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Closure – Chapter 32
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“It’s not like she is opening the cell door and letting her go. I know Alice, though, and I know there must be a reason.”
Dana looked at Shane pointedly. “She didn’t tell you?”
“No.” Shane shook her head sadly. “She ran out of The Planet right after you did.” Dana jumped to her feet and opened the door to get inside and grab her car keys.
“How could you guys have let her go off like that? I never would have left. I thought you would watch her-”
Shane grabbed Dana’s arm and swung her around. “You are not the only one that cares for Alice, you know. I came after your sorry ass and Bette and Tina went after Alice. She is staying with them tonight.” Shane said heatedly.
Dana dropped her head in embarrassment. “God, Shane. I am so sorry. I just… I can’t seem to process this.” Dana gave Shane a pathetic, lost gaze.
Dana was quickly engulfed in a hug from her friend. “I know, Dana. I know you are both going through a lot.”
They stood there for a couple minutes and then Shane felt the athlete crying. “What is it, Dane?”
“I left her, Shane. After all I have said and all I tried to do, I left her when things got rough. I promised her I wouldn’t. She’ll never want me back, now.”
Shane rubbed her friend’s back. “Dana. Don’t ever think that. You guys have a bond that can’t be broken. No matter how hard the two of you try.” This got a slight laugh out of Dana. “You are two halves of a whole and the sooner you guys realize that, the better.”
“I need to go see her.” Dana said as she headed to the door to leave.
“Yes, you do.” Shane stopped her short. “But first you need to clean up and get your mind in a space where you will listen to what she has to say and be prepared to talk about it with her.” Dana nodded her head in acknowledgement of this. “And bringing her some flowers or some other type of present might not be a bad idea.” Dana grinned at this.
“You are probably right.”
“Go get cleaned up and I’ll follow you over to Bette and Tina’s.”
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Oh my goodness! That was exhausting for me, so i cant even imagine how it felt for Alice and Dana. Dana is so hot headed sometimes, i love her though…and Alice! Maybe one day our beloved Danish will learn to communicate but if they dont..well that’s fine too! You are doing such a wonderful job and i look forward to each and every post. Keep it Up because we all love you for it! THANK YOU!
so fuckin cute indeed. love it magoose, cant wait for more!
Hi MaGoose, great update again. I’m glad Dana went back to talk to Alice. (And that Jackie is getting the punishment she deserves in jail… I know.. I’m bad hehehe.)By the way the daisy comment reminded me a bit of “You’ve Got Mail” ;) Loved it, PPS??
Double WOW, so proud that alice as able to confront jackie.. that was very important step to take!! understand dana’s reaction… great update :)
Yessss, boy was i glad wen i saw and update for ur story lol. And wat a fantastic chapter!! Again u portrayed them perfectly. I can so see why Dana reacted like tht as well anyone tht cares for someone deeply probably would have done the same. Alice is so brave to have done that a completely the better person to do tht for Jackie. Also loved the comment about the Daises, simples things can always have a stronger impact and tht was so sweet tht she remembers things like tht :) Cant wait to see wat happens next pure genius lol x x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next pps I love it great update
wonderful – that’s all I can say
great great great!!!!! It takes a big person to do what Alice did..there’s a line from my other fav show…you don’t forgive someone because they deserve it but because they need it.
I’ll have you know that the only reason I haven’t written the biopsy results yet is because I don’t know what they are! Lol. I love this chapter, not that that’s saying much since I always do. I’m glad Alice managed to face one of her demons on her own. It’s a little sad knowing that Jackie’s in such a bad place, which I know makes no sense. Still, I hate seeing anyone suffer. I’m glad Dana finally realized she was being a jerk. Hopefully the two of them can keep growing. Thanks!
Hello MaGoose, that was just so very powerful… pfftt my comments cannot compare to the emotional journey that your writing is filled with. I can totally understand Dana’s reaction… it is so very human and so very much the love she holds for Alice that causes her to react in such a volatile fashion. Alice’s decision just shows you how much humanity she has… even after everything she cannot bare to have that kind of emotional devastation on her hands. The result far outweigh the potential bumps… this is freaking amazing… keep up the amazing job here… you are brilliant my friend… I’m loving this completely. Sincerely, JC
ok so I got shamefully behind on my reading…sorry! These last few chapters were fantastic. I particularly liked this last one. The fact that Dana messed up a little makes her human. The fact that she’s able to realise she was in the wrong and go back and try and fix it gives me hope that these two might actually be evolving enough in your story to have a good relationship some day…soon maybe?!!
Soooo…I get that Alice needed to confront Jackie on her own, but do you think our girls will ever learn to talk to each other BEFORE the inevitable misunderstanding? Well, if they did, they wouldn’t be our Danish, would they? It was good to see the family step in for them both this time…and to see them get it right themselves, eventually. Looking forward to the next step in their road to recovery and redemption. PPS!
WOOT. I so love you even more now. A nice long good update with crying sadness happiness. I love it. It makes me happy. Okay okay i know i have been lazy lately I am off tomorrow so tonight is going to be writeathon