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With that she quickly kissed Alice and got up distancing herself from the temptation to forego her well planned day out to lie in bed with the most beautiful woman she had ever seen.
Alice pouted. Dana could see in her eyes however, that although she was trying to make it seem like she was only pretending to be hurt, there was a hint of something more. It looked to Dana like fear, but she couldn’t work out why Alice would be afraid. So she put it down to the fact that her girlfriend’s feelings were hurt that she was turning down an opportunity to spend a Saturday in bed with her and quickly moved to reassure her. Standing in the doorway holding onto the door frame she smiled at the writer and said
“I’ll make you a deal. If when we get back into this bed tonight you think that it was a better idea to have stayed in bed all day today then we’ll spend tomorrow doing anything you want.”
This earned Dana one of her favourite rewards – a trademark Pieszecki smirk.
“Oh yeah! Well you better limber up Fairbanks because I’m pretty sure there’s nowhere I’d rather be today than in this bed with you, so tomorrow I’m going to give you a work-out that your trainer couldn’t even imagine”
With that she wiggled her eyebrows, jumped out of bed and headed for the shower.
“Are we there yet” whined Alice for the sixth time since they had started their journey.
“Baby you know I hate it when someone else knows something I don’t” she continued.
Dana smiled broadly and rested her hand on Alice’s thigh. The only answer she provided being
“Well we’re closer than we were the last time you asked now relax and enjoy the scenery.”
As Alice looked around her she noticed that they were indeed in beautiful countryside and she rested her hand over Dana’s and relaxed back into her seat. About forty-five minutes later, Dana parked the car in a small clearing.
“Come on this it” she said eagerly.
Alice looked around at the unfamiliar surroundings up in the hills and gestured around her saying
“This is what exactly?”. Dana opened the trunk and removed a blanket and a large cooler bag. She locked the car and offered her hand to Alice saying
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That slayed me. Absolutely beautiful. I’m still crying. You are completely amazing.
Speechless….wow…sniff
Okay. You have made me cry. That was amazing. Thanks for the update. It was fantastically, breathtakingly, Amazing
I am at awe with your ability to turn an ordinary article into something more than precious. My heart was pounding away until the revelation. The last note brought tears to my eyes. I completely understand the message and the steps leading to the transition of moving on. However, deep in my heart, I feel that no one can and will ever replace Dana Fairbanks. I thank you again for writing another amazing chapter.
**WOW**
That was heartbreakingly sad, and I’m not ashamed to say it made me cry. But this was, beautifully done, and in a word, awesome. Thanks for the chapter.
:crying: So, this is it for Danish? Alice will just give her heart to someone else? If she really loved Dana, she won’t do that. You don’t give away your heart twice. You only have one true love. I’m too stubborn and too much of a Danish fan to accept that Alice can love Tasha the way she loved Dana. However, you are truly amazing.
OK. So I read this and was completely overwhelmed. I thought by letting it sink in and coming back I could write coherent comments. Probably not. Truly amazing chapter, wonderingaloud! Like many others here it left me with tears in my eyes. I also hope that Alice waits to give her heart to someone else. It may end up being Tasha, but, their relationship cannot compare to all Alice and Dana shared yet. I also think there is something waiting beyond this life and that what Alice and Dana had would transcend the barriers and they would be together again. Yes — I know they aren’t real people… ;-D Thanks you so much for this wonderful story. I really hope that, as this one draws to a close, you maybe have ideas for another story. You really are an incredibly gifted writer. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us!
Wow that was beautiful chapter….(admit that I’m not computer literate, have no idea what short forms mean and maybe I should change name to pleasewhatsgoingonwithcarm&shane and maybe have the puppy whimper…)
wow. Now that has me speechless… sniff I don’t want Alice to give her heart to someone else, but it can’t be Dana anymore. :( I know Alice deserves to be happy and she should. It’s just, *sigh* My Danish heart refuses to see either with someone else. Love is beautiful, but at times like these, it sucks. It sucks that they can’t spend forever together. Well, so much for speechless lol This is amazing. Thank you. :)
Not only do you find time to write an achingly beautiful story but you also educate…yes I googled the slang shorthand :)
AWWWW!! That was SO good! :)
Oh my god – just beautiful, don’t know what more I can say.