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Closure – Chapter 33
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“OK. We’ll have some breakfast ready in about 15 minutes or so.” Bette stayed in the door for a few more moments, watching two of her closest friends with her daughter. She really was blessed with such an amazing group of friends.
It was a bedraggled group that gathered for a late breakfast. For as rough as Dana and Alice had it the day before, Bette, Tina and Shane were worse off from the drinking. Bette had already fed Angie and she was playing in the living room. Alice explained to all of them her decision and how she came to it. Dana sat right beside her and held her hand the entire time and occasionally stroked Alice’s back. Shane, Bette, and Tina could not mistake the look in Dana’s eyes that said “Support Alice or answer to me!” It would have been funny if the topic wasn’t so serious and important to Alice. Luckily, once Alice explained her decision, it was not hard to support her. They all wanted the best for Alice and they knew it would haunt her to be the cause of someone else’s pain.
The prosecutor offered a deal to Jackie with Alice’s approval. In addition to the jail time, she would be required to attend mandatory therapy upon release and also pay restitution to Alice. For her part, Jackie jumped at the deal. Besides cutting down her time in prison, it allowed her to stay at the county jail rather than going to the state prison. Jackie was a bully at heart and realized she would be chewed up and spit out if she went to prison — the abuse she got in the county jail would be magnified by 100. It wouldn’t be hard to keep the terms of the parole. The order for protection would be put back in place and it covered Alice and her friends. Jackie had no desire to get near any of them again.
One of the things Alice had included in the deal was that she be allowed to post the conviction information on her website. Anyone could find out about Jackie’s record with a simple Google search. Hopefully that would warn any future girlfriends of her history.
Joyce Wischnia worked closely with the prosecutor to craft the deal and make sure Jackie knew that any deviation from the details would put her behind bars. She drafted a separate civil agreement to make sure the restitution was paid to Alice. That part was Joyce’s idea. The whole situation had made her furious and she was determined to make Jackie pay for Alice’s medical bills, pain and suffering and the on-going therapy.
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Wonderful – again you have surpassed yourself – fantastic – encore – more – standing ovation – please post soon.
Hello again, I had to come back to comment on that scene at the end… the whole asking on the phone thing was so so so good… I love how cute these two are with each other and I absolutely love their honesty and playfulness… just another reason why you are a brilliant words smith my friend… just so passionate and fun. Sincerely, JC
YAY AN UPDATE!!! lol. Yet again another fantastic update at tht. Was reli sweet to have Angie come in, just like a perfect little family lol. Glad that they are communicating more easily and Dana was so completely honest without finding it hard to be :) So cute!! Cant wait for next post. :) x x
These two are so cute. I was lmao at the Auntie parts. And Dana still hasn’t mastered the ever-changing art of asking somebody out on a date. Bringing in Joyce was a nice touch. And friends really are always there for each other.
Hey MaGoose, I love your story. I’ve been reading for a while and you’ve become one of my favorite danish writers. I just create an account to comment on this.”Support Alice or answer to me!”
loved that part. Sorry for my english (I know it sucks)… Oh and please post soon :)
awesome chap….Dana asking Alice out was a complete flashback to highschool..too cute
YESSS! GOT WHAT I WANTED! Thank you so much,i was so excited to finally read that they are going to take another crack at their relationship! I’m just so happy to see them making steps to being whole again! Cant wait to see where this leads us! Great chapter, Love it!
Yay!!!!
Hello MaGoose, this was so perfect… yes in every relationship no matter what your status is you do need to talk and break through those barriers that separate you. I love how naively innocent Dana is… no matter what has happened during the time she wasn’t with Alice she still acts all giddy and lost when it comes to her… the fact that Dana stumbles asking Alice out on their “first” date is so cute and so believable considering the character… this is in fact the woman that she is “in Love” with and this interaction is just so cute. I’m curious when the time comes who will bare the children cause with how they interact with Angelica I think that they are destined to become amazing parents. Another Brilliant job my friend. Sincerely, JC
Grabs you by the shirt**WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME. I suppose it’s pay back for the other night when we were working on the story. BUT IT’S STILL NOT FAIR. anyway. I got out of work early. I am getting ready to work on New Life. So i need to get back to work.*shakes the almighty fist of doom* I STILL LOVE YOU THOUGH”Support Alice or answer to me!” that was great
another amazing update to my fav story! im so so so pleased that al and dana are finally gong on a date it makes me happy!lol and i loved the way Dana gave all her friends the look where she protected Alice! i cant wait for your next update! thank you x
Alice and dana going on a date…. yeah!! love angie reading with alice and dana. dana would make a great mom! dana is funny asking on the phone, cute… great update..!
Nicely done! You have given this pair enough space and time to be ready to date again. It’s going to be a very interesting journey particularly if they continue to communicate so openly and honestly with one another. Eagerly awaiting the date!
wwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhh great stuff
WHOOOHOOOOO!!!! Great update sweetie!!!! I was so thrilled to see Dana finally getting the courage to ask Al out!! THANKS!!! Did I tell u I LOVE this story? Well I do!! Thanks again!! PPVS (can’t wait)