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Closure – Chapter 21
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“Dane. Thanks for the concern. Sorry if I over-reacted. It has been a tough day.”
“I’m so sorry, babe — and here I add to it.” She reached out and was relieved when Alice let her wrap her arms around her and hold her close. They sat quietly for a while. Dana wanted to ask where she went but felt that Alice would tell her in time. She was just so relieved to have her home safe.
Dana was idly tracing Alice’s tattoo with her fingertips as they sat.
“Jackie wanted me to get that removed about a month after we started dating.” Dana fought her body to not tense up and to keep tracing the tattoo. Alice didn’t talk to her much about Jackie and she wanted to make sure Alice felt safe in talking to her about anything. Alice seemed to be in her own world at the moment. “I didn’t want to. It’s been a part of me so long. Anyway… She was angry.” Alice unconsciously rubbed her side “She was sorry afterwards and said I could keep it. She was always sorry afterwards…” Alice trailed off.
“I got that e-mail and I thought about contacting her. I’m better now, right? Stronger. I could handle it.” Dana knew she was holding her breath. She told herself to breathe normally as Alice continued with her story.
“And then I got to thinking about everything she did to me. And… And I couldn’t handle it. I called my therapist and she was able to get me in today.” She looked a little guiltily at Dana. “Sorry. I’m going to go back to daily sessions again for a while.”
Dana gave her a warm smile.
“I know I should have called you to let you know. I’m sorry about that. I just felt so weak and stupid for getting in this mess. I wasn’t ready to talk about it.”
Dana looked into those beautiful brown eyes and said “I am so proud of how far you’ve come. Never think that I feel anything else.” She gave her a kiss on the forehead. “Come with me.”
Dana led Alice out to the patio and invited Alice to relax in one of the cushioned chaise lounges. Dana moved another right next to that one for herself so they could hold hands. They stayed there and let the wind and the sounds of the surf wash away the stress of the day until it was time for dinner.
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Awwww. I want a Dana. Too bad she got lost in the mail. I think I’ll file a formal complaint with the postal service. It’d be great to be held like that. Anyway, this chapter was very touching. I’m glad that Alice seems to be making strides in allowing herself to open up a little bit and trust Dana. I’m worried about Jackie, though. And you don’t have to thank me for the support on this, you’re amazing at it and I really don’t need to support a thing, you do it yourself. That was my attempt at being witty. I know it didn’t work, but I’m running on very little sleep, lol.
YEY! I’m really glad that she didn’t go to Jackie. For once, I thought A came back to get all her stuffs and leave… Man, only if Dana can rub cream on my boo-boo and hold me!! It was very interesting!PPS
thanks for making alice call the therapist instead of calling jackie!! i’m glad that dana is back to playing some tennism she needs to decompress from this situation every day.but i wonder if jackie is trying to stay away or trying to find alice. i know shane has her spies out but… wondering…. my abuser dont go away quietly even with a OFP!
Cream rubbing…ooo…Dana cream rubbing…ooooooooer. I think we all need a Dana! Yay to A being on the mend! Dana didn’t seem to be fighting too much to get out of Alice’s bed heheh would anyone though really? Thank you for the well wishes =) another touching chapter. Thanks!
I’m mostly a silent reader, but I just had to tell you how much I love your story. I’m so proud of Alice for not going to Jackie, although I feel there’s more to come. I want a Dana to hold me like that too. Favorite line:” Dana thought that they really did fit together like two puzzle pieces.” This is what I always thought of Danish. Thank you for writing this. It’s beautiful and touching and you’re great.
This was a gr8 chapter,thanks for this.PPS
I just can’t say it enough, you’re awesome. I’m glad to see Alice taking baby steps and Dana being so protective. They really do fit together. Thanks for another great chapter. PPS!
I had some trouble following everything Alice and Dana said. But I was a little optimistic, for a very big change, over the email and where Alice might have been. Hope you’re doing good.
Ever since I read Roxy being confined in the basement cell in brteyes’ “Masked Feelings”, whenever I hear the word dungeon I could only picture Roxy being in one. I suppose all these Danish fanfics have really filled up my head. Just is a good or bad thing? I actually won’t mind if you lock Jackie in there. I am really worried about her lack of appearance. There had to be something up her sleeves. So so glad to these two starting to talk a bit. More baby steps please. It is always wonderful to see D taking such good care of A. Now that you have started to make them connect, please do not let us wait too long. Thank you again, MaGoose!!
Can’t help but be proud of Alice. Great chap!!!
I’m with MT. lol. I want this Dana too :) so sweet and caring. I heart this chapter. Thanks Magoose :)
I agree with MT I want a Dana too. GO DANISH Thank for the update magoose. Dana should just beat her to death over the head with a laptop. That would be pretty good