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Closure – Chapter 19
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Alice and Dana fell into a routine at the beach house.
Dana would get up early, check on Alice, and then do a couple hours of treadmill and weights. When she was done, she grabbed some water and went outside on the patio to watch the ocean and play a game of “what if” while she waited for Alice to wake up.
What if she had never met Alice? Well, that was easy. She would probably still be pickling in that self-loathing homophobia.
What if she and Alice had never gotten romantically involved? Dana would probably be very unhappily married to Tonya and still lusting after her best friend like she had been practically since they met.
What if she had never left Alice for Lara? That one was one of the toughest. She knew that her actions were indirectly responsible for Alice being with Jackie. But Dana also knew that she was not ready to commit to Alice the first time around. She was too immature and inexperienced to realize what an amazing relationship she had. It took throwing it all away to find that out. And throwing it away almost destroyed Alice — first by the break-up itself and secondly by her getting involved with Jackie.
She cursed herself again for not being more careful. Alice had always been there for her and she let her down. There were so many points where she might have been able to turn things around and to save her best friend from so much pain.
Alice was safe now, though, and Dana intended to keep her that way.
Alice was doing better. Her injuries were healing and the daily therapy seemed to be helping her gain some of her independence back. She still had occasional problems sleeping, but, none of the intense terrors of that first nightmare. Dana slept lightly and went in to soothe her when she had problems during the night.
Alice was eating better, too. Dana found that if she presented food to Alice, she would accept it gratefully. Every so often Alice would make herself something and it made Dana so happy to see these small steps.
Jackie’s calls to Alice’s cell phone had stopped abruptly once she was served with the order for protection. Dana wasn’t sure if this was a good thing or a bad thing. Was she backing off, or, plotting something?
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this place is some place for dana to decompress or its a room so they can kidnap jackie and beat the crap outa her?lol ok nevermind. alice will have fun with angie, bette and tina. nothing like a child to make u happy!
Revenge is best served cold. There should be nothing colder than a jail cell.with some big strong Mama that wants you to be her wife,and anyone else that wants you. Let justice take it course. I just dont want the gang to get into tomuch trouble. I do wants to know what is in the bldg? Glad to see that the gang gave Dana some relief. Hope Alice feels good about this thanks
I agree with HF but maybe driving 16 penny nails into her skull or feeding her a fish hook! LoL great job, love it. Keep up the awesome work. PPS!!!! :D
No, it is not choppy at all. You writers often use the word “fillers”. I guess that what it is. The “what if” game was perfect. Don’t we all do that once awhile? Some thinking would do D good anyway. Glad to see the gang showed up with Angie. They were absolutely correct about the 24/7 protection thing. it was important that Shane got D out of the house. I hope the the gang could continue to take turns to give D some relieve. It would be good for A too. Now, should I be worried about this dungeon. Would it be the supposed “shed” where all the arsenals were stored? Before was all fun and games and I had lots of laughs. But I have to agree with bettyvhall’s comment. None of us wish any one of them getting into trouble with the law. MaGoose, thanks as aways!
Not choppy at all Magoose. Thanks for the advance warning about the cliffhanger but still, I wanna know what’s in that room. PPS! This was another great chapter, I love the pacing that you are giving this story, it’s very realistic, Alice’s healing process is going to be slow and I love that Dana is patiently staying by her side. Although she certainly needed and deserved this little outing with Shane…hopefully there’s nice things in the room?
wicked sweet ass chap. Glad the girls stepped in for Dana to destress. Of course first thought is sex when it comes to Shane but she wouldn’t take D somewhere kinky so I am figuring a boxing ring.
Did Shane set up a homemade gym? Complete with punching bags with Jackie’s picture plastered all over them? Because that, my friend, would be awesome. Seriously though, I’m glad Dana got away for a bit. It’s nice to see Alice taking baby steps toward recovery, although she obviously still has a long way to go. And why can I not stop feeling a big ball of dread in my chest? Please don’t let Shane and Dana get back to find Jackie already there. I love this so much, and although you leave us with lots of cliffhangers you’re doing an incredible job. Keep it up, and I’m glad you sent Dana off with a coat. I bet flights overseas in a cargo hold get mighty chilly.
I guess Dana does need the occasional break. When Dana had cancer, and Alice was her caretaker, Alice still needed to get out. And she does have other friends. Alice and Dana are good together but even they need the rest of the pack. Notsomuch in a bodyguard way, but in a simple “hangout, have fun, take it easy, moan and groan about work, have a life” sort of way. We all need that. And if Dana does happen to make her way back to the BDSM club, compliments of Shane, well…Let’s dance.
What the fuck is that place? i want to know too! omg im so thinking of everything right now the one being that shane is going to lock dana in that warehouse! I no its not gona happen but its the first thing that came into my head!lol i hope alice recovers soon and her and dana get together! you belong up with all the amazing writers! thanks for this chapter magoose!
Okay. I think Dana needs to kill Jackie with a Flamer thrower. Or a staple gun. I really like the staple gun Idea. Anywho. I love the story still. I FREAKING LOVE YOU. I will update tonight probably. I have alot of time to right.