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Alice felt extremely uncomfortable. Dana had been staring at her for a while, and whenever Alice looked up Dana’s eyes would lock with hers. It was a strange look.. Alice looked up again. She promptly went back to her book, reading the same sentence six times before she got it. No. . .nevermind, she didn’t get it. Alice sighed, letting her thoughts drift. Dana was doing better now. Alice didn’t know any specifics. She never knew any specifics, the doctors never told her anything. But if Dana could spend the whole day looking at her… well, it was better than spending the whole day asleep. Progress.
Oh well, it’s not like I would understand what’s happening anyway. What am I doing here? I don’t know what to do. What to say. What are we? Best friends. Really messed up best friends. Should I say sorry for the stalking? I never did say sorry. No… that’ll probably bring up bad memories, and Dana will hate me again. Does she hate me now? Does she wish Lara was here? Of course she does, she broke up with me, not Lara. Well…
Different thoughts. Where the hell is Shane? Oh wait, it’s not time yet. What’s this book again? Ugh, who am I kidding, I can’t concentrate on a book. I’ll just keep it open. Something to look at. Hmm… maybe I should call Helena. She’s probably in a bad state right now. Later. Ugh, I hate this chair. I hate hospitals. I hate life. If there is a God, well, fuck you.
Alice looked up again. Dana was still looking at her. Alice held her gaze for a while before it felt too strange.
“Dana, why are you staring at me?” Alice blurted out.
Shit! She’s not supposed to be talking yet!
“Uh, ah, never mind, don’t worry about it, you don’t have to tell me, just don’t talk,” Alice hurriedly said. Ugh, I’m such a moron. She’s still looking at me. Concentrate on the book again.
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Alice.. she’s all the incentive I need. Fuck M&M’s. Good thing I have the excuse of not being able to talk. What would I tell her? ‘Oh, Alice, I’ve just realized how great you are, I don’t think I can live without you either, sorry for breaking your heart, can we still be together?’ Yeah, cause that’d make her jump up and kiss you and declare her unwavering love for you. Definitely. Even if we do love each other, it’s not like the last..what was it, a year.. it’s not like that never happened. I let her go. She’s not fucked up on pills anymore. She won’t want to be with me… I toyed with her emotions.
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Great update!!!! I just love this story,and wishing againu were the one writing the show !!! Thanks for keeping Dana ALIVE!!!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!! PPS
tunafish, I too watched S1 & S2 more times than S3. My sentiment precisely when thinking of A breaking down in the hospital hallway. The good thing about this fanfiction site is that there are so many Danish stories in which A & D persevered. Over the past year, I have spent lots of time enjoying these wonderful stories. Again I am deeply grateful all the past and present Danish writers for their dedication. Now back to this update, I echo what MaGoose said. I hope D would be well enough soon to start talking again and working out their issues. Thank you very much.
i really thought i had read this chapter but turns out i havent lol love the update
hey, great post! I like it when Alice was all nervous at Dana staring at her. Pretend to read a book? haha, soooo ALice. thanks. pps.
the update was wonderful and I loved how Dana don’t think she is good enough, I still think that she should have to fight for Alice this time around….So don’t kill off Dana and let her once she get better fight for the æove of her life..
What an excellent update! It seems so real: that Dana is trying to focus on Alice to keep her strength up to fight and that it is freaking Alice out a bit. You are doing a great job describing what they are thinking at this time and about the past. What you said about Dinah Shore is so true. Things would have been different if Dana spent some time playing the field after she was out. You did a great job with Shane’s visit, too. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks, tunafish!!