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Something so right – chapter thirteen
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“So to finding out that she is dating the biggest and most fierce beast in West Hollywood has concerned me “
“I don’t regard myself as a fierce beast “ Bette replied
“Your reputation speaks to that “
“I am not my reputation as I would imagine you would know to your cost “
“Meaning ?” Helena shot back
“Well Peggy has told me that you are – now how did she describe you – a spoilt little rich girl who hasn’t done a day’s work in her life “
Bette smiled with up most niceness – she wasn’t going to let Helena get the upper hand. She knew that she was good for Tina and was going to make sure that Tina’s friends gave her the chance that her friends were giving their relationship. Helena flushed briefly but smiled sweetly
“That sounds like the sort of thing that my mother would say about me . You have a reputation as being somewhat of an amoral tart “
Bette’s smile was fixed “ That’s your opinion – its not mine “
They both fell silent – Helena had promised herself that she would give Bette a chance. Whatever she had done in the past it was obvious that Tina was crazy about her – and she had helped Tina discover her sexuality. Helena relented a little
“What you did when you met her – not forcing her into sleeping with you – that was a really decent act “
“I can be decent – I am not totally amoral “ Bette replied “ Look Helena – I know my reputation – you know it as well. I have a reputation for being as you said – a tart. But like your reputation it’s a stereotype. You are rich – therefore you have to be spoilt and idle . it’s a one dimensional representation of a complex character – I am complex and I imagine that you are as well. I have always acted with total respect towards Tina – I would never do anything to hurt her – I know that she is special. I fully understand that you are protective of her – and I am sure that you have told her what a reputation I have – she knows – I have told her but sometimes she doesn’t seem to realise what that means. I am glad that you are looking out for her but Helena — all I am asking for is that you give me a chance. Give me a chance for you to see for yourself that I care very deeply for your best friend and that I would never harm her “
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Well I hate Jenny as well!!!! But I so love this story Ally!!! Thank you PPVS
I really like the story Ally. Great job. I hate me some Jenny. Season I loved her. Season 2 through now DIE BIAYTACH. Kepp up the great work
Well as one of those poor soles living in Canada we dont get to see the first Ep1 until the 17th. But also as one who could not wait and watched a few You Tube clips. I have to say I really cannot stand Jenny… and I agree with all that you have said. Great actress who plays her, but I still hate the character. And Jenny deserves a slap from anyone who is willing to do so.As for this chapter what can I say but other than just FAB!!! and I agree with some of the other comments here, lets get the party started in the big Aloha… So on that note… looking forward to the next chapter… PPS
Damn, Helena was a bitch. Thats OK though because I kind of like it when I can dislike her in stories. Loved Bette taking her in stride.. and Bette showing Tina her vulnerable side. That is hot. PPS.
Just wanted to say that I think all of your stories are GREAT. You are an incredibly talented writer!!
Well everybody hate jenny and wanted to slap her so bad lol. Love B&T, they are so cute and sweet, can’t wait to see more about them. Please post more, thanks
very emotional chapter in the end…is it time to go to hawaii yet?
i hate jenny also. waste of skin. very nice chappy. bon voyage. thx
yes, Bette has to accept that she is lovable and can keep a partner…that was funny and sad and sweet..great..I need to go back to the previous chapter tho’. It seems I missed it.
I’ve loathed Jenny for very long. I just stop watching her scenes altogether. Problem is now she has many scenes with Tina so can’t skip those. Thanks for the update Ally. It’s fantastic. Made my day. I really hope the next one will come real soon.
gotta agree with you on the Jenny front.. eug.. I’ve never been quite so disappointed as when she came on screen in the season opener, I was sure she’d drowned at the end of last season! Aanyhoo, jenny aside Awesome update as always.. loving the back and fourth between helena and bette in this fic, and of course loving bette and tina’s interaction… I think Bette might be growing more than Tina!
I can always depend on you for a beautiful tender story. Thank you
I hate Jenny too, so, join the club. lol
Lamentamini – does blood come out of your ears at the prospect of having to watch any scene with Jenny other than one than involves her violent and unpleasant demise ?
I hate Jenny, too! Have done for a long time now. She’s hateful, Max is just tedious (once past that uncomfortable testosterone induced macho-bullshit phase). Considering that Jenny is supposed to be an IC alterego, I find it curious that IC has made her so utterly loathsome. Anyway, why are you dragging this out so, Ally? It’s high time the girls gave each other the big Aloha.
No bloodshed at lunch. That’s a good thing. Even after enjoying this chapter thoroughly, I still hate Jenny.
Jenny hater here too. Great story Ally. I have to say H was starting to be her bitchy self again, we all know what all that money can do for eveil, please don’t let us see that here. Md
I agree with you on all accounts concerning season 5 and I totally hate Jenny too she is such a bitch. I hope Bette comes to her senses sooner than later so we are saved from a frustrateing season of what if. OH this was a great chapter I’m glad Helena is at least trying to give Bette the benifit of the doubt. Let’s get these girls on thier trip so they can bond a little more ;) PPS.
I’m desperate glad to read another chapter of your fanfic. Thanks!! Love your Bette and Tina.Hope you’ll post next chapter very soon.
Ally we all hate her she is a pain in the a$$, my God your story is breathtaking it’s so sensual and beautiful, please Ally don’t let us wait for so long for another chapter, you are doing a great job, can’t this trip come any sooner I am very excited.Thanks have a nice Sunday dayLove
wow this chapter is really something else Ally, I liked them being frank with each other and talking about what they are feeling and experiencing, it was such a turn on, thanks Ally I am looking forward for the up coming chapter please make it quick cause I don’t think that anybody can wait any longer to see them together consummating their love.
I find Jenny amusing, they are setting her up to eat some major crow, i know she is going to find that she needs Tina…so…On to this great story, I freakin love it!!! I’m glad Tina sees Bette’s vunerable side…this is what is going to get them through. I have to go but I am having a little fantasy, when I get home tonight, there will be another post from you, Ally!!!!!!!!!!!! Have a great day.
jenny hater here as well but i love how well mia plays jenny! she does a fantastic job!okay this story just gets better, love bette patience, her openness and willing to talk,make sure bette doesn’t shut down, but ia dore that only tina see the sensual side of bette. love the balance between the 2. helena and bette are too much and surely drive tina crazy fi they don’t play nice. tina is still in for a rude awaken when the go club hopping!great update!
Ahhhh, alpha Helena…the bitch is back! Love this story Ally, keep it coming please.
Hey Ally, Nice to see Bette and Helena play it nice eventually. They both love and adore Tina so will do anythign to protect her even if this means all out war. Thaknfully T was there to broker a truce. Interesting tmies ahead as we see Tina blossom into the wonderful partner and gay lady she can be. As Bette adapts to being in a long term relationship and fight her demons re committment and saying “I love you”. This is not something to be taken lightly as Bette ain’t no five cent gigolo who can spill this words like breathing. Can’t wait. Many thanks for you continued wonderful writing and awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.
Bette and Helena having an Alpha match was fantastic. I think Bette needs Helena to make sure she doesn’t get complacent about how special Tina and her love truly is. I am so glad that Tina sees how vulnerable Bette is and finds a way to reach her through the layers. TOTALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER