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Closure – Chapter 32
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Alice called each of her friends to ask them to meet her at The Planet this morning. She carefully timed the calls so that her friends would get the message either on their answering machines or voice mail. She didn’t want to answer any questions. Alice couldn’t help but think about the last time she called her friends like this. She hoped this time would not start her on as bad a path.
Alice got there first and staked out a good table. The rest of the gang showed up over the next half-hour and tried to pass the time with light talk until they were all together. Dana was the last to arrive. Normally when Alice called, she would break land-speed records to be with her. But, something told her that she might not like what this meeting was about.
Alice had avoided Dana for the last couple days. Calls were returned belatedly and arrangements to meet for lunch or dinner were cancelled by the writer. Dana knew Alice was struggling with something and, for whatever reason, could not confide in her.
Dana gave Alice a strained smile and a kiss on the cheek when she arrived and then took the last empty chair at the table. Alice looked around the table at these people who really were closer than her own family and hoped they wouldn’t hate her for what she was going to say.
Alice took a deep breath. “OK.” She gave the group a wan smile. “You probably all know that I have been talking with the prosecutor on Jackie’s case.” Dana reached over and gave Alice’s hand a squeeze. Alice relished the feeling since she knew Dana would not like what she was going to say.
“I have agreed to a plea which will minimize the time Jackie spends in jail. She will spend a maximum of 4 months — it will probably be much less with good behavior.” Alice could see all her friends sit back in their seats as they absorbed the news. There was one person that she really worried about. She looked at Dana and saw total surprise and then absolute fury.
Dana pushed her chair back roughly from the table and stormed out of The Planet. Alice did not try to follow. She knew she had disappointed Dana deeply. She just hoped to have a chance to explain once Dana cooled off.
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Oh my goodness! That was exhausting for me, so i cant even imagine how it felt for Alice and Dana. Dana is so hot headed sometimes, i love her though…and Alice! Maybe one day our beloved Danish will learn to communicate but if they dont..well that’s fine too! You are doing such a wonderful job and i look forward to each and every post. Keep it Up because we all love you for it! THANK YOU!
so fuckin cute indeed. love it magoose, cant wait for more!
Hi MaGoose, great update again. I’m glad Dana went back to talk to Alice. (And that Jackie is getting the punishment she deserves in jail… I know.. I’m bad hehehe.)By the way the daisy comment reminded me a bit of “You’ve Got Mail” ;) Loved it, PPS??
Double WOW, so proud that alice as able to confront jackie.. that was very important step to take!! understand dana’s reaction… great update :)
Yessss, boy was i glad wen i saw and update for ur story lol. And wat a fantastic chapter!! Again u portrayed them perfectly. I can so see why Dana reacted like tht as well anyone tht cares for someone deeply probably would have done the same. Alice is so brave to have done that a completely the better person to do tht for Jackie. Also loved the comment about the Daises, simples things can always have a stronger impact and tht was so sweet tht she remembers things like tht :) Cant wait to see wat happens next pure genius lol x x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next pps I love it great update
wonderful – that’s all I can say
great great great!!!!! It takes a big person to do what Alice did..there’s a line from my other fav show…you don’t forgive someone because they deserve it but because they need it.
I’ll have you know that the only reason I haven’t written the biopsy results yet is because I don’t know what they are! Lol. I love this chapter, not that that’s saying much since I always do. I’m glad Alice managed to face one of her demons on her own. It’s a little sad knowing that Jackie’s in such a bad place, which I know makes no sense. Still, I hate seeing anyone suffer. I’m glad Dana finally realized she was being a jerk. Hopefully the two of them can keep growing. Thanks!
Hello MaGoose, that was just so very powerful… pfftt my comments cannot compare to the emotional journey that your writing is filled with. I can totally understand Dana’s reaction… it is so very human and so very much the love she holds for Alice that causes her to react in such a volatile fashion. Alice’s decision just shows you how much humanity she has… even after everything she cannot bare to have that kind of emotional devastation on her hands. The result far outweigh the potential bumps… this is freaking amazing… keep up the amazing job here… you are brilliant my friend… I’m loving this completely. Sincerely, JC
ok so I got shamefully behind on my reading…sorry! These last few chapters were fantastic. I particularly liked this last one. The fact that Dana messed up a little makes her human. The fact that she’s able to realise she was in the wrong and go back and try and fix it gives me hope that these two might actually be evolving enough in your story to have a good relationship some day…soon maybe?!!
Soooo…I get that Alice needed to confront Jackie on her own, but do you think our girls will ever learn to talk to each other BEFORE the inevitable misunderstanding? Well, if they did, they wouldn’t be our Danish, would they? It was good to see the family step in for them both this time…and to see them get it right themselves, eventually. Looking forward to the next step in their road to recovery and redemption. PPS!
WOOT. I so love you even more now. A nice long good update with crying sadness happiness. I love it. It makes me happy. Okay okay i know i have been lazy lately I am off tomorrow so tonight is going to be writeathon