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Closure – Chapter 19
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Although they didn’t know it, Dana and Alice were the objects of quite a few conversations among the rest of the group. They were concerned that Alice and Dana were getting too isolated and they had serious unease regarding Dana. She was obviously under a lot of stress and had no real outlet. Dana had not had the chance that the rest of them did to try and process at least some of the rage that they felt against Jackie because she was spending 24/7 on Alice. They knew that she would never hurt Alice, but, they were a little worried about how that pent-up rage might finally get released. The girls decided they needed to step in.
One day, Bette and Tina showed up with Angelica to surprise Alice. She was overjoyed to see her Earth child and that easily outweighed any apprehension she had about seeing her friends. Shane walked in behind them.
“Al?” Alice glanced over. “You mind if I borrow Dana?”
Alice grinned and said “I think Angie and I can amuse ourselves for a bit.” Bette and Tina smiled and went to the kitchen to start making something for lunch. Alice and Angie took some crayons and coloring books out of her backpack and fell into an animated conversation that only the two of them could understand. Before Dana knew what was happening, she was being hustled out the door and down the steps by Shane.
“Shane! What the hell? I need to get back there.” Dana wanted to stay near Alice to make sure she was safe and also just wanted to watch that sparkle that always came in Alice’s eyes while she played with Angelica.
Shane grabbed Dana by the upper arms and looked directly in her eyes.
“We are concerned about you, Dana. I know you want to support Alice — we all do. But you are keeping everything bottled up. You need a break. Alice will be fine. I promise to have you back in exactly two hours if not before. I know you would do anything for her. I would, too. Trust me when I say that she needs you to decompress.”
Dana’s eyes showed defiance and then defeat as Shane’s words sank in. Shane guided her towards her truck and they headed off. The drove for about 15 minutes and pulled up to a warehouse. Shane produced a key and they went inside. Shane led Dana down a flight of stairs and through several sets of doors downstairs. Shane unlocked a final door and held it open for Dana to enter.
Dana was speechless for a moment. “What the fuck is this place?!?”
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this place is some place for dana to decompress or its a room so they can kidnap jackie and beat the crap outa her?lol ok nevermind. alice will have fun with angie, bette and tina. nothing like a child to make u happy!
Revenge is best served cold. There should be nothing colder than a jail cell.with some big strong Mama that wants you to be her wife,and anyone else that wants you. Let justice take it course. I just dont want the gang to get into tomuch trouble. I do wants to know what is in the bldg? Glad to see that the gang gave Dana some relief. Hope Alice feels good about this thanks
I agree with HF but maybe driving 16 penny nails into her skull or feeding her a fish hook! LoL great job, love it. Keep up the awesome work. PPS!!!! :D
No, it is not choppy at all. You writers often use the word “fillers”. I guess that what it is. The “what if” game was perfect. Don’t we all do that once awhile? Some thinking would do D good anyway. Glad to see the gang showed up with Angie. They were absolutely correct about the 24/7 protection thing. it was important that Shane got D out of the house. I hope the the gang could continue to take turns to give D some relieve. It would be good for A too. Now, should I be worried about this dungeon. Would it be the supposed “shed” where all the arsenals were stored? Before was all fun and games and I had lots of laughs. But I have to agree with bettyvhall’s comment. None of us wish any one of them getting into trouble with the law. MaGoose, thanks as aways!
Not choppy at all Magoose. Thanks for the advance warning about the cliffhanger but still, I wanna know what’s in that room. PPS! This was another great chapter, I love the pacing that you are giving this story, it’s very realistic, Alice’s healing process is going to be slow and I love that Dana is patiently staying by her side. Although she certainly needed and deserved this little outing with Shane…hopefully there’s nice things in the room?
wicked sweet ass chap. Glad the girls stepped in for Dana to destress. Of course first thought is sex when it comes to Shane but she wouldn’t take D somewhere kinky so I am figuring a boxing ring.
Did Shane set up a homemade gym? Complete with punching bags with Jackie’s picture plastered all over them? Because that, my friend, would be awesome. Seriously though, I’m glad Dana got away for a bit. It’s nice to see Alice taking baby steps toward recovery, although she obviously still has a long way to go. And why can I not stop feeling a big ball of dread in my chest? Please don’t let Shane and Dana get back to find Jackie already there. I love this so much, and although you leave us with lots of cliffhangers you’re doing an incredible job. Keep it up, and I’m glad you sent Dana off with a coat. I bet flights overseas in a cargo hold get mighty chilly.
I guess Dana does need the occasional break. When Dana had cancer, and Alice was her caretaker, Alice still needed to get out. And she does have other friends. Alice and Dana are good together but even they need the rest of the pack. Notsomuch in a bodyguard way, but in a simple “hangout, have fun, take it easy, moan and groan about work, have a life” sort of way. We all need that. And if Dana does happen to make her way back to the BDSM club, compliments of Shane, well…Let’s dance.
What the fuck is that place? i want to know too! omg im so thinking of everything right now the one being that shane is going to lock dana in that warehouse! I no its not gona happen but its the first thing that came into my head!lol i hope alice recovers soon and her and dana get together! you belong up with all the amazing writers! thanks for this chapter magoose!
Okay. I think Dana needs to kill Jackie with a Flamer thrower. Or a staple gun. I really like the staple gun Idea. Anywho. I love the story still. I FREAKING LOVE YOU. I will update tonight probably. I have alot of time to right.