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Reconciliation Part 7
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Part 7
When they arrived back at the bar, Raquel found that her entourage were gone. Raquel walked back to her car, taking Helena by the hand with her. When she got to her car she said sadly to Helena, “I have to go. I have a very early flight and I haven’t finished packing. Will I see you when I get back?”
Helena, disappointed that their evening was about to end, commented, “You are like the wind. You just blow in and blow out don’t you?”
Raquel pulled Helena close and kissed her on the neck. With a smirk on her face she asked, “The next time I ‘blow in’ can I see you? I mean really see you.”
Helena smiled and ran her tongue lightly across Raquel’s upper lip. “You can ‘really see me’ now.”
“No, I want to see you properly, fully, all of you. Like the last time, at your beach house. I just can’t see you like that tonight. I can’t risk over sleeping again. The last time I was with you, I was hours late for my shoot. My agent is still screaming at me about it.”
“You don’t have to go to sleep. I can keep you up all night”, suggested Helena seductively as she nibbled on Raquel’s neck.
Raquel turned and captured her lips for a slow and lingering kiss. She pulled away from Helena and sighed, “You are making it really hard for me. As tempting as it seems, I can’t. Not tonight. Next time, definitely yes.”
“Raquel, I can’t believe you are leaving me this way. I had a wonderful time tonight. I was hoping we could be together.” Helena ran her hand over Rachel’s breast slightly touching her nipple, which hardened quickly to the touch. "I really don’t want to be alone tonight"
Raquel moaned softly but held Helena’s hand and kissed it. “I can’t tonight. I promise, next time.”
Helena stepped back and looked at Raquel curiously, “Is everything ok? I thought… I really would like…” She became frustrated with the way the night was ending and began to pull away from Raquel. She thought it was probably better she didn’t spend another night with Raquel. The defenses she had built up were slowly beginning to melt with the hot Brazilian standing on from oh her. “Never mind. I’ll see you when you get back. I hope you have a safe flight.”
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Helena needs to swallow her pride and face Dylan. She’s only kidding herself thinking all she wants is a one night love affair. Helena is a romantic and she should cut Raquel loose before she gets hurt. I think as long as Helana keeps running from Dylan and how she feels she’ll never have a healthy relationship.
Wow! I just got caught up and am absolutely loving the compelling stories you’ve been telling. If they do anything as intelligent and complex as this with Helena next season, I will be beyond pleased. Lil Ms. Raquel has her own drama..ummm hmm…that is so much like life. I love it! PPS
Helena and Dylan really needs to talk.Dylan did hurt Helena,yet she did return the pictures and money, Last but not least she did send her a DVD but Helena didnt look at it. If the keep on running,they will never have peace. thanks
One of the many things I love about your stories is that you allow the reader to get into the heads and hearts of your characters. There is so much to them under the surface and although you write the sex scenes well, they are so much the better because of the richness of the actual story. I do think Helena needs to be able to forgive Dylan in order to move on with her life, but Dylan needs to try everything before she gives up.
You know-I’m not sure if Helena is nursing a broken heart, a broken ego or a busted ass over Dylan. Was she truly in-love with Dylan? Personally, if I was Helena I’d feel like Dylan was harassing me at this point…and doing so to assuage her own guilt…I think Dylan has left her ‘need to talk’ a little too late…but who knows, its your story & Helena might just fall again…but whats that saying about ‘fool me once’????? Great stuff. PPS
I can only agree with all the others : Hel’s needs to get her act together and give Dylan a chance to explain no matter how hard it is. She obviously hasn’t found closure on her relationship with Dylan yet and maybe when she hears her out she might find that closure and move with her life (maning the Brazilian) pr she might realize she still loves Dylan very much and is willing to give her a second chance. Looking forward to ore.
Squirl, you make me think poor Helena is like one of those little paddleball games with the ball bouncing off the string getting wacked over and over again. Don’t know if Helena would feel better listening to Dylan or not but can someone at least get her a beer. Thank you, Md
Thank goodness Dylan took “the bull by the horns” – I was beginning to become disgusted with her nonchalant actions. As for our main lady – she needs to open her heart – as painful as it is – if she is to truly move forward. Obviously she still has feelings for Dylan or she wouldn’t be struggling so successfully. Meanwhile Helena is playing with Brazilian fire – this is indeed intriguing. She knows it and the Brazilian knows it as well. I wonder who is going to get burned? Or will they both?? Loving your character development, Squirl! I agree with Lobo, discovering the complexities of the characters is what makes the SL so much more meaningful. Hope you are able to post more soon. East