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    Instinct part 11

    Story written on July 8, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=70209
    Author Notes:

    The more things change, the more it stays the same

     

    “Fuck!” nonono…. This can’t be happening I had… I had to talk to her. I’m scared and I don’t know what to do. I go to the empty bed and I lay down there crying

     

    “Excuse me” a nurse says

     

    “I’m sorry… I was looking for Shame… she, she had to go on surgery”

     

    “Oh you’re Carmen?” my eyes light up “They are waiting for you in the 3erd floor she’s not gonna have the operation unless she sees you” I get up and start running, I take the elevator and when I arraived in the floor, I start running again not knowing where to go, I yelled

     

    “SHANE?”  a nurse points out a room and when I get there I see her.

     

    “It’s about time” Alice said

     

    “Guys” Shane says and they all get up and start to leave

     

     “I don’t want to loose you” Jenny says to Shane

     

    “You wont… I’m not finished yet” they kissed and she leaves… leaving us alone

     

    ‘Hey…” I said walking towards her

     

    “Hey".. she says grabbing my hand “You’re late”

     

    “I’m sorry…. Niky’s here” she looks at me serious… she looks in my eyes and she knew what did go down… why was I late

     

    “I understand…”

     

    “Please don’t… this is not about her right now… this is not about me being married, you being jealous…….. this is about you and me…”

     

    “You and me…”

     

    “That’s right…. You and me”

     

    “I love you… I always will”

     

    “I know.. I um… I love you too” she looks at me

     

    “….. Say it again” I get closer

     

    “I love you”

     

    “Again” I laugh and cry a little at the same time

     

    “I…. LOVE…. YOU, Shane” we kiss for what I though were hours and then we got interrupted

     

    “Um, I’m sorry but we have to take Shane to the OR now…” Izzy said. We look at each other smile and the smile after a minute, was washed out by the tears.

     

    “…. I’ll see you after ok…” I said

     

    “Yes, you will” I kiss her again and I turn around to leave

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    4. Hey, baby-gurl!!! I’m lovin diz entire fic!!! I know you want let my gurl Shane die …. cuz I mean …. dat’z jus …. well sad, ~nervous laugh~ But yeah, I’m lovin diz and keep up da fan-fuckin-tastic work. Whelp, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya eva need anything, babez ;-)

    6. Hey addicttosharmen :) I loved this update and I just love this whole story! It´s the kind of narrative I like, the stream of conciousness which is often used (I don`t know though if this is the exact term). When I read your story everything seems so real, like I`m personally be on hand. And I love this! Please do not compare Sharmen fanfics with Tibette fics on this board because this site is overloaded with Tibette stories and, for that matter, with Tibette fans so it`s clear that those fanfictions always get more comments than Sharmen (or another pairing) stories. But that doesn`t mean that people don`t pay attention and don`t love your fic. Some people just do not write comments in principle. Did you ever think about posting your fanfictions in a forum for Sharmen stories? http://s15.invisionfree.com/ShaneCarmen/index.php? for example is a great site (sorry for the promotion if you don`t want it). I`sure that you would get more comments over there! Anywasy, this was, as I said, a great chapter and I really hope you continue this story!! Mona-Lisa

    8. i love the way you write. it just cuts to the bone.. so real, so true. and finally carmen comes clean with nikki. she can’t keep her feelings locked forever and too bad for nikki, perfect as she may be, sometimes love just doesnt work that way. and shane can’t die! she has too much to live for now. i agree with Mona-Lisa88. this website is loaded with tibette fans (nth against them) but maybe you can consider posting your stories at the sharmen forum ((: you’re a great writer no matter the amount of your comments.

    9. Whew, damn can’t believe Carm got that out in one breath, really feel for her she’s got so much going through her head and heart. Excellant chapter

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