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Closure – Chapter 33
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Alice and Dana woke up at almost the same time the next morning. Angelica was roaming the hallway and singing…something. Dana looked at Alice with her morning hair and squinty eyes and thought she had never seen anything more beautiful.
“Morning, Al.” Dana said sweetly with a warm smile as she reached out to brush some of the hair out of Alice’s eyes.
“Morning, Dane.” Alice responded with a smile of her own as she stretched and then got on her side to look at Dana. Her expression turned serious.
“I really am sorry about everything that happened yesterday-” Dana cut her off.
“I think we determined last night that we’re both sorry. Can I ask you one thing, though?”
“Anything, Dana. I know I haven’t been doing a good job with communicating with you the last couple days.” Alice said with a slight blush to her cheeks.
“Well… I was wondering why you didn’t tell me about the negotiations. I mean. I know it is your decision, but, I hate that you had to go through it alone and I hope it wasn’t because of me. I mean… I would hate to think you were worried about upsetting me with the process or something.”
Alice gave Dana a soft smile. “It had nothing to do with you, Dane. You have been completely supportive of me through everything. I know I could have asked you to help me and you would have done it without question.” Alice’s face got serious and thoughtful as she tried to put figure out the right words to use to explain.
“You know how I have struggled to make decisions.” Dana gave an encouraging nod and said “You are getting so much better, though.”
Alice gave a wry smile. “Maybe at picking up something for dinner or choosing a movie, but, the big ones are still hard.” Alice lowered her eyes and Dana reached over to pull her tight and softly stroke her back as she nuzzled into Dana’s neck to continue her story.
I really needed to make the decision on my own. I am sure I drove my therapist to a therapist with my overanalyzing every aspect.” Dana and Alice shared a grin at this. “Then I remembered something you said once.” Dana looked both surprised and pleased that she helped Alice in some way. “You told me that one of your coaches said you should keep it simple. I stopped and just thought how I would feel one way or the other and then I knew what the choice should be.”
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Wonderful – again you have surpassed yourself – fantastic – encore – more – standing ovation – please post soon.
Hello again, I had to come back to comment on that scene at the end… the whole asking on the phone thing was so so so good… I love how cute these two are with each other and I absolutely love their honesty and playfulness… just another reason why you are a brilliant words smith my friend… just so passionate and fun. Sincerely, JC
YAY AN UPDATE!!! lol. Yet again another fantastic update at tht. Was reli sweet to have Angie come in, just like a perfect little family lol. Glad that they are communicating more easily and Dana was so completely honest without finding it hard to be :) So cute!! Cant wait for next post. :) x x
These two are so cute. I was lmao at the Auntie parts. And Dana still hasn’t mastered the ever-changing art of asking somebody out on a date. Bringing in Joyce was a nice touch. And friends really are always there for each other.
Hey MaGoose, I love your story. I’ve been reading for a while and you’ve become one of my favorite danish writers. I just create an account to comment on this.”Support Alice or answer to me!”
loved that part. Sorry for my english (I know it sucks)… Oh and please post soon :)
awesome chap….Dana asking Alice out was a complete flashback to highschool..too cute
YESSS! GOT WHAT I WANTED! Thank you so much,i was so excited to finally read that they are going to take another crack at their relationship! I’m just so happy to see them making steps to being whole again! Cant wait to see where this leads us! Great chapter, Love it!
Yay!!!!
Hello MaGoose, this was so perfect… yes in every relationship no matter what your status is you do need to talk and break through those barriers that separate you. I love how naively innocent Dana is… no matter what has happened during the time she wasn’t with Alice she still acts all giddy and lost when it comes to her… the fact that Dana stumbles asking Alice out on their “first” date is so cute and so believable considering the character… this is in fact the woman that she is “in Love” with and this interaction is just so cute. I’m curious when the time comes who will bare the children cause with how they interact with Angelica I think that they are destined to become amazing parents. Another Brilliant job my friend. Sincerely, JC
Grabs you by the shirt**WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME. I suppose it’s pay back for the other night when we were working on the story. BUT IT’S STILL NOT FAIR. anyway. I got out of work early. I am getting ready to work on New Life. So i need to get back to work.*shakes the almighty fist of doom* I STILL LOVE YOU THOUGH”Support Alice or answer to me!” that was great
another amazing update to my fav story! im so so so pleased that al and dana are finally gong on a date it makes me happy!lol and i loved the way Dana gave all her friends the look where she protected Alice! i cant wait for your next update! thank you x
Alice and dana going on a date…. yeah!! love angie reading with alice and dana. dana would make a great mom! dana is funny asking on the phone, cute… great update..!
Nicely done! You have given this pair enough space and time to be ready to date again. It’s going to be a very interesting journey particularly if they continue to communicate so openly and honestly with one another. Eagerly awaiting the date!
wwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhh great stuff
WHOOOHOOOOO!!!! Great update sweetie!!!! I was so thrilled to see Dana finally getting the courage to ask Al out!! THANKS!!! Did I tell u I LOVE this story? Well I do!! Thanks again!! PPVS (can’t wait)