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Eight
“Carmen, Carmen….so delicious and untrustworthy. You tell me first. Tell me how you got the nerds in Bioware to do anything except jerk off to Seven of Nine.”
Alice. This is all her fault. If you track the number of events they will count down to zero start over and point directly to her. I needed something from her and this conversation needed to happen. Shane likes to kill people. It’s what she’s good at. I like to become someone else. Alice, well she likes to mess with people. She thinks she’s messing with me; the only problem is that she has no idea what I am capable of.
“At Survivalism training Shane and I would meet up….I let them watch….well I knew they where watching some things and I let them watch others. Shane and I, we had ways of getting past things.”
“Sure Carmen sure. So what do you want?”
“I want to know why you messed up Shane.”
“Carmen let me be really frank with you. You and your brain dead lover where already messed up. I am a numbers cruncher, I do paper work…I am not some messed up crazy teen killer like you two. I didn’t do anything to Shane that she didn’t do to herself.”
“I know about your husband. I know that he was doubling up on us. And I know that Shane killed him and wasn’t supposed to come back.”
“So what.”
“Touchy subject your dead hubby.”
“What do you want Carmen I don’t have all day here.”
“Its funny hanging out with the Bioware guys talking Number Six and all it got me thinking about head trauma and it got me thinking that your Hubby wouldn’t have crossed the line without a way back. He made the cocktails, he was the Bartender….he broke Shane and he knew that there needed to be a way to fix her….so he sold it to the highest bidder and his name is Pavel Afansankov isn’t it?”
“I am still waiting for you to tell what it is that you want. Like today maybe.”
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Goddamn! I read your first notes, then I read your second notes anyway. (I’m such a terrible listener, but I’m glad I did it.) I think I get what you mean about them being closer, and I think you’ve been doing it throughout the story (in other stories too). I mean, extraordinary circumstances create extraordinary bonds. I could be wrong, but I don’t like to think so. Never do. ;) Hm, I think I’ll come back and read the story later so the notes don’t influence my reading. . . plus it helps to ration the story until August.
I am so excited that YOU are back with a new story!! I don’t visit this site that often so I didn’t know that you are posting again until Ch 6!! I love this series and love your writing… It’s refreshing to read something like this other than fluffy stuff. Shane and Carmen have suffered so much in this story… I don’t care if it’s happy ending, just relieve them from their pain please!! I like how you start to write some chapters from Carmen’s POV too. So she is trying to save Shane!! I hope Shane will understand that and start to trust her again… I am sure both had/have done things that they are not proud of but I sense that they want to be together… they just want to be together and forget their past. Why can’t people just leave them alone?! We have to wait 3 weeks for the next update? You are killing me here…
Your note is kinda cipher to me. I dont get it as a spoiler. I am not smart obviously. BTW I hope there is more flashback. But I have to wait for next chapter for 3 weeks and I need to plan my vacation instead of wandering here. Wish your great break.
ohh and…. fuckiing loving this.. hate that i can’t get this story out of my head lol
okk i have to admit sometimes i dont understand what you’re saying… that makes me go back and read it again and again… then when i get it i cant get it out of y head…. it happens to me every-time.