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Closure – Chapter 32
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Alice looked at the rest of the group with tears starting in her eyes. “Anyway… I’m sorry if you guys are upset. I… I wanted to explain… But…” Alice breath hitched and she abruptly got up from the table and ran for the door. Bette, Tina and Shane sat there for just a moment and then stood up themselves. Shane said “I got Dana.” Bette and Tine nodded and said “We’ll take care of Alice.”
Shane said as they were leaving “Could these guys make it any harder on themselves?”
Shane could not find Dana, so, she took up a seat on Dana’s front stoop — correctly realizing that the athlete would have to come home at some point. She pulled out a cigarette and settled in to wait.
Dana was 5 miles into her 3 mile run. No matter how far she ran she couldn’t get away from her thoughts. How could Alice have let that bitch off the hook? Did she still care for Jackie? Shit. Did she want to get back with her? Dana wanted that cunt buried so deep in the prison system that she would never see the light of day again.
Bette and Tina had followed Alice to her apartment. The writer was inconsolable. All the progress she and Dana had made and all her hopes for the future seemed to be dashed in one moment. Yet, Alice knew she made the right decision. She just needed to explain to Dana.
The girls were worried about leaving Alice alone and carefully persuaded her to come over to their house for dinner and to spend the night. Alice ate hardly anything, even with Angie there to encourage her to eat the green things so she could get dessert. Alice went to bed as soon as he could. She lay there crying and thinking about how she might have handled the news and if there was any way to fix it.
Dana finally showed up at the condo. She was exhausted, still furious, and confused as all hell. But she was not surprised to see Shane on her stoop.
“How could she, Shane? How? That bitch beat her. *Beat her!* And she lets her off scot free?” Dana was looking at her hands and clenching and unclenching her fists.
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Oh my goodness! That was exhausting for me, so i cant even imagine how it felt for Alice and Dana. Dana is so hot headed sometimes, i love her though…and Alice! Maybe one day our beloved Danish will learn to communicate but if they dont..well that’s fine too! You are doing such a wonderful job and i look forward to each and every post. Keep it Up because we all love you for it! THANK YOU!
so fuckin cute indeed. love it magoose, cant wait for more!
Hi MaGoose, great update again. I’m glad Dana went back to talk to Alice. (And that Jackie is getting the punishment she deserves in jail… I know.. I’m bad hehehe.)By the way the daisy comment reminded me a bit of “You’ve Got Mail” ;) Loved it, PPS??
Double WOW, so proud that alice as able to confront jackie.. that was very important step to take!! understand dana’s reaction… great update :)
Yessss, boy was i glad wen i saw and update for ur story lol. And wat a fantastic chapter!! Again u portrayed them perfectly. I can so see why Dana reacted like tht as well anyone tht cares for someone deeply probably would have done the same. Alice is so brave to have done that a completely the better person to do tht for Jackie. Also loved the comment about the Daises, simples things can always have a stronger impact and tht was so sweet tht she remembers things like tht :) Cant wait to see wat happens next pure genius lol x x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next pps I love it great update
wonderful – that’s all I can say
great great great!!!!! It takes a big person to do what Alice did..there’s a line from my other fav show…you don’t forgive someone because they deserve it but because they need it.
I’ll have you know that the only reason I haven’t written the biopsy results yet is because I don’t know what they are! Lol. I love this chapter, not that that’s saying much since I always do. I’m glad Alice managed to face one of her demons on her own. It’s a little sad knowing that Jackie’s in such a bad place, which I know makes no sense. Still, I hate seeing anyone suffer. I’m glad Dana finally realized she was being a jerk. Hopefully the two of them can keep growing. Thanks!
Hello MaGoose, that was just so very powerful… pfftt my comments cannot compare to the emotional journey that your writing is filled with. I can totally understand Dana’s reaction… it is so very human and so very much the love she holds for Alice that causes her to react in such a volatile fashion. Alice’s decision just shows you how much humanity she has… even after everything she cannot bare to have that kind of emotional devastation on her hands. The result far outweigh the potential bumps… this is freaking amazing… keep up the amazing job here… you are brilliant my friend… I’m loving this completely. Sincerely, JC
ok so I got shamefully behind on my reading…sorry! These last few chapters were fantastic. I particularly liked this last one. The fact that Dana messed up a little makes her human. The fact that she’s able to realise she was in the wrong and go back and try and fix it gives me hope that these two might actually be evolving enough in your story to have a good relationship some day…soon maybe?!!
Soooo…I get that Alice needed to confront Jackie on her own, but do you think our girls will ever learn to talk to each other BEFORE the inevitable misunderstanding? Well, if they did, they wouldn’t be our Danish, would they? It was good to see the family step in for them both this time…and to see them get it right themselves, eventually. Looking forward to the next step in their road to recovery and redemption. PPS!
WOOT. I so love you even more now. A nice long good update with crying sadness happiness. I love it. It makes me happy. Okay okay i know i have been lazy lately I am off tomorrow so tonight is going to be writeathon