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Closure – Chapter 22
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Dana got on her side to face Alice. Damn she was cute in the morning. Focus, Fairbanks, focus. “I had no right to do that to you and I really have no excuse. My stupid actions brought up some bad memories and I never meant to do that. You have to know I never want to hurt you. Do you believe me?”
Alice couldn’t help but think about the times she had heard similar things from Jackie. But Jackie said them after she had beaten Alice. And here was her sweet Dana saying them because she felt her up in her sleep.
“I do.” Dana was greatly relieved and that got a bit concerned when Alice went on to say “I know you would never intentionally do anything to hurt me.”
Dana understood that Alice could not yet trust her completely. It wasn’t just the brainwashing by Jackie, either. Dana had made so many mistakes during their relationship and hurt Alice so much — even though she never meant to. Dana knew that she could not convince the writer that she meant what she said about never ever hurting her again. Intentionally or unintentionally. But she would be sure to show it to her. She would spend every minute of every day of the rest of her life devoted to making Alice Pieszecki know how much she was loved and treasured.
Dana gave Alice a chaste kiss on the forehead. “I’m going to get the tub started for you and then make some coffee and a little something to eat. Just come down when you are ready.”
Alice smiled “Thanks, Dane.”
Dana had become a little twisted in the covers and managed to fall out of the bed as she tried to exit and landed in a big thud on the floor. Alice looked over the side of the bed “Dana! Are you OK?” She asked worriedly.
“Just my pride is bruised.” Dana said ashamedly.
Alice started giggling and then laughing out loud. Dana was amazed and overjoyed to hear it and started laughing as well. Once Alice could get her breath again she said “You have to be the most uncoordinated athlete in the world.”
“That is why I only play on clay, grass or concrete courts. The bed sheet ones are too dangerous.” Both girls started laughing again. It finally trailed off and Dana untangled herself and went to go get things ready for her friend.
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Awww!!!! I love uncoordinated Dana, and she made Alice laugh, great job! Keep up the great work,I think that If Dana lived for a million years she would be right there to catch Alice’s tears. PPS!
Dana’s dreams couldn’t be more real if the curvy woman reached down inside her. Keep it going.
Gah. I’m falling in love with your Dana, which presents a big problem seeing as I’m already in complete smitten-ness with Alice. And as long as your Dana-clone will be sweet, have a pretty smile that makes her entire face light up, and feels me up in her sleep, I’m all for not having the original version. This is so wonderful babe.
As long as you are cloning, may I place an order too. But you have got to hurry. I am leaving town in a week. So, get going. This D not only is attentive, and caring, but also offers the sleeping perk. Who doesn’t want D? I love this sweet chapter. The thought of “Jackie is out there and is plotting,” gives me the creeps. Having said that, I am sure A & D are in good hands. Thanks a lot, MaGoose.
oh…. my…. Alice laughed!!! wow, this one was so funny. I’m sorry Dane felt Alice up. lol I mean good for Dana, but Alice ain’t out of it yet ;) gal lol pps I luv it
man sweetness and clutzy tennis pros, great chap! (Dana’s got to be careful though, can’t promise never to hurt someone…unintentional is just that,unintended)
Darn my englishness putting me down on the commentness! I need to come on earlier! Oooooer is a legend word ^_^ =0 Dana’s a STUD all these bed partners, although Al LIKED it =)(hmmmmm bit of sexual deprivation bubbling under the fragile state of Al’s mind me-thinks) sweet little Danish moment at Dana’s bruised pride XD lovely post PPS! Thanks ;)
Oh and yes of course DANA CLONE DANA DLONE DANA CLONE. Hope i’m somewhere near the top, I shall sit by my door with cookies waiting for the delivery rocking backwards and forwards. I shall also tape my eyes open to keep my attentive. I might aswell throw in an “I Heart Dana” t-shirt, short and socks combo. I do have nothing better to do o_O. =) Thanks again!
I’m behind bur will comment anyway Love Dana when she does goofy thing,at least she maded Alice laugh thanks
I don’t check in for a couple of days and I’m rewarded with 2 great updates…lucky me. You continue to develop this story brilliantly, I love that Dana’s instinctive response to Alice is so strong although I’m glad she realises she needs to tread carefully with her. Thank-you so much for such a wonderful story.
Amazing chapter! theya re so cute together, the classic fall out of bed. alice laughing, she is getting there!! :)
Hello MaGoose, I think this is really starting to heat up, we are seeing Alice realizing that maybe things haven’t been as good as she was lead to believe. I love that Dana is so protective of Alice even from herself just re-enforces her love for her. Great stuff you are rocking. Sincerely, JC
aw, this makes me heart Fairbanks more. wubx1000 thank you
this is my fav story every time i see it i get excited and then disappointed when it ends! i cant wait for alice and dana 2 get together!! please tell me your not going to leave them apart?! anyway thanks for posting and i hope you post again as soon as!
I’ve been a silent reader, until now. I just had to comment. You really had me cracked up with the: “That is why I only play on clay, grass or concrete courts. The bed sheet ones are too dangerous.” Great story!!
I think this is so cute. Poor Alice. I would be her Dana anyday. But anyway I LOVE YOU MAGOOSE. I love the story. I think it’s funny that in the prison season with helena the other night the womans name was jackie. Speaking of jackie time to die bitch. I just think dana should stab her with a butter knife. THat would be great.