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Closure – Chapter 22
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Dana really was hopelessly, completely and totally gay. She had many bed partners between the time Lara left and Alice came back into her life. She became used to having a warm and willing body in her bed.
The last several days had been stressful and Dana was sleeping soundly for the first time in what felt like years. Even in her sleep, the soft warm body she was spooning filled her senses. Her dreams and the reality wove together into an erotic tapestry. Dana’s hands started to roam — almost of their own accord — over her bed partner. Her body was perfect with the form that Dana loved: curvy in all the right places. Dana started placing small kisses on the neck and shoulders of this fantasy girl.
Sadly for Dana, the dream and the reality started to separate. The first thing that struck her was that the curves she lusted after were covered by clothing. The next thing was that she got no response from the woman. Not only that, the woman was hardly breathing and lying completely still.
Then it hit her.
“Shit!” Dana thought and mentally smacked herself in the forehead. She slowed the roaming of her hands and moved them so they held her bed partner lightly around the waist.
“Alice?” Dana said softly. “I’m sorry, honey. I don’t know what I was thinking. I guess I wasn’t.”
Alice mumbled her reply in a resigned manner. “That’s OK.”
Dana responded firmly “No. It isn’t. I slept in here with you to just hold you and keep you safe and I go and…molest you or something. That is not OK. I really am sorry.”
Alice seemed to be in shock.
“I didn’t hurt you, did I?” Dana asked with trepidation.
“No. I just… I don’t know…”
“What, Al? Talk to me.” Dana gathered Alice back up in her arms and softly stroked her hair.
“It’s just that… It felt good. It felt gentle. But, the last time anyone touched me…they hurt me… Fuck. I don’t know what I’m saying…”
Dana thought she understood at least part of it. And she felt like the biggest shit in the world for making Alice feel bad. She felt Alice stiffen up and move out of her arms. Dana reached out to gently rub the writer’s arm. “Honey? Can I talk to you about this?” Alice lay on her side to listen to what the athlete had to say.
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Awww!!!! I love uncoordinated Dana, and she made Alice laugh, great job! Keep up the great work,I think that If Dana lived for a million years she would be right there to catch Alice’s tears. PPS!
Dana’s dreams couldn’t be more real if the curvy woman reached down inside her. Keep it going.
Gah. I’m falling in love with your Dana, which presents a big problem seeing as I’m already in complete smitten-ness with Alice. And as long as your Dana-clone will be sweet, have a pretty smile that makes her entire face light up, and feels me up in her sleep, I’m all for not having the original version. This is so wonderful babe.
As long as you are cloning, may I place an order too. But you have got to hurry. I am leaving town in a week. So, get going. This D not only is attentive, and caring, but also offers the sleeping perk. Who doesn’t want D? I love this sweet chapter. The thought of “Jackie is out there and is plotting,” gives me the creeps. Having said that, I am sure A & D are in good hands. Thanks a lot, MaGoose.
oh…. my…. Alice laughed!!! wow, this one was so funny. I’m sorry Dane felt Alice up. lol I mean good for Dana, but Alice ain’t out of it yet ;) gal lol pps I luv it
man sweetness and clutzy tennis pros, great chap! (Dana’s got to be careful though, can’t promise never to hurt someone…unintentional is just that,unintended)
Darn my englishness putting me down on the commentness! I need to come on earlier! Oooooer is a legend word ^_^ =0 Dana’s a STUD all these bed partners, although Al LIKED it =)(hmmmmm bit of sexual deprivation bubbling under the fragile state of Al’s mind me-thinks) sweet little Danish moment at Dana’s bruised pride XD lovely post PPS! Thanks ;)
Oh and yes of course DANA CLONE DANA DLONE DANA CLONE. Hope i’m somewhere near the top, I shall sit by my door with cookies waiting for the delivery rocking backwards and forwards. I shall also tape my eyes open to keep my attentive. I might aswell throw in an “I Heart Dana” t-shirt, short and socks combo. I do have nothing better to do o_O. =) Thanks again!
I’m behind bur will comment anyway Love Dana when she does goofy thing,at least she maded Alice laugh thanks
I don’t check in for a couple of days and I’m rewarded with 2 great updates…lucky me. You continue to develop this story brilliantly, I love that Dana’s instinctive response to Alice is so strong although I’m glad she realises she needs to tread carefully with her. Thank-you so much for such a wonderful story.
Amazing chapter! theya re so cute together, the classic fall out of bed. alice laughing, she is getting there!! :)
Hello MaGoose, I think this is really starting to heat up, we are seeing Alice realizing that maybe things haven’t been as good as she was lead to believe. I love that Dana is so protective of Alice even from herself just re-enforces her love for her. Great stuff you are rocking. Sincerely, JC
aw, this makes me heart Fairbanks more. wubx1000 thank you
this is my fav story every time i see it i get excited and then disappointed when it ends! i cant wait for alice and dana 2 get together!! please tell me your not going to leave them apart?! anyway thanks for posting and i hope you post again as soon as!
I’ve been a silent reader, until now. I just had to comment. You really had me cracked up with the: “That is why I only play on clay, grass or concrete courts. The bed sheet ones are too dangerous.” Great story!!
I think this is so cute. Poor Alice. I would be her Dana anyday. But anyway I LOVE YOU MAGOOSE. I love the story. I think it’s funny that in the prison season with helena the other night the womans name was jackie. Speaking of jackie time to die bitch. I just think dana should stab her with a butter knife. THat would be great.