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Something so right – chapter twelve
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“Which island are you staying on ? “
“The main island, I was just getting my assistant to sort out the arrangements this morning – we are staying in our own apartment – access to the pool, private spa – is that okay by you Bette ?”
Bette smiled “ I think I could slum it “
“The apartment sleeps four “
“Does that mean Shane and I can come with you – really we would be no bother. “
Alice pleaded
“You really want me to reply to that question ? “ Bette replied
“It would great – look at Shane – look at how pale she is – she needs some sun and you heard her – she has always wanted to try out the surf. What do you say Tina ?”
Tina was laughing “Sorry Alice – I have plans for Bette that do not include anyone else being in hearing of where we are staying – its strictly private. “
“Tina – don’t you know how much Bette cares for her friends – she would be happy”
“Eh Bette is sitting here Alice and for your information Tina and I are going to Hawaii partly
because of her job and also so we can be alone and share some special time. Special time means two people – and for me – that’s just Tina and I. I’ll bring you back a hula skirt “
Alice looked genuinely surprised that Tina and Bette had put the block on her idea that they should all go to Hawaii.
“Alice – I want to be alone with Bette “ Tina said grinning “ And we might be LOUD “
“Ugh – enough “
Bette took Tina’s hand and kissed it
“Alice is insane – I told you that didn’t I ?
“You did – but you also said that she was really nice “
“You did ?”
Alice grinned “ You said that Bette ?”
“I did – I might have been lying though “
“My friend Dana often speaks about you “ Tina said grinning.
She was rewarded by Alice going red – Bette burst out laughing
“What’s up Alice – not one of your successes ?”
“Dana likes you “ Tina said “ You want me to hook the two of you up again “
Alice muttered something about needing the bathroom- she hurried off. Shane raised her eyebrow at Tina
“What happened between Alice and Dana ? “
“Lets just say something that I don’t think Alice would want broadcast “
“And you won’t tell ?”
Tina shook her head “Sorry – its between Dana and Alice and I don’t want to break Dana’s confidence – plus its not nice. Lets just say I can use it for a while to torment Alice if she gets out of line “
Shane saw how Bette looked at Tina – she was utterly devoted to the blonde – and the easy going way that she was handling Alice was just making Bette even more soft for her girlfriend.
Alice came back a few minutes later – Tina grinned.
“I bought you a present “ Tina said to Bette
Bette smiled “You don’t have to “
“I saw it and I wanted to buy it “
Tina handed the bag to Bette, she put her hand into the bag and pulled out a black bikini – it was tiny. The thong would barely cover the wearers pubic area and the bra had tiny straps and half cups.
“WOW “ Shane said
“JESUS “ Alice stared at the outfit “ Hell “
“You want me to wear this ?” Bette asked
“No – I thought I would “
Bette picked up her glass of water and realised that her hand was shaking – she was utterly under Tina’s spell. And it scared her but it also thrilled her. This was the greatest feeling she had ever had – and if the sexual confidence that Tina displayed was anything to go by things were going to get better.
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Wow, I don’t even know if I can express how much I love this one. Love. Can’t wait for Hawaii. Glad Tina could handle Bette’s friends. I hope you keep updating this one a lot.. because I’m pretty much checking the site for it religiously.
awesome as always, loving how T seems to have grown into the T we know and love already!
This really is a fun story. I love how you write the interplay between all the girls. And Bette in love is so cute. Thanks for the update!
Surfs up, Moondoggie! Hang ten! Don’t for the sun block.
Goldilocks in a teeny-weeny black bikini. No wonder Bette was shaken. I love how this story is shaping up, Ally. Can’t wait for the Hawaii update. But please find time to update The L Wing, too. Please don’t jump to when Baby Ella is already six months old. Btw, did you know that JB’s real-life daughter’s name is also Ella? Thanks, Ally. PPS :>
“So what magic powers do you have ?” HAHAHA i love alice and her mouth! LOVE how assertive tina is!!!
Can’t wait for Hawaii. Bette is gonna die.
I’m addicted to this story !! PLease update soooooon !! :-)
…*thud* The bikini… *dies*
Hello AllyE, That was a superb addition to this most wonderful of series. I love that Tina held her own against Alice then pulled out the rabbit from the hat and shut Alice up. Great to see that Shane was Yoda-esk as she saw the cennection between Bette and Tina. Shane read very syllable on Bette’s face as Tina appeared. Not a word was spoken but Shane apprecated the depth of love shared between B & T. I just adore your magnificent melodrama. The group scene brought out the best in the gang. Thank you so much for everything you write. It is a genuine pleasure to open each new post with excitement and longing and then be devastated when it comes to an end. The hope of a new post soon always makes me smile again. So a big thank you for all that you create. Your Loyal Fan.
love this fun story. PPS
Ally, side stepping the whole “your a great writer issue” as to why we love this story….it’s Tibette in the beginning, at their finest, the “new love” and all that that means..hopes, dreams etc I think true Tibetter eat these beginning stories up…it’s only icing on the cake to have it come from you and knowing how well you do do things!!! Tks, Yes I love l-wing…but want more of this!! PPS
AllyE what can I say if your not just fantastic, you must be pretty close to perfect!!. How on earth do you do it your writing is just “thud” just past out where words failed me. Now I dont know which of your stories are my favorite. Hell what the heck they all are.I guess that Bette hands are going to be shaking some more when she removes the tiny black bikini that Tina will be wearing but then it should not take long to be remove. Great chapter please post soon.
that was fun. really want to see b in the bikini. thanks.
Love this,Love how Tina is handling Alice .Alice wont make much off of Tina. Bette in love is so beautiful. thanks
I didn’t mean to not complain about L-Wing because I do love it, but as everyone else said B&T beginings are the bomb and we just can’t resist them so all I can say is more, more, more. A little side trip to L-Wing wouldn’t hurt though ;)
Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii! Bring on Hawaii!
Can I just say that you rock! I love this story, and I’ll complain if I need to so that you’ll give us another L Wing update! I love all your stories–you’re an amazing writer!!
Just gets better and better Ally, definitely one of my favorite stories. Love your dialogue which is so perfect in all your writing along with the teasing, confident Tina. Bring on Hawaii and that oh-so-tempting string bikini!
yay! I LOVE this one.. I don’t care if you don’t update for a few days L wing.. I just love this story!!! I have to admit, I’m a Tee girl but I can’t take out of my mind the idea of Bette in a tiny bikini… *thud* Take care Ally, xx
Can’t wait for Hawaii!!
You go Ally, I can’t wait to see how you write Tina in that black bikini after the pool sean. I bet your words will put good visions in our heads. Since you brough it up I would really like to read a post from the L-wing too. Md Oh ya, Thank you.
wow!! that was great. I love Tina’s confidence. Bring on the action on the main island!!!
I think this story totally ROCKS and it gets better every chapter. I loved Alice’s reaction to Bette’s news and Tina’s ability to handle Alice was icing on the cake. I can’t wait for Hawaii.
That was good. Love B&T, if I were Bette, Im shaking too lol, damn Tina in that bikini is hot and can’t wait to see they on Hawaii. Alice is funny! Please post more, thanks!
This story is delicious!!! I got nervous when Bette admitted to Alice that she had not yet slept with Tina, unless I was sure that Tina would be ok with that. Buy boy, then Tina shocked me with her boldness…Love that. I also loved the bikini exchange…Tina in the bikini, now that’s a real treat. Just like your posts for us. Thanks, looking forward to you posting as quickly as your fingers can type.
Ally, I don’t complain about missing the L Wing because I don’t want to sound ungrateful for all the other wonderful stories you share with us. But for the record I miss the L Wing and Love & Pride quite a bit. Thanks for sharing!
I love the confidence that Tina has in this story. She is challenging Bette with her mind & body. Doesn’t get much better than that. Okay, Ally. Bring on the lei’s. LOL!
can’t wait for the next chapter! awesome. i miss the l wing as well. look forward to your next post.
Ummmm…..can’t really type anything b/c my hands are busy picking my tongue up off the floor…..Tina/Bette….BIKINIS :) PPS!
Oh abt other stories, I do love them all but I’m not pestering you to update them mainly because I’m so desperate for more of this one. Like TOTALLY DESPERATE. So it’s safe to say that I feel utterly conflicted, I want them all but I know you can’t be expected to spend 24-7 writing for us and hence have to choose wisely. Let’s just say, my desperate side won. So, more soon yeah, pretty please…
Oh my god! Thank you thank you thank you!! MORE please…
Although I love and read all your stories, I think this one is the best.Bring on Tina in a black bikini, she looked hot in her bikini on the show.
Hi Ally – Can’t wait for the Hawaii rendezvous – bring on the heat. Thanks for the update and keep them coming!!!