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Closure – Chapter 19
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Shane and Carmen’s contacts reported nothing out of the usual. Jackie was just going to and from work. This made Dana nervous. Jackie wasn’t the type to just give up. She found herself on edge a lot of the time waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Alice’s copy of the OFP was delivered by Olivia, the police officer they met the first time Alice went to the clinic. She gave it to Alice and explained how she should keep a copy with her and call if Jackie comes near. She also warned both women to be extra-vigilant.
Alice was overwhelmed when they got the copy of the OFP. It seemed to bring the reality of her situation to the forefront once more. Dana was scared that she might try to leave again and stayed very close to the writer. There was an alarm system in the beach house and Dana would set it every night. It gave her comfort to know she would hear if anyone tried to get in — or get out.
Alice hadn’t really opened up yet to Dana on anything that had happened with Jackie or her feelings on any of it. Dana knew Alice was working on this in therapy and did not push her.
After breakfast and getting showered up, Dana would take Alice to therapy. The counselor wanted to do a couple more daily sessions before moving to every two days. Dana now stayed in the waiting room during the sessions. The writer was more comfortable with Susan after the first appointment and did not feel Dana needed to be in the office with her.
Most days after therapy they just went back to the beach house and watched the surf or put on a movie. Alice felt odd being out — like everyone knew what happened as was judging her. But she and Dana did make some short detours to go grocery shopping.
Dana was overjoyed to spend so much time with Alice after having been apart for so many months. She was a bit worried about what would happen once she had to get back to her training full-time, but, she would cross that bridge when it came.
Dana talked to each of their friends daily. They wanted to visit, but Alice was not ready to face them yet. It didn’t matter how many times Dana told her that they loved her and just wanted to hang out.
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this place is some place for dana to decompress or its a room so they can kidnap jackie and beat the crap outa her?lol ok nevermind. alice will have fun with angie, bette and tina. nothing like a child to make u happy!
Revenge is best served cold. There should be nothing colder than a jail cell.with some big strong Mama that wants you to be her wife,and anyone else that wants you. Let justice take it course. I just dont want the gang to get into tomuch trouble. I do wants to know what is in the bldg? Glad to see that the gang gave Dana some relief. Hope Alice feels good about this thanks
I agree with HF but maybe driving 16 penny nails into her skull or feeding her a fish hook! LoL great job, love it. Keep up the awesome work. PPS!!!! :D
No, it is not choppy at all. You writers often use the word “fillers”. I guess that what it is. The “what if” game was perfect. Don’t we all do that once awhile? Some thinking would do D good anyway. Glad to see the gang showed up with Angie. They were absolutely correct about the 24/7 protection thing. it was important that Shane got D out of the house. I hope the the gang could continue to take turns to give D some relieve. It would be good for A too. Now, should I be worried about this dungeon. Would it be the supposed “shed” where all the arsenals were stored? Before was all fun and games and I had lots of laughs. But I have to agree with bettyvhall’s comment. None of us wish any one of them getting into trouble with the law. MaGoose, thanks as aways!
Not choppy at all Magoose. Thanks for the advance warning about the cliffhanger but still, I wanna know what’s in that room. PPS! This was another great chapter, I love the pacing that you are giving this story, it’s very realistic, Alice’s healing process is going to be slow and I love that Dana is patiently staying by her side. Although she certainly needed and deserved this little outing with Shane…hopefully there’s nice things in the room?
wicked sweet ass chap. Glad the girls stepped in for Dana to destress. Of course first thought is sex when it comes to Shane but she wouldn’t take D somewhere kinky so I am figuring a boxing ring.
Did Shane set up a homemade gym? Complete with punching bags with Jackie’s picture plastered all over them? Because that, my friend, would be awesome. Seriously though, I’m glad Dana got away for a bit. It’s nice to see Alice taking baby steps toward recovery, although she obviously still has a long way to go. And why can I not stop feeling a big ball of dread in my chest? Please don’t let Shane and Dana get back to find Jackie already there. I love this so much, and although you leave us with lots of cliffhangers you’re doing an incredible job. Keep it up, and I’m glad you sent Dana off with a coat. I bet flights overseas in a cargo hold get mighty chilly.
I guess Dana does need the occasional break. When Dana had cancer, and Alice was her caretaker, Alice still needed to get out. And she does have other friends. Alice and Dana are good together but even they need the rest of the pack. Notsomuch in a bodyguard way, but in a simple “hangout, have fun, take it easy, moan and groan about work, have a life” sort of way. We all need that. And if Dana does happen to make her way back to the BDSM club, compliments of Shane, well…Let’s dance.
What the fuck is that place? i want to know too! omg im so thinking of everything right now the one being that shane is going to lock dana in that warehouse! I no its not gona happen but its the first thing that came into my head!lol i hope alice recovers soon and her and dana get together! you belong up with all the amazing writers! thanks for this chapter magoose!
Okay. I think Dana needs to kill Jackie with a Flamer thrower. Or a staple gun. I really like the staple gun Idea. Anywho. I love the story still. I FREAKING LOVE YOU. I will update tonight probably. I have alot of time to right.