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Instinct part 11
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a Little note… people are talking about taking out the thing that counts the views, that discourage the authors but what i think s the exact opposite… when i don’t get much comments which i get not much but i do (so please people comment) what gets me going is the views if it wasn’t for that trust me i wouldn’t be writing right now… so please speak your mind here
http://discussion.l-word.com/viewtopic.php?p=410512#410512 in the forum
help us in this case me because in all honestly if they take out the views i’m gonna need more comments and if i don’t get comments well with all honesty i’ll be gone… because i do this for you guys and if i don’t know how you respond to them what gives? anyways thank you for hearing me out and enjoy the new update… comments at the END PEOPLE!!
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Change is inevitable. Innovation is everything. Nothing remains the same for long. We either adapt to change….. or we get left behind.
We don’t like it. We fear it. But we can’t stop it from coming.
But here is the truth, sometimes the more things change, the more it stays the same. We either adapt to change or we get left behind right.? But sometimes… uh sometimes… change is good. Sometimes change is…. Everything.
And right now I shouldn’t be concern about changing. I should be concern about being so fucking late.
“Baby can you slow down please, if you keep this up we are going to be the ones going to the OR not Shane”
“If only you could have waited to get in my pants a little longer, we could have been well rested and ready to get up in the morning but no…. fuck I have to see her before she has the operation”
“You will”
Fuck, fuck fuck…. I hope she hasn’t gone in yet… I’m driving so fucking fast in this peace of shit I rented… it doesn’t go faster than 90Mpr… I get there and leave Niky looking for parking while I run in the hospital, take the elevator and when I finally get to her room there’s nobody there
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I loved this chapter!! The end was brilliant..damn you can write girl!:D
it was a sad as well though.. you won’t let Shane die right??;D
wow, what a great chapter! please let Shane be ok! and please update soon!
Hey, baby-gurl!!! I’m lovin diz entire fic!!! I know you want let my gurl Shane die …. cuz I mean …. dat’z jus …. well sad, ~nervous laugh~ But yeah, I’m lovin diz and keep up da fan-fuckin-tastic work. Whelp, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya eva need anything, babez ;-)
I love your story, great chapter. Don´t you dare killing Shane ;-)). And puh, that´s some tough stuff for Carmen to deal with.
Hey addicttosharmen :) I loved this update and I just love this whole story! It´s the kind of narrative I like, the stream of conciousness which is often used (I don`t know though if this is the exact term). When I read your story everything seems so real, like I`m personally be on hand. And I love this! Please do not compare Sharmen fanfics with Tibette fics on this board because this site is overloaded with Tibette stories and, for that matter, with Tibette fans so it`s clear that those fanfictions always get more comments than Sharmen (or another pairing) stories. But that doesn`t mean that people don`t pay attention and don`t love your fic. Some people just do not write comments in principle. Did you ever think about posting your fanfictions in a forum for Sharmen stories? http://s15.invisionfree.com/ShaneCarmen/index.php? for example is a great site (sorry for the promotion if you don`t want it). I`sure that you would get more comments over there! Anywasy, this was, as I said, a great chapter and I really hope you continue this story!! Mona-Lisa
OK, this was now definitely the longest comment I`ve ever written lol
i love the way you write. it just cuts to the bone.. so real, so true. and finally carmen comes clean with nikki. she can’t keep her feelings locked forever and too bad for nikki, perfect as she may be, sometimes love just doesnt work that way. and shane can’t die! she has too much to live for now. i agree with Mona-Lisa88. this website is loaded with tibette fans (nth against them) but maybe you can consider posting your stories at the sharmen forum ((: you’re a great writer no matter the amount of your comments.
Whew, damn can’t believe Carm got that out in one breath, really feel for her she’s got so much going through her head and heart. Excellant chapter