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Closure – Chapter 21
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Dana bought Alice a new laptop. She didn’t want to. Money was not an issue at all — she was more than willing to buy Alice anything she needed or wanted. Even things she didn’t need or want but that just made her smile.
The reason Dana didn’t want Alice to have a computer is because she didn’t want Jackie to contact Alice. Although Jackie hadn’t been heard from, that didn’t mean she might not have sent or would send e-mails — regardless of the order for protection.
Alice was restless about getting back to work. She was trying so hard to get her life back to some normalcy. Unfortunately, she had left her laptop behind when she left Jackie’s apartment. It had been in the bedroom at the time.
Dana was concerned that Alice might try to get her laptop back. She was extremely thankful that the writer kept her work on flash drives.
Alice was not the most careful person in the world with her computer and actually ended up killing two of them. One flew off the top of the mini and the other drowned in a sea of coffee. After the second incident, and Alice losing a bunch of work, she started to use flash drives which she kept in her purse.
So the laptop showed up and Alice was thrilled. She, of course, said she would pay Dana for it and Dana asked her to consider it a late birthday present.
Dana paced behind Alice as she set up the computer and made the minor configuration changes she needed. She fired up her e-mail and started working through the backlog. There was nothing from Jackie. Dana felt relief wash over her.
A couple days later, Dana came back from the complex’s court after training and found the mini gone from the driveway. I quick look through the house confirmed that the writer was gone.
“Shit. Shit. Shit!” Dana yelled as she looked for a clue. She calmed down slightly when she saw the note from Alice. It simply said she had an errand to run and would be back by 3. It was 2:30 now. Crap. Dana went to the courts at 11. How long had Alice been gone?
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Awwww. I want a Dana. Too bad she got lost in the mail. I think I’ll file a formal complaint with the postal service. It’d be great to be held like that. Anyway, this chapter was very touching. I’m glad that Alice seems to be making strides in allowing herself to open up a little bit and trust Dana. I’m worried about Jackie, though. And you don’t have to thank me for the support on this, you’re amazing at it and I really don’t need to support a thing, you do it yourself. That was my attempt at being witty. I know it didn’t work, but I’m running on very little sleep, lol.
YEY! I’m really glad that she didn’t go to Jackie. For once, I thought A came back to get all her stuffs and leave… Man, only if Dana can rub cream on my boo-boo and hold me!! It was very interesting!PPS
thanks for making alice call the therapist instead of calling jackie!! i’m glad that dana is back to playing some tennism she needs to decompress from this situation every day.but i wonder if jackie is trying to stay away or trying to find alice. i know shane has her spies out but… wondering…. my abuser dont go away quietly even with a OFP!
Cream rubbing…ooo…Dana cream rubbing…ooooooooer. I think we all need a Dana! Yay to A being on the mend! Dana didn’t seem to be fighting too much to get out of Alice’s bed heheh would anyone though really? Thank you for the well wishes =) another touching chapter. Thanks!
I’m mostly a silent reader, but I just had to tell you how much I love your story. I’m so proud of Alice for not going to Jackie, although I feel there’s more to come. I want a Dana to hold me like that too. Favorite line:” Dana thought that they really did fit together like two puzzle pieces.” This is what I always thought of Danish. Thank you for writing this. It’s beautiful and touching and you’re great.
This was a gr8 chapter,thanks for this.PPS
I just can’t say it enough, you’re awesome. I’m glad to see Alice taking baby steps and Dana being so protective. They really do fit together. Thanks for another great chapter. PPS!
I had some trouble following everything Alice and Dana said. But I was a little optimistic, for a very big change, over the email and where Alice might have been. Hope you’re doing good.
Ever since I read Roxy being confined in the basement cell in brteyes’ “Masked Feelings”, whenever I hear the word dungeon I could only picture Roxy being in one. I suppose all these Danish fanfics have really filled up my head. Just is a good or bad thing? I actually won’t mind if you lock Jackie in there. I am really worried about her lack of appearance. There had to be something up her sleeves. So so glad to these two starting to talk a bit. More baby steps please. It is always wonderful to see D taking such good care of A. Now that you have started to make them connect, please do not let us wait too long. Thank you again, MaGoose!!
Can’t help but be proud of Alice. Great chap!!!
I’m with MT. lol. I want this Dana too :) so sweet and caring. I heart this chapter. Thanks Magoose :)
I agree with MT I want a Dana too. GO DANISH Thank for the update magoose. Dana should just beat her to death over the head with a laptop. That would be pretty good