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    Something so right – chapter twelve

    Story written on January 9, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette tells Alice and Shane.Tina mets Bette’s friends

     

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    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 12

    Bette was trying to decide whether she had made a mistake or not. It was very unlike her to be so indecisive but on this occasion she was questioning her normally reliable brain. The night before – still high about the prospect of spending a week in Hawaii with Tina she had decided that it was about time she came clean to Alice and Shane about the new event in her life. So she had called Tina to discuss it with her – Tina had been thrilled that Bette wanted to tell her friends – she had also said that she would love to met her friends again. So Bette had taken the bull by the horns and called both Shane and Alice – leaving messages on their answer phones asking them to meet her in The Planet at 12:30 – she needed to talk to them.

     

    Tina was coming over at 1:00pm to have lunch with Bette so this called for an extra half an hour off for the gallery owner – plus the additional worry of how Shane and Alice would get on with Tina and visa versa. Yes they had all met that first night in Liquid but that had been different – Alice was well on her way to getting drunk and she was chatting up Dana – so she had not taken much notice of the blonde. For Alice – Tina was just another notch on Bette’s bedpost -not someone worth getting to know because she was not going be around long enough.

     

    Bette turned her attention to a catalogue that had arrived that morning from a New York dealer. After five minutes she decided that all the catalogues she needed to study she could take to Hawaii with her – after all – it was going to be partly a working holiday for Tina so it would be fine for Bette also to take some work. There were going to be times when Tina would be in meetings so Bette would need something to distract her -not that the prospect of a beautiful beach with great weather and fantastic scenery would not be enough. It had been a while since Bette had taken a holiday – even less one with a lover -this was a first for her -one that she was looking forward to more with every time she considered it. Tina had sent her a email which she had opened as soon as she had logged onto her computer that morning – Bette clicked on the email and smiled

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    1. Wow, I don’t even know if I can express how much I love this one. Love. Can’t wait for Hawaii. Glad Tina could handle Bette’s friends. I hope you keep updating this one a lot.. because I’m pretty much checking the site for it religiously.

    5. Goldilocks in a teeny-weeny black bikini. No wonder Bette was shaken. I love how this story is shaping up, Ally. Can’t wait for the Hawaii update. But please find time to update The L Wing, too. Please don’t jump to when Baby Ella is already six months old. Btw, did you know that JB’s real-life daughter’s name is also Ella? Thanks, Ally. PPS :>

    10. Hello AllyE, That was a superb addition to this most wonderful of series. I love that Tina held her own against Alice then pulled out the rabbit from the hat and shut Alice up. Great to see that Shane was Yoda-esk as she saw the cennection between Bette and Tina. Shane read very syllable on Bette’s face as Tina appeared. Not a word was spoken but Shane apprecated the depth of love shared between B & T. I just adore your magnificent melodrama. The group scene brought out the best in the gang. Thank you so much for everything you write. It is a genuine pleasure to open each new post with excitement and longing and then be devastated when it comes to an end. The hope of a new post soon always makes me smile again. So a big thank you for all that you create. Your Loyal Fan.

    12. Ally, side stepping the whole “your a great writer issue” as to why we love this story….it’s Tibette in the beginning, at their finest, the “new love” and all that that means..hopes, dreams etc I think true Tibetter eat these beginning stories up…it’s only icing on the cake to have it come from you and knowing how well you do do things!!! Tks, Yes I love l-wing…but want more of this!! PPS

    13. AllyE what can I say if your not just fantastic, you must be pretty close to perfect!!. How on earth do you do it your writing is just “thud” just past out where words failed me. Now I dont know which of your stories are my favorite. Hell what the heck they all are.I guess that Bette hands are going to be shaking some more when she removes the tiny black bikini that Tina will be wearing but then it should not take long to be remove. Great chapter please post soon.

    16. I didn’t mean to not complain about L-Wing because I do love it, but as everyone else said B&T beginings are the bomb and we just can’t resist them so all I can say is more, more, more. A little side trip to L-Wing wouldn’t hurt though ;)

    18. Can I just say that you rock! I love this story, and I’ll complain if I need to so that you’ll give us another L Wing update! I love all your stories–you’re an amazing writer!!

    19. Just gets better and better Ally, definitely one of my favorite stories. Love your dialogue which is so perfect in all your writing along with the teasing, confident Tina. Bring on Hawaii and that oh-so-tempting string bikini!

    20. yay! I LOVE this one.. I don’t care if you don’t update for a few days L wing.. I just love this story!!! I have to admit, I’m a Tee girl but I can’t take out of my mind the idea of Bette in a tiny bikini… *thud* Take care Ally, xx

    22. You go Ally, I can’t wait to see how you write Tina in that black bikini after the pool sean. I bet your words will put good visions in our heads. Since you brough it up I would really like to read a post from the L-wing too. Md Oh ya, Thank you.

    24. I think this story totally ROCKS and it gets better every chapter. I loved Alice’s reaction to Bette’s news and Tina’s ability to handle Alice was icing on the cake. I can’t wait for Hawaii.

    25. That was good. Love B&T, if I were Bette, Im shaking too lol, damn Tina in that bikini is hot and can’t wait to see they on Hawaii. Alice is funny! Please post more, thanks!

    26. This story is delicious!!! I got nervous when Bette admitted to Alice that she had not yet slept with Tina, unless I was sure that Tina would be ok with that. Buy boy, then Tina shocked me with her boldness…Love that. I also loved the bikini exchange…Tina in the bikini, now that’s a real treat. Just like your posts for us. Thanks, looking forward to you posting as quickly as your fingers can type.

    27. Ally, I don’t complain about missing the L Wing because I don’t want to sound ungrateful for all the other wonderful stories you share with us. But for the record I miss the L Wing and Love & Pride quite a bit. Thanks for sharing!

    28. I love the confidence that Tina has in this story. She is challenging Bette with her mind & body. Doesn’t get much better than that. Okay, Ally. Bring on the lei’s. LOL!

    31. Oh abt other stories, I do love them all but I’m not pestering you to update them mainly because I’m so desperate for more of this one. Like TOTALLY DESPERATE. So it’s safe to say that I feel utterly conflicted, I want them all but I know you can’t be expected to spend 24-7 writing for us and hence have to choose wisely. Let’s just say, my desperate side won. So, more soon yeah, pretty please…

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