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Closure – Chapter 33
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“I know you would have been supportive and tried to help me make the decision, but, I was worried about getting advice from anyone. Even if it was to help, it would have still felt out of my control. I just… I needed to make this decision on my own and know that it was completely my own decision. Does that make any sense?”
Dana gave a comforting smile. “It makes perfect sense. Thanks for explaining that part to me. I do still feel bad that I couldn’t have at least been there to distract you from your thoughts every now and then.”
“It was so hard to stay away from you and so hard to not lean on you. I hope you understand why I didn’t. I should have at least told you that I needed some alone time to make the decision.”
“Next time, honey, please do. I promise to respect your privacy, if that is what you want.” Dana paused for a moment. “I need you to know that you are not alone. You will always have me and you also have our friends. You never really were alone, but, we all did a poor job showing it before.”
Alice blushed and said. “I know you’re right and I’ll try my best. Sometimes it’s hard for me because I am used to taking care of myself.” Dana gave her a tender kiss on the top of her head. They lay there for several more minutes — just holding each other close.
The door cracked open and Angie’s face peered around it. Both the women on the bed looked over and saw Angie’s wide grin.
At Alice’s request of “Well get on up here then!” Angie ran into the room and, with Dana’s help, scrambled up on the bed. She had a book with her and Alice held her on her lap while Dana read it — complete with different voices for each character.
Bette came hurriedly up to the door. “Sorry, guys, I told her to stay out because her Auntie Alice and Auntie Dana were sleeping, but, I think she just heard the part about you guys being in here.”
“No problem, Bette, we were up anyway.” Dana said — stretching the truth a bit since it was time they should have gotten up anyway.
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Wonderful – again you have surpassed yourself – fantastic – encore – more – standing ovation – please post soon.
Hello again, I had to come back to comment on that scene at the end… the whole asking on the phone thing was so so so good… I love how cute these two are with each other and I absolutely love their honesty and playfulness… just another reason why you are a brilliant words smith my friend… just so passionate and fun. Sincerely, JC
YAY AN UPDATE!!! lol. Yet again another fantastic update at tht. Was reli sweet to have Angie come in, just like a perfect little family lol. Glad that they are communicating more easily and Dana was so completely honest without finding it hard to be :) So cute!! Cant wait for next post. :) x x
These two are so cute. I was lmao at the Auntie parts. And Dana still hasn’t mastered the ever-changing art of asking somebody out on a date. Bringing in Joyce was a nice touch. And friends really are always there for each other.
Hey MaGoose, I love your story. I’ve been reading for a while and you’ve become one of my favorite danish writers. I just create an account to comment on this.”Support Alice or answer to me!”
loved that part. Sorry for my english (I know it sucks)… Oh and please post soon :)
awesome chap….Dana asking Alice out was a complete flashback to highschool..too cute
YESSS! GOT WHAT I WANTED! Thank you so much,i was so excited to finally read that they are going to take another crack at their relationship! I’m just so happy to see them making steps to being whole again! Cant wait to see where this leads us! Great chapter, Love it!
Yay!!!!
Hello MaGoose, this was so perfect… yes in every relationship no matter what your status is you do need to talk and break through those barriers that separate you. I love how naively innocent Dana is… no matter what has happened during the time she wasn’t with Alice she still acts all giddy and lost when it comes to her… the fact that Dana stumbles asking Alice out on their “first” date is so cute and so believable considering the character… this is in fact the woman that she is “in Love” with and this interaction is just so cute. I’m curious when the time comes who will bare the children cause with how they interact with Angelica I think that they are destined to become amazing parents. Another Brilliant job my friend. Sincerely, JC
Grabs you by the shirt**WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME. I suppose it’s pay back for the other night when we were working on the story. BUT IT’S STILL NOT FAIR. anyway. I got out of work early. I am getting ready to work on New Life. So i need to get back to work.*shakes the almighty fist of doom* I STILL LOVE YOU THOUGH”Support Alice or answer to me!” that was great
another amazing update to my fav story! im so so so pleased that al and dana are finally gong on a date it makes me happy!lol and i loved the way Dana gave all her friends the look where she protected Alice! i cant wait for your next update! thank you x
Alice and dana going on a date…. yeah!! love angie reading with alice and dana. dana would make a great mom! dana is funny asking on the phone, cute… great update..!
Nicely done! You have given this pair enough space and time to be ready to date again. It’s going to be a very interesting journey particularly if they continue to communicate so openly and honestly with one another. Eagerly awaiting the date!
wwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhh great stuff
WHOOOHOOOOO!!!! Great update sweetie!!!! I was so thrilled to see Dana finally getting the courage to ask Al out!! THANKS!!! Did I tell u I LOVE this story? Well I do!! Thanks again!! PPVS (can’t wait)