discussion.
Jackie called softly “Allie…” Immediately Alice got up from the sofa and moved over to her girlfriend’s side.
Jackie wrapped her arms around her girlfriend and gave her a kiss. “Let’s go in the kitchen and get a glass of the merlot we brought.”
Shane and Dana passed a look between them. It was getting to the point where it wasn’t a question of whether someone would bitch-slap Jackie, but, who would do it first.
The gang decided to call the Hail Mary play.
Dana slipped outside to the far side of the pool. Tina stationed herself by the sliding door with Carmen and Shane. Kit was in the living room. Bette was in the back by the kitchen. Alice and Jackie had their wine and were moving back into the living room.
Bette called from the kitchen. “Alice? Jackie? You two have to see the new statue we got for the pool area. It was a steal.”
Tina said “Good idea, babe, maybe we should move this party outside. It’s a beautiful night”
Jackie and Alice moved towards the patio door. When Jackie was in just the right position, Bette called out “Dangit!”
Tina turned at the sound and doused Jackie’s expensive outfit with red wine. “Oh my gosh! I am so sorry! Come with me right now. We can get that cleaned up before it sets.” Tina ushered Jackie back to the bathroom as the woman was distracted by the red stains rapidly setting on her custom tailored outfit. “Kit? Can you bring us the seltzer please?”
Alice started to follow and was pulled aside by Shane. “You know Tina has it under control and the bathroom isn’t that big. Let’s head outside. Come on…”
Alice took one last look where her girlfriend headed off and then decided to follow Shane’s advice. “Um… OK.”
Shane and Carmen stepped aside to usher Alice through the sliding door. Just as Alice went through, Bette called out “Shane? Carmen? Can I get a hand please?”
“Al. We’ll be right out.” Shane eased Alice outside and quietly slid the door closed when Alice moved away from it.
Shane, Bette and Carmen each ran a finger along their noses — just like in The Sting.
It was up to Dana now.
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thx for the post can’t wait to read more! i hope their plan works and dana gets true to alice!!
Grabs Magoose by the collar and shakes lightly* You are evil for the cliffy. Dana should just grab Al by the waist and kiss her. GET ON WITH THE DEATH OF JACKIE. sorry. I just need to calm down alittle. I had a couple red bulls today. Anyway I am head over heels in love with this story keep up the greatness that is the DANISH,that almost rhymed
oh my, it’s getting good…more please (and soon)! im loving this.
A “seemed like an extension of Jackie,” that did it. The gang must do all they could to snapped A out of evil spell asap. Nice work T spilling the red wine on J. They might as well trip her into the pool and get the stain out. hahaha. This was one hell of an intervention, again great execution. MaGoose, sorry to come across pushy about the length of the last post. Your story is so fabulous that I really do want to read more. I hope you will forgive my straightforwardness. It is already a gift that you are writing this and I am grateful. Anyhow, I can’t wait to read how D would do her part. If you can’t post until you return from your trip, that would give me something to look forward to. Thanks a whole bunch. Have a safe trip!
I can’t wait to see how Dana gets through to Alice
Oh yeah, soak the bitch! Alice is totally the puppet in this situation. Go Dana! Go get your lovely Juliet! She’s the love of your life. Get back with her.
Hello MaGoose, you got to love a conspiracy when you see one, all the girls setting themselves into the proper place to get this show on the road. I really do want to see a show down with Jackie, I would actually prefer that it was Bette that put her in her place because of the fact that Alice is her best friend, leave Dana to bring Alice back to her senses :p. You are really kicking this into high gear and I cannot wait for the next installment. Sincerely, JC (PS – I mean it I cannot wait please post soon, hmmmm call me impatient but I’ll check back in about 10 minutes, hehe, take your time)
Jackie surely needs to be bitch slapped and very soon…. lol nice story..PPS
A lot of planing went into that. Let see how good Dana really is. Someome will put her in her place. Tina is the one that can bitch slap, then Bette would be there to protect Tina is necessary. thanks
And when nothing is helping let The Portersisters take care of her….like it so cant wait for the next part
LOL oh man, are they working hard here or what. Alice needs some serious reprogramng, shes like a puppet/robot thing. Can’t wait to see what Dana has to do thanks for the post!!!