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Tina stepped out onto the balcony of her condo. She kept the area jammed with the pots that formed her herb garden. Out amongst the plants, she started to cut what she needed for dinner.
“Hello.”
Looking up, she saw a woman, shoulder-length blonde hair, rather attractive, sitting on a folding chair. “Oh, hello.”
“Sorry, I don’t mean to disturb the pruning, or whatever.”
Tina held up the plant. “Cooking, actually.”
The stranger looked puzzled. “Doesn’t look like much of a meal.”
“It’s basil. For seasoning.”
“I was already impressed by your forest. Now, learning that it’s practical, I’m doubly so.”
The condo’s small balcony didn’t have the same gardening space of the house. Then again, Tina didn’t have the same amount of free time for gardening. “It’s just a few herbs.”
The woman gave her a blank look.
“You don’t cook much, do you.”
“I guess it shows.”
“I need to get back inside.” Tina motioned towards the glass door.
“Of course.”
Noticing the hint of disappointment in the woman’s voice, Tina decided that maybe she should take a chance. After all, wasn’t that what Alice and Shane were always telling her? “You know, I tend to make too much. I know it’s rather late notice, but if you’d like to come over, I’ve got plenty.”
The woman gave a warm smile. “As it happens, I’ve yet to make any calls to have dinner delivered, so I believe I’m free.”
“Give me about 20 minutes.”
“You’ve got it.”
With that, Tina headed back inside.
Angelica was still where she left her, playing with the blocks. Just in case, Tina had the safety screen across the entrance to the kitchen. But with her daughter becoming stronger and increasing in dexterity, she wondered how long such measures would last.
“Mommy invited someone for dinner, Angie, how’s that?” Then a nagging thought hit Tina. What if the woman was an axe murderer, or worse? Perhaps she should have waited until it was Bette’s night with Angelica.
“Shit.” She looked to see if her daughter had reacted at all to the word, but the girl didn’t seem to notice. ‘Mommy needs to learn to watch her language,’ Tina thought. She picked up her phone and hit speed dial.
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You left it hanging like this?? LOL whata great start and tina needs to have some fun one in a while! :)
it sounds unaminous (sp). your kidding right. more please!!! thx
I am guessing that Bette has a key to Tina’s place and that she just got a taste of what it is like for Tina to see her with Jodie. Great beginning!
i hope it’s bette and she gets jealous…i’m interested to see where the story’s going
This is intersting and please post more, thanks!
TBC YES
Your story sounds interesting. It would be good if you develop more your idea. So far, it’s coming along fine. Yep. Please continue. PPS Lucero & Marsha – from Mexico City
amazing start. i really hope that you keep going.
Watch it was probably Alice coming over because Tina didn’t answer her phone call or something. lol Looks interesting so far!
Looking very interesting, hope you continue, hopefully its Alice paying a visit. Thanks
God I hope Bette doesnt have a key to Tina’s place. Tina needs to have a little fun once in awhile!
This is a great start! I think I like the neighbor since we happen to share the same name. I bet Bette’s the one at the door. PPS!!
Good start! PPS
Maybe? Such a tease, of course you should continue… It’s a great begining.
Oh please do continue. Glad to see Tina taking a chance and trying to move on. Can’t wait to see who came through the door, so PPVS!!! Thanks
I’m already liking this assertive Tina and the direction your taking the story. Also enjoyed your previous 2 snippets. Thanks!
Lol, Just when it was really getting good. I look forward to more.
Great start, pseud. I’ll be looking for more of this one when you can. Cheers
I’m guessing it might be Alice in her no sense of bounderies way. Or did Tina not have her phone on? Anyway, pity about the interuption.
tbc? ARE YOU F****N’ KIDDING ME?please continue straight away!!great start.x.x.
O.K. pseud, that was a mean place to stop. Of course you have to continue this story. I think that we might have a little Bette jealousy on the horizon…jealous Bette…you gotta love her!
omg is right!!! lol