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Posthumous Wisdom (34)
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“Come with me and I’ll show you. We have to walk a little first though”
“So that’s why you wanted me in comfortable clothes huh? There was me thinking that you needed me to dress in something less alluring so you wouldn’t be tempted to jump my bones during the course of your mysterious afternoon”
Dana squeezed Alice’s hand and drew her towards her so they were looking right into each other’s eyes. “What makes you so sure that me jumping your bones, as you so delicately put it, isn’t going to feature in my mysterious afternoon?” Dana asked with a wicked grin. As soon as she finished she turned and started walking tugging a slightly flustered Alice behind her.
They followed a trail for about twenty minutes walking hand in hand stopping every so often to exchange soft kisses. Dana suddenly stopped and let go of Alice’s hand and said “Wait right here. I’ll be back. You’ve held out this long now don’t ruin the surprise.” With that she continued round the corner of the track ahead. Five minutes later she returned and walked around behind Alice. She rested her head on the writer’s shoulder and snaked her hands around her waist. “Close your eyes baby and let me lead you.”
Caught up in the moment and sensing the sincerity in Dana’s voice Alice uncharacteristically quietly complied. Dana gently walked her forward guiding her along the path. After a few minutes they stopped and Alice felt her hot breath on her ear “Now open”
Alice opened her eyes to a stunning view. They were standing on a grass verge before a rocky outcrop which overlooked a beautiful lake surrounded on all sides by the hills. The surface of the water glistened in the sunlight and the only sound was the gentle breeze rustling the grass. At their feet was the blanket Dana had brought from the car with a picnic laid out on top of it.
It was one of the few occasions in her life that Alice found herself speechless. She was mesmerised by the setting in which she found herself and overwhelmed with love for the women in whose arms she stood taking it in.
“Well, do you like it?” Dana inquired quietly. Still unable to find the words to answer with, Alice turned in Dana’s arms and placed her hands on either side of her face. She looked straight in to her eyes hoping to convey her love that way and then she kissed her.
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That slayed me. Absolutely beautiful. I’m still crying. You are completely amazing.
Speechless….wow…sniff
Okay. You have made me cry. That was amazing. Thanks for the update. It was fantastically, breathtakingly, Amazing
I am at awe with your ability to turn an ordinary article into something more than precious. My heart was pounding away until the revelation. The last note brought tears to my eyes. I completely understand the message and the steps leading to the transition of moving on. However, deep in my heart, I feel that no one can and will ever replace Dana Fairbanks. I thank you again for writing another amazing chapter.
**WOW**
That was heartbreakingly sad, and I’m not ashamed to say it made me cry. But this was, beautifully done, and in a word, awesome. Thanks for the chapter.
:crying: So, this is it for Danish? Alice will just give her heart to someone else? If she really loved Dana, she won’t do that. You don’t give away your heart twice. You only have one true love. I’m too stubborn and too much of a Danish fan to accept that Alice can love Tasha the way she loved Dana. However, you are truly amazing.
OK. So I read this and was completely overwhelmed. I thought by letting it sink in and coming back I could write coherent comments. Probably not. Truly amazing chapter, wonderingaloud! Like many others here it left me with tears in my eyes. I also hope that Alice waits to give her heart to someone else. It may end up being Tasha, but, their relationship cannot compare to all Alice and Dana shared yet. I also think there is something waiting beyond this life and that what Alice and Dana had would transcend the barriers and they would be together again. Yes — I know they aren’t real people… ;-D Thanks you so much for this wonderful story. I really hope that, as this one draws to a close, you maybe have ideas for another story. You really are an incredibly gifted writer. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us!
Wow that was beautiful chapter….(admit that I’m not computer literate, have no idea what short forms mean and maybe I should change name to pleasewhatsgoingonwithcarm&shane and maybe have the puppy whimper…)
wow. Now that has me speechless… sniff I don’t want Alice to give her heart to someone else, but it can’t be Dana anymore. :( I know Alice deserves to be happy and she should. It’s just, *sigh* My Danish heart refuses to see either with someone else. Love is beautiful, but at times like these, it sucks. It sucks that they can’t spend forever together. Well, so much for speechless lol This is amazing. Thank you. :)
Not only do you find time to write an achingly beautiful story but you also educate…yes I googled the slang shorthand :)
AWWWW!! That was SO good! :)
Oh my god – just beautiful, don’t know what more I can say.