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Alice opened the box and gasped.
She reached out her fingers and gently stroked the surface of the seemingly innocuous object and quietly as the pain within her built, she pleaded “No Dana, no, I don’t want it, it’s yours.”
Memories of her favourite day ever quickly flooded Alice’s mind. It was exactly one week after that incredible dance they had shared during Pride weekend when Dana had finally told Alice that she loved her. Dana had woken Alice up by gently kissing her eyelids. In her early morning slumber Alice was vaguely aware that the angle of the kiss didn’t quite make sense but still she stretched her arm across the bed seeking her lover’s body. When she didn’t find it she groaned and opened her eyes. The image that met her was one of her favourite mental pictures of Dana to this day. Staring down at her was a smiling Dana, her soft curls loosely falling over her shoulders. Her face and was completely relaxed and her eyes were sparkling with love and anticipation.
“Morning beautiful” the vision before her had gently said.
“Hey that was going to be my line”
Alice retorted smiling as she reached her hand up and tucked Dana’s tumbling curls behind her ear with her fingers. She softly rested her palm against her cheek and gently traced her thumb along Dana’s cheekbone, down the side of her nose to her lips. Resting her thumb there momentarily she finished her sentence
“So I guess now I’ll have to improvise.”
With that she leaned up on her elbow and as her thumb again traced the outline of Dana’s lips she followed up carefully with her eyes. When it had completed its journey she eased Dana’s bottom lip down slightly and lifted her own lips to meet those before her.
It was a delicate kiss. They both savoured the moment and smiled into the kiss as it ended. Alice drew her head back slightly and looked again at the sparkling eyes that now held desire along with anticipation and love. She watched as Dana closed her eyes, gulped and gently shook her head as she placed her own hand over Alice’s lifting it away.
“Baby, as much as I want to follow up that kiss and see where we end up we can’t. I have plans for us today. Now go get dressed in something comfortable and meet me in the kitchen.”
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That slayed me. Absolutely beautiful. I’m still crying. You are completely amazing.
Speechless….wow…sniff
Okay. You have made me cry. That was amazing. Thanks for the update. It was fantastically, breathtakingly, Amazing
I am at awe with your ability to turn an ordinary article into something more than precious. My heart was pounding away until the revelation. The last note brought tears to my eyes. I completely understand the message and the steps leading to the transition of moving on. However, deep in my heart, I feel that no one can and will ever replace Dana Fairbanks. I thank you again for writing another amazing chapter.
**WOW**
That was heartbreakingly sad, and I’m not ashamed to say it made me cry. But this was, beautifully done, and in a word, awesome. Thanks for the chapter.
:crying: So, this is it for Danish? Alice will just give her heart to someone else? If she really loved Dana, she won’t do that. You don’t give away your heart twice. You only have one true love. I’m too stubborn and too much of a Danish fan to accept that Alice can love Tasha the way she loved Dana. However, you are truly amazing.
OK. So I read this and was completely overwhelmed. I thought by letting it sink in and coming back I could write coherent comments. Probably not. Truly amazing chapter, wonderingaloud! Like many others here it left me with tears in my eyes. I also hope that Alice waits to give her heart to someone else. It may end up being Tasha, but, their relationship cannot compare to all Alice and Dana shared yet. I also think there is something waiting beyond this life and that what Alice and Dana had would transcend the barriers and they would be together again. Yes — I know they aren’t real people… ;-D Thanks you so much for this wonderful story. I really hope that, as this one draws to a close, you maybe have ideas for another story. You really are an incredibly gifted writer. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us!
Wow that was beautiful chapter….(admit that I’m not computer literate, have no idea what short forms mean and maybe I should change name to pleasewhatsgoingonwithcarm&shane and maybe have the puppy whimper…)
wow. Now that has me speechless… sniff I don’t want Alice to give her heart to someone else, but it can’t be Dana anymore. :( I know Alice deserves to be happy and she should. It’s just, *sigh* My Danish heart refuses to see either with someone else. Love is beautiful, but at times like these, it sucks. It sucks that they can’t spend forever together. Well, so much for speechless lol This is amazing. Thank you. :)
Not only do you find time to write an achingly beautiful story but you also educate…yes I googled the slang shorthand :)
AWWWW!! That was SO good! :)
Oh my god – just beautiful, don’t know what more I can say.