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Closure – Chapter 21
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She saw Alice’s laptop on the living room coffee table. She cleared the screen saver to find an e-mail from Jackie. Dana felt like her heart stopped.
The first part of the e-mail was a picture of Jackie and Alice from their trip to Hawaii. Anyone who didn’t know better would think the couple looked very happy, but, Alice’s eyes looked dull and distant. The smile on her face wasn’t reflected in them. The text of the e-mail was short.
Allie –
I’m not sure if you’ll get this or not. I know you want your space right now and I don’t plan to intrude. I just do want to remind you of the good times we had.
I know I treated you horribly. I have a problem. It is not you. I love you so much. Please, give me a chance to try to get back with you. Or at least give me the courtesy of formally breaking up with me. I have the rest of your stuff packed up if you want to come pick it up. Please just call.
I don’t know how I can live without you in my life. The past couple weeks have been bleak. Please, Alice, get in touch with me. If we can be nothing more than friends now I will accept that.
I miss you, sweetheart.
Much Love,
– Jackie
“Fuck!” Dana hissed. She had to find Alice.
Just then she heard keys in the door and Alice walked into the living room. Dana could not believe the relief she felt. She got off the sofa and hurried to Alice to hold her tight. Alice was surprised for a moment and then quickly sank into the comforting hug.
“You had me so scared, Alice!”
Alice shank back a bit at Dana’s tone and tried to get out of the athlete’s arms. Dana saw her mistake immediately and held Alice tighter. “I’m sorry, honey, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to bark at you.” Alice wasn’t responding.
“Honey, I’m sorry. I saw the e-mail on your laptop and was so concerned that you had gone to see Jackie.” Dana leaned back to try and read the expression on Alice’s face. She couldn’t. She released Alice from her arms and followed her over to the sofa. They both sat down.
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Awwww. I want a Dana. Too bad she got lost in the mail. I think I’ll file a formal complaint with the postal service. It’d be great to be held like that. Anyway, this chapter was very touching. I’m glad that Alice seems to be making strides in allowing herself to open up a little bit and trust Dana. I’m worried about Jackie, though. And you don’t have to thank me for the support on this, you’re amazing at it and I really don’t need to support a thing, you do it yourself. That was my attempt at being witty. I know it didn’t work, but I’m running on very little sleep, lol.
YEY! I’m really glad that she didn’t go to Jackie. For once, I thought A came back to get all her stuffs and leave… Man, only if Dana can rub cream on my boo-boo and hold me!! It was very interesting!PPS
thanks for making alice call the therapist instead of calling jackie!! i’m glad that dana is back to playing some tennism she needs to decompress from this situation every day.but i wonder if jackie is trying to stay away or trying to find alice. i know shane has her spies out but… wondering…. my abuser dont go away quietly even with a OFP!
Cream rubbing…ooo…Dana cream rubbing…ooooooooer. I think we all need a Dana! Yay to A being on the mend! Dana didn’t seem to be fighting too much to get out of Alice’s bed heheh would anyone though really? Thank you for the well wishes =) another touching chapter. Thanks!
I’m mostly a silent reader, but I just had to tell you how much I love your story. I’m so proud of Alice for not going to Jackie, although I feel there’s more to come. I want a Dana to hold me like that too. Favorite line:” Dana thought that they really did fit together like two puzzle pieces.” This is what I always thought of Danish. Thank you for writing this. It’s beautiful and touching and you’re great.
This was a gr8 chapter,thanks for this.PPS
I just can’t say it enough, you’re awesome. I’m glad to see Alice taking baby steps and Dana being so protective. They really do fit together. Thanks for another great chapter. PPS!
I had some trouble following everything Alice and Dana said. But I was a little optimistic, for a very big change, over the email and where Alice might have been. Hope you’re doing good.
Ever since I read Roxy being confined in the basement cell in brteyes’ “Masked Feelings”, whenever I hear the word dungeon I could only picture Roxy being in one. I suppose all these Danish fanfics have really filled up my head. Just is a good or bad thing? I actually won’t mind if you lock Jackie in there. I am really worried about her lack of appearance. There had to be something up her sleeves. So so glad to these two starting to talk a bit. More baby steps please. It is always wonderful to see D taking such good care of A. Now that you have started to make them connect, please do not let us wait too long. Thank you again, MaGoose!!
Can’t help but be proud of Alice. Great chap!!!
I’m with MT. lol. I want this Dana too :) so sweet and caring. I heart this chapter. Thanks Magoose :)
I agree with MT I want a Dana too. GO DANISH Thank for the update magoose. Dana should just beat her to death over the head with a laptop. That would be pretty good