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Tina took the bottle. “This looks lovely. I made a Thai-style stir fry.”
“That sounds ambitious.”
“Hopefully you eat chicken.”
If the woman was going to voice any dissent, she was cut off by a small intrusion. Angelica ran over, hugging her mother’s leg.
“Well, who’s this?”
Tina handed back the bottle and picked up the girl. “This is Angelica.”
“Lovely to meet you Angelica, I’m Karen.” The woman cupped her hand over her mouth as if to give an aside. “Do you think perhaps you can tell me your mother’s name?”
“I’m sorry.” Tina held out her free hand. “Tina.”
The woman put the wine in her other hand and gave Tina’s hand a shake. “Karen. Nice to meet you, Tina.” She looked past Tina to the table. “Will Angelica’s father be joining us?”
The question caused a light blush to rise on Tina’s face. “I’m separated from Angelica’s other parent.”
“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to intrude.” Karen’s statement sounded truly apologetic.
“It’s fine.” Plus, this helped Tina realize what the woman was truly digging for. “And her other parent is her other mother.” Tina noticed her guest’s slight smile that came with this revelation.
“You sound like a very lucky girl Angelica.”
“Very spoiled girl, maybe,” Tina said with a laugh.
After Tina got her daughter settled, and went to the kitchen, returning with two red wine glasses and a corkscrew. “Would you like to do the honors?” She was relaxing a bit with her guest’s easy nature, and willingly handed over the implement.
“Sure thing.”
As Karen set to work opening the bottle, Tina dished up her stir fry and rice. She brought the dishes back to the dining area and set them out on the table. “It’s not much.”
“It smells great.”
Tina took the stir fry and picked out a few things, placing them on a small plate prior to handing the bowl to Karen.
“Not very hungry?” Karen asked as Tina went to work cutting the chicken into smaller pieces.
“I never eat first,” Tina said with a laugh. As she spoke, her daughter was reaching for the plate. “One second, sweetie,” she said, giving the girl a small piece of chicken to keep her quiet. “I’m lucky to eat when it’s still warm.”
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You left it hanging like this?? LOL whata great start and tina needs to have some fun one in a while! :)
it sounds unaminous (sp). your kidding right. more please!!! thx
I am guessing that Bette has a key to Tina’s place and that she just got a taste of what it is like for Tina to see her with Jodie. Great beginning!
i hope it’s bette and she gets jealous…i’m interested to see where the story’s going
This is intersting and please post more, thanks!
TBC YES
Your story sounds interesting. It would be good if you develop more your idea. So far, it’s coming along fine. Yep. Please continue. PPS Lucero & Marsha – from Mexico City
amazing start. i really hope that you keep going.
Watch it was probably Alice coming over because Tina didn’t answer her phone call or something. lol Looks interesting so far!
Looking very interesting, hope you continue, hopefully its Alice paying a visit. Thanks
God I hope Bette doesnt have a key to Tina’s place. Tina needs to have a little fun once in awhile!
This is a great start! I think I like the neighbor since we happen to share the same name. I bet Bette’s the one at the door. PPS!!
Good start! PPS
Maybe? Such a tease, of course you should continue… It’s a great begining.
Oh please do continue. Glad to see Tina taking a chance and trying to move on. Can’t wait to see who came through the door, so PPVS!!! Thanks
I’m already liking this assertive Tina and the direction your taking the story. Also enjoyed your previous 2 snippets. Thanks!
Lol, Just when it was really getting good. I look forward to more.
Great start, pseud. I’ll be looking for more of this one when you can. Cheers
I’m guessing it might be Alice in her no sense of bounderies way. Or did Tina not have her phone on? Anyway, pity about the interuption.
tbc? ARE YOU F****N’ KIDDING ME?please continue straight away!!great start.x.x.
O.K. pseud, that was a mean place to stop. Of course you have to continue this story. I think that we might have a little Bette jealousy on the horizon…jealous Bette…you gotta love her!
omg is right!!! lol