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    Something so right – chapter thirteen

    Story written on January 12, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    I promise I will take care of your heart , it is such a fragile thing – you are safe with me Bette. I am not going to hurt you “

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

     

    Chapter 13

     

    Bette was sitting at a table in The Planet sipping a glass of juice and looking over a newspaper that someone before her had discarded. It was lunchtime and she was waiting for Tina. After how well it had gone with Alice and Shane Tina had asked Bette if she would meet Helena – after warning her that the rich British woman might be harder to impress. Bette had agreed and had spent the morning worrying about how her reputation would go down with Tina’s best friend. Bette hoped that Helena would see how much she cared about Tina. Alice had not been off the phone since two days ago when they had all met for lunch. Alice was full of jokes about the look on Bette’s face when Tina had showed her the bikini that she was planning to take to Hawaii. Ever since then Alice had been on the phone trying out new nicknames for Bette – she had already described Bette and Tina as “ the golden couple “. Bette was taking it in good grace but she knew it was going to get very tedious . She hoped Tina would slap Alice down with whatever story existed between Alice and Tina’s friend Dana.

     

    “Bette Porter “

     

    Bette looked up and regarded the tall, slim brunette with a raised eyebrow. The woman in front of her was wearing a dark blue dress with a black jacket over the top.

     

    “Do I know you ?” “Bette said

     

    “I know you “ the women replied

     

    “Well you have the advantage over me “

    “My name is Helena Peabody – but I think you know me as Tina’s best friend “

     

    Bette stood up and extended her hand to the other woman

     

    “Hello Helena “

     

    Helena shook Bette’s hand and sat down

     

    “You and I have met before “

     

    “We have ?” Bette didn’t like anyone being at an advantage over her – the face was naggingly familiar – she had seen this woman before – but where ?

     

    “We have been at several gallery showings – in fact I was at the opening of your gallery”

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    3. Well as one of those poor soles living in Canada we dont get to see the first Ep1 until the 17th. But also as one who could not wait and watched a few You Tube clips. I have to say I really cannot stand Jenny… and I agree with all that you have said. Great actress who plays her, but I still hate the character. And Jenny deserves a slap from anyone who is willing to do so.As for this chapter what can I say but other than just FAB!!! and I agree with some of the other comments here, lets get the party started in the big Aloha… So on that note… looking forward to the next chapter… PPS

    4. Damn, Helena was a bitch. Thats OK though because I kind of like it when I can dislike her in stories. Loved Bette taking her in stride.. and Bette showing Tina her vulnerable side. That is hot. PPS.

    9. yes, Bette has to accept that she is lovable and can keep a partner…that was funny and sad and sweet..great..I need to go back to the previous chapter tho’. It seems I missed it.

    10. I’ve loathed Jenny for very long. I just stop watching her scenes altogether. Problem is now she has many scenes with Tina so can’t skip those. Thanks for the update Ally. It’s fantastic. Made my day. I really hope the next one will come real soon.

    11. gotta agree with you on the Jenny front.. eug.. I’ve never been quite so disappointed as when she came on screen in the season opener, I was sure she’d drowned at the end of last season! Aanyhoo, jenny aside Awesome update as always.. loving the back and fourth between helena and bette in this fic, and of course loving bette and tina’s interaction… I think Bette might be growing more than Tina!

    14. Lamentamini – does blood come out of your ears at the prospect of having to watch any scene with Jenny other than one than involves her violent and unpleasant demise ?

    15. I hate Jenny, too! Have done for a long time now. She’s hateful, Max is just tedious (once past that uncomfortable testosterone induced macho-bullshit phase). Considering that Jenny is supposed to be an IC alterego, I find it curious that IC has made her so utterly loathsome. Anyway, why are you dragging this out so, Ally? It’s high time the girls gave each other the big Aloha.

    17. Jenny hater here too. Great story Ally. I have to say H was starting to be her bitchy self again, we all know what all that money can do for eveil, please don’t let us see that here. Md

    18. I agree with you on all accounts concerning season 5 and I totally hate Jenny too she is such a bitch. I hope Bette comes to her senses sooner than later so we are saved from a frustrateing season of what if. OH this was a great chapter I’m glad Helena is at least trying to give Bette the benifit of the doubt. Let’s get these girls on thier trip so they can bond a little more ;) PPS.

    20. Ally we all hate her she is a pain in the a$$, my God your story is breathtaking it’s so sensual and beautiful, please Ally don’t let us wait for so long for another chapter, you are doing a great job, can’t this trip come any sooner I am very excited.Thanks have a nice Sunday dayLove

    21. wow this chapter is really something else Ally, I liked them being frank with each other and talking about what they are feeling and experiencing, it was such a turn on, thanks Ally I am looking forward for the up coming chapter please make it quick cause I don’t think that anybody can wait any longer to see them together consummating their love.

    22. I find Jenny amusing, they are setting her up to eat some major crow, i know she is going to find that she needs Tina…so…On to this great story, I freakin love it!!! I’m glad Tina sees Bette’s vunerable side…this is what is going to get them through. I have to go but I am having a little fantasy, when I get home tonight, there will be another post from you, Ally!!!!!!!!!!!! Have a great day.

    23. jenny hater here as well but i love how well mia plays jenny! she does a fantastic job!okay this story just gets better, love bette patience, her openness and willing to talk,make sure bette doesn’t shut down, but ia dore that only tina see the sensual side of bette. love the balance between the 2. helena and bette are too much and surely drive tina crazy fi they don’t play nice. tina is still in for a rude awaken when the go club hopping!great update!

    25. Hey Ally, Nice to see Bette and Helena play it nice eventually. They both love and adore Tina so will do anythign to protect her even if this means all out war. Thaknfully T was there to broker a truce. Interesting tmies ahead as we see Tina blossom into the wonderful partner and gay lady she can be. As Bette adapts to being in a long term relationship and fight her demons re committment and saying “I love you”. This is not something to be taken lightly as Bette ain’t no five cent gigolo who can spill this words like breathing. Can’t wait. Many thanks for you continued wonderful writing and awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.

    26. Bette and Helena having an Alpha match was fantastic. I think Bette needs Helena to make sure she doesn’t get complacent about how special Tina and her love truly is. I am so glad that Tina sees how vulnerable Bette is and finds a way to reach her through the layers. TOTALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER

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