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“I suppose that is an occupational hazard of motherhood.” Karen filled her plate, setting the dishes down, far enough out of reach of the child. Then she put a small amount of wine in one of the glasses. She waited for Tina to put the plate in front of the child, and then handed over the glass. “Try this?”
Tina swirled the wine in the glass, looking at the color. She took a sniff, then a sip. “Hmm. That’s a lovely choice.”
She held out the glass. Karen poured in more wine prior to filling her own. “I wish I could say it was anything but a lucky guess.”
“Take credit,” Tina said, turning her attentions back to Angelica. Then she noticed her guest wasn’t eating. “Please, start in.”
“Are you sure?”
“Please. Like I said, for me, cold food is normal.”
To this, Angelica gave a small laugh.
“Something tells me, it will be for some time to come.”
“Seems that way,” Tina agreed.
Dinner continued with light conversation. Afterwards, Angelica was set back to her toys as Karen gave Tina a hand cleaning up the dishes.
“Thanks,” Karen said, handing over the stack of plates for Tina to load into the dish washer.
“It was nice to have a guest over. We rarely have company.”
“That’s too bad.”
Tina motioned towards her daughter. “She splits time between here and her other mother’s. I think most of our friends are more comfortable going there.”
“Their loss.”
With the dishes put away and the table cleared, Tina wasn’t quite sure of the protocol. It was rare that anyone was over, not just friends. And while she wouldn’t have considered this evening, strictly speaking, a date, she and her guest had fallen quickly into a pattern of light flirting.
With Tina leading the way, the two of them took their glasses with the remains of the merlot and went to the living room where Angelica was busily working on one of her puzzles.
“You have some interesting work on the walls.”
The few people who were over, other than Bette, had never before taken notice of the assortment of paintings. “Do you collect art?”
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You left it hanging like this?? LOL whata great start and tina needs to have some fun one in a while! :)
it sounds unaminous (sp). your kidding right. more please!!! thx
I am guessing that Bette has a key to Tina’s place and that she just got a taste of what it is like for Tina to see her with Jodie. Great beginning!
i hope it’s bette and she gets jealous…i’m interested to see where the story’s going
This is intersting and please post more, thanks!
TBC YES
Your story sounds interesting. It would be good if you develop more your idea. So far, it’s coming along fine. Yep. Please continue. PPS Lucero & Marsha – from Mexico City
amazing start. i really hope that you keep going.
Watch it was probably Alice coming over because Tina didn’t answer her phone call or something. lol Looks interesting so far!
Looking very interesting, hope you continue, hopefully its Alice paying a visit. Thanks
God I hope Bette doesnt have a key to Tina’s place. Tina needs to have a little fun once in awhile!
This is a great start! I think I like the neighbor since we happen to share the same name. I bet Bette’s the one at the door. PPS!!
Good start! PPS
Maybe? Such a tease, of course you should continue… It’s a great begining.
Oh please do continue. Glad to see Tina taking a chance and trying to move on. Can’t wait to see who came through the door, so PPVS!!! Thanks
I’m already liking this assertive Tina and the direction your taking the story. Also enjoyed your previous 2 snippets. Thanks!
Lol, Just when it was really getting good. I look forward to more.
Great start, pseud. I’ll be looking for more of this one when you can. Cheers
I’m guessing it might be Alice in her no sense of bounderies way. Or did Tina not have her phone on? Anyway, pity about the interuption.
tbc? ARE YOU F****N’ KIDDING ME?please continue straight away!!great start.x.x.
O.K. pseud, that was a mean place to stop. Of course you have to continue this story. I think that we might have a little Bette jealousy on the horizon…jealous Bette…you gotta love her!
omg is right!!! lol